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Posted: 3 years ago
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Chapter nine


Amrik was extremely shocked when his older sibling spilled the details of him(fateh) plotting with Gippy against Jasmin. He agreed to help them as the selfish woman had also indirectly used him for her past plottings. She should be punished. The plan was a little risky but they had to execute it without wasting time.


Virks had no choice but to invite the pandit for the marriage muhurat upon fateh's demand to unite with jasmin instantly. The pandit was bribed by gippy to provide the earliest dates.


The marriage was fixed in a week's time and tejo was shattered. She gathered herself strongly keeping angad's words in mind. Destiny will eventually unite her with fateh someday.


The wedding functions took place . Jasmin was the most happiest of the lot . The families were upset. Tejo didn't attend the functions giving excuse she was not well. Fateh didn't force her. He knew the reason and promised he would make her his in future after he got rid of jasmin once and for all. They would all live in peace.


On the day of the wedding , fateh was missing once again. Jasmin was stranded at the mandap, puzzled and upset. He made a mockery of her. Some guests taunted her. " Taste ur own medicine". Jasmin was determined to get married at any cost. As she stood up to find fateh, amrik stated loudly to all present that fateh had regained his memory and didn't want to marry jasmin. He just texted a message on amrik's phone.


Jasmin couldn't believe her ears. Fateh ditched her again.. She was revengeful . Just then amrik's words interrupted her thoughts and she was shocked

" Jasmin, i had liked u from those days but was afraid to tell u . i want to marry u. For ur information, I already got a canada visa and job. We can go there and live happily. I will fulfill ur dreams. Marry me, pls".

He showed her his passport and the docs. They were all fake , arranged by Gippy.


Virks and sandhus were silent. They were already informed about the plan a day before the marriage. Only tejo was not aware. She didn't attend the wedding as well. They were least worried of her interference. They agreed to play along to get rid of jasmin. Time for her to sow her seeds.


Mahi interrupted, " jasmin , marry my younger brother. He will fulfill ur dreams".

The others started supporting her. Simran, buzo , abhiraj and Harman.


Kushveer stated, " since my older son ditched u marry my younger son. I can understand u are humiliated being ditched twice so i have no objection"


Jasmin couldn't believe that kushveer singh virk , the person who hated her the most gave the green light to marry his son. Is this oldie for real??

"Who cares, i can fullfil my dreams with this boring amrik and carry out my revenge plan against his brother. I can also make their life hell. Take the chance. Don't waste it. Entry into Virks. Destroy them".


Jasmin agreed to marry amrik .


Will amrik marry her. What did gippy and fateh planned.


To be continued


(Chp ten already uploaded after nine)


Ps

Unfortunately there's a matured tag there when there was nothing such written. I don't understand what happened. U can still read though. Chapter ten is the climax. U can give ur reviews after reading)

Edited by Aniash - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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I just edited the end of part ten


Read again

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Tejo Fateh ko accept kare ya dono jaakar Ganga mai doob mare😝

I really really enjoyed this , the way you sequenced the events was brilliant👏👏

I can only dream of this onscreen , lmao makers are wasting Amrik too🤣

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Originally posted by: 08_maria

Tejo Fateh ko accept kare ya dono jaakar Ganga mai doob mare😝

I really really enjoyed this , the way you sequenced the events was brilliant👏👏

I can only dream of this onscreen , lmao makers are wasting Amrik too🤣


Tq dear ,🤩🤩

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Dear ones

The fiction completed

Ten chapters

U can read at ur leisure and comment later.

I was busy writing so couldn't tag for every update. Tagging is restricted.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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The edited part 10 is Zabardast 🤣

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Originally posted by: Aniash

I just edited the end of part ten


Read again

Oops KSV and Nimmo 😏 i think sarvi better stop fawning over jasmin and take look at this 😂😂

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I reread the last 2 parts ... n its amazing.. mazaa aa gaya...😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aniash

Chapter seven


6 pm at sandhus, Moga

Sisterly face off took place in the living room with the family trying to console the weeping tejo as her evil sister kept taunting her about how awful her(Tejo) fate was. She was destined to face only sorrow throughout her entire life.


Just then the engine of a car heard at the porch and seconds later angad walked in alone . He went to sandhus after visiting virks. He owned an apology to both families . Riya was with her grandma at his residence . The both went off to bed early feeling exhausted after the trip to home finally.


Tejo ran and hugged him tightly for a support. He neither reacted nor wrapped his arms around her for an emotional support. He knew fateh would regain his memory someday running after her and he(angad) will lose her forever. It was better to back off now then never. He was only gonna get pain if she returned to her ex. His love was one sided. She would never love him the same way he did.


As she released her grip , he smiled down looking at her face resting both his hands on her arms reassuring

" Tejoji , be patient. Everything will be alright".

Then she wished to meet riya at once but Sati interrupted that first she (tejo) needed to change her clothes.

" Remove the bridal attire , have some food and only then you can visit Riya".


Angad nodded in agreement when the upset mother signalled him for a support. Tejo hadn't eaten since morning. She looked weak.


As soon as the mother took her distraught daughter away and her evil sibling leaving the house to visit her friend, Sweety, rupi spoke to angad that he wanted to fix a remarriage date soonest possible.


Angad was silent. He had his own plans. That was to take riya and her granny with him to London to start a new begining all over again and leave the bitter past behind. He had already instructed his lawyers to submit an appeal to speed up the custody proceedings with Riya's grandma backing off , so he could take an exit instantly to his new destination.


9pm after dinner (virks residence)

He laid on his bed restless looking at jasmin's endless messages stating she loved him and was eager to marry him . She was taking advantage of his memory loss state.


It was an act of pretense. He knew everyone was hurt with his condition including tejo but he had to do it for their mental peace and happiness for long term as jasmin would never stop interferring with her endless plotting. He was pretty sure she was behind riya's kidnapping. She was evil and dangerous. He had to stop her and it had to be fast. Gippy had a solid plan.


The next three days were spent on outings with jasmin with him pretending to be cosy with her. It was difficult. He was dying ftom the inside as he loved her sibling deeply but he had no choice. This was the best way to gid rid of her(jasmin) once and for all. Destroy her .


Virks had to tolerate Jasmin visiting them with all her sweet talks of how her wedding with their son should be organized. Biji and babuji frequently visited the gurdwara praying for fateh's memory return before everything went chaos. Jasmin would ruin them.


Sandhus had to tolerate her tantrums . Tejo returned to college to keep herself busy and away from her wicked sibling. Fateh was busy wooing Jasmin. The academy work was handled by amrik and simran. Fateh was not made aware of the academy due to his memory loss.


At times he would sneak at the entrance to watch his students going through training sessions with a new coach. He missed the academy. He missed Tejo. It was really painful but he had to bear for their future happiness forever.


Angad received the date for the court hearing and it went smoothly. He won riya's custody. Tejo was kept in the dark. After returning from Moga, he sent riya and her granny the very next day to his friend's place at a nearby village to avoid tejo from meeting up with them and finding out that the hearing date was given and that riya would be taking off to London with him soon. He wasn't gonna marry her at any cost.


Whenever tejo rang, he made excuses that riya was at her friend's place. She was missing her mom and dad badly and would return in few days time.


The two men in her life were drifting away at the same time.


To be continued

( Chapter eight already updated on page eight)


Loved how angad is making distance from tejo 👏👏

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