Death Talkies: Wheel of Time [Apr/04 P66] - Page 23

I don't know what to make of this one yet. . Each one perceives the other to be mad....but everyone is biased in their point of views..No one seems to know why she is what she is...or cares to...she is clearly not in the frame of mind to help herself...the world is full of such tales...the society creates its own outcasts..this reminds me of this mad woman..and i call her mad because her antics flashed before my eyes when i read your words...we only see the madness but don't know the cause...The last line opens up an interesting point - Insanity prevails humanity. ..i chose to interpret it as - insanity of the people defeats their humanity... She is the object of ridicule..In the end I feel sorry for her...fallen angel!

Originally posted by: sri_4

hey sookie*

so its a story about a girl -insane / not but avoided for sure..

no one really understands her true feeling do they..they just cant ignore her n hurt her,,,

i could actually visualise it...

nice one..

good wishes..😊

sri:-)

Originally posted by: *Nishi*

hey welcome to the writers corner.. i really really love your story.. its really dark and well written.. and beautiful 😳 yeah dark and mysterious.. i like that 😆 i like your style of writing too.. and using that font and cursive and everything.. hehe. i've only read the 2nd chpter so i'll just keep commenting in this post.. from what i've read so far this seems like a pretty awesome story. no wonder so many people like it 😃 keep it up 😃

edit** okay.. i've realized that your updates aren't the continuing ur original story.. they're different aren't they? are they just scenes or thoughts that you have and you write them down like this? like you turn in into a .. whole little story thing.. anyway i really like it. and i like it better this way than continuing from the first one. and they always end in some kind of death thing 😆 is that why its called death talkies..? a whole bunch of small short stories all involving some kind of misery or death? you're writing makes you seem a lot older than you probably are.. you're vocabulary and the way you look at life.. you just seem like this mysterious person with a bunch of ideas and different outlooks on life and the way things are.. and the way you express that into words is really interesting. its really different than anything i've ever seen here before.. you're writing is pretty awesome (im sure u already know that though lol) and i have to say the way you write makes me want to get to know you a little more as a frind.. sorry for rambling like that 😆 you do a great job.. keep it up please 😃👏 you really inspire me to do a better job as a writer.. i have a lot of ideas and things but its hard for me to express that clearly.. anyway. looking forward to your response 😊

Originally posted by: Mridhula

Insanity Prevails Humanity...that's probably my favourite line....

it was definitely clear that everyone misunderstood her....they perceive what the wish and see what the wish, which covers a blanket over the truth....

she never fell for it....she controls her own life but yet has not fully come to accept that others can't accept it.

she doesn't know what she is, it probably doesn't matter now because the one thing that did matter - her baby, is no longer with her....

very beautifully written....

Originally posted by: olive_green

I don't know what to make of this one yet. . Each one perceives the other to be mad....but everyone is biased in their point of views..No one seems to know why she is what she is...or cares to...she is clearly not in the frame of mind to help herself...the world is full of such tales...the society creates its own outcasts..this reminds me of this mad woman..and i call her mad because her antics flashed before my eyes when i read your words...we only see the madness but don't know the cause...The last line opens up an interesting point - Insanity prevails humanity. ..i chose to interpret it as - insanity of the people defeats their humanity... She is the object of ridicule..In the end I feel sorry for her...fallen angel!

Originally posted by: aish_punk

hey sookie..nice story..

the person seems to be a devil to everyone..but she's actually someone nice i think..but she's got into alchohol and she's just dirty..maybe she does'nt care about that or she cant afford gud stuff...but she does have a right to live ...why do people laugh n play pranks at her?..thats rude...

we cant expect people to love her either..but just let her be!

thnx 4 d PM

do write more

-aish

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

HI Sookie,

Somehow this remaind for me the most sad story of urs i read which made me feel sad ..not that it was so engrossign or detailign that made me feel it.. but surely the helpless state of makign soemone love and live life like anyone else deserves with a happy heart and mind. I guess somewhere this fear of been alone and wanting to be insane sometimes is the result of the unwillingness to handle thigns which we face with people whom we love around... i guess drinking behaviour allefforts to erase things we couldnt handle makes us go insane... the story was sad and for sure the society is least intersted ever in modern times to care a second thought for people like them walking fallign ont he streets..people look at them curiously , laugh and feel good about themselves as they r better off...

keep up ur work Sookie,

Bhoomi