Death Talkies: Wheel of Time [Apr/04 P66] - Page 21

Originally posted by: Pebblez

This one, the untouchable, was my favorite till date. I am speechless.

Originally posted by: anu.happy4ever

Sookie,

Thank god it didn't end in his death! For some reason, I think the girl left him..dunno what makes me think like that..

True reasons for writing....though I am not a writer, but most of the reasons that you have given are the reasons why I write in my diary..

Anu

Originally posted by: Prasanthi

Madam!!! I assume that you forgot this one as you were too busy in the Music world. Its Ok.😉😛

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

Morning Star: comment

Well as far i get scene narrates the moment in which a person reaches to hell, and hell, instead of making him/her burn in agony seems to the person to be a monotonous (not in the bad way), calm place.. overall for the person, or whatever that beautiful thing with wings is. And on the opposite there's no oxygen, which means that there's no life... Well i think u really described very well the place. 😊

Well, something makes me think that this person, got hell for attempting numerously to give away his/her life, and rejecting it like that.

I just find this text, realli beautiful, i dont know what but it's got something that makes it realli attractive, and, well, of course the way u have written it, I dont know if u think the same, but it seems really difficult to me to write something like this, to express my imagination in a way that other can see and read what i want to mean.

Well, hats off to you.

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

Watercolor on canvas: comment

So this one is about a writter, that wants to write but gets no words. It cud be a writers block and it isn't. Coz they r realli many words, but none is the definitive, whereas a tear express it all.

And all the time the person is just relating it in such a beautiful talented way...

And well, at the end, this person wrote it, artists are meant to express what they hav inside, even if they don't know it, and thus, that's it the whole reason and happenings inside of this person, apology.

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

Untouchable, Sookie read it.. and soemwhere as a writer myself was wonderign if few of these perspective apply to me.. how things actions, smile do they affect my writing... would i sare soem of the lines with the world ever.. whcih i wrote with a perticular mood in mind from my personal life.. The some peice that u wrote brign a lot of things out..

I dont know the man.. and osmwhere i feel he is quite crazy but quite clean in his mind.. smoking thinking he is a observer and weird when world cant observe the inner self but surely try to judge by physcial apperance.

For me this piece was a transparent peice on the many creative heads writer u may say of arts parallel cinema if u go to see.. they r so much msilar ot this man.. not knowing where to go.. in writing btu flwoign around to see when somethign iss caguht something whic is beautifully penned with deep meanign to it..

The pen, the thoughts they could go together.. may be he love to be left alone with him and his pen where so much is said with others not having to say anythign on it.. words say an dnot him .. or his state..

its a welll written piece.. and am wondering how beautifully u can write the inner emotions .. i myself dont have words to define it.. but the way one feels sees things.. exactly touchign the sensivity of that emotions.. good work.. just keep writing.. as u do it so welll..

tc

Bhoomi