Future tracks of UD ( a fan fiction)

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Posted: 3 years ago
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After a very long time i am writing a fan fiction since i wrote ' the bare back' when i joined the forum in those early days. I usually prefer one shot as they don't take much time. I have these two days off to myself and thought of doing one more fan fiction as 31 dec onwards i will be reporting to worksite.


The chapters are not long and not many. Just a few. This is the only forum i am active, i come here when i get the time. Ankit is the main reason i watch this show. Can't resist his fabulous personality and acting.


The chapters are short. The story starts from tejang marriage day followed by fatejo and jasmin with some twists but defo more logic than the onscreen crap.


Those tagged can read at ur leisure and give ur reviews. .Those who wants to continue reading keep me informed so i will tag u for the next chapters as i move on. Those not tagged pls join in reading the story.

Tq for ur time .


Future tracks


Chapter one


Sandhus residence 9 am ( on marriage day)

She sat at the dressing table looking at her own reflection in the mirror. She looked beautiful but was empty within herself. She was not prepared for the third marriage.

"Why am i not destined to be single , living my life peacefully".

She was upset but she had to do it for Riya.


He sat at one hidden corner of the house and weeped in silence. His ladylove was marrying another man .God, it was so painful. His act of pretense of being happy that she moved on was getting unbearable. He didn't want her to know that his feelings changed.


Hotel room , Moga

She was still vengeful looking at the wedding invitation resting on the bed . She was not welcomed to the marriage and also to live in her own home with her family. They never loved her

Tejo was their favorite.

"I will never spare her . I will destroy her ". She was full on revenge. Seconds later her phone rang and she left the hotel hurriedly


An hour later at sandhus residence

Sandhus and virks waited impatiently for angad's baraat which didn't seem to appear for the past thirty minutes. They were restless and even made phone calls. The groom was not picking up. What went wrong?? He was eager to marry tejo .


An hour more passed and Sati started crying. Tejo was shattered. This was the third time she was ditched. Kushveer took the opportunity to get fateh and tejo marred at the mandap. Sandhus agreed with a heavy heart knowing their darling daughter was still in love with her ex.


Tejo didn't react when she was told by her father to rethink about marrying Fateh. It was her choice. Deep inside she still loved him. She was hurt with his betrayal but she still wanted to spend her life with him. She was confused. "Shall i accept him or no" . " What if he still loves jasmin".

Her inner voice taunted her" come out of ur delusions, tejo . He ditched ur sister. He has moved on. Just marry him and be happy".


She finally nodded in agreement . Virks and sandhus cheered with joy hugging one another.

Suddenly , Mahi came running stating her older brother was no where to be found. He was missing.


Tejo panicked. She ran around frantically searching for him in her own house. She cried loudly, devastated. " Where has he gone ?"


Everyone was puzzled. Where was fateh?? Two hours earlier he was happily delegating all work to his family members in the marriage to make sure everything was perfect and now he himself was missing.


Angad didn't bring his baraat and now fateh missing. What's going on???


To be continued

(chapter two already uploaded on pg two)

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Fatang ne maarli apni udariyaan🤣🤣

Sandhu sisters can continue with their crap now🤣🤣

I'll be following the story and I know you won't forget to tag me😝🤭

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Fatang ne baag ke shaadi karli kya 🤪🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: thunderbird

Fatang ne baag ke shaadi karli kya 🤪🤣


Wait for the twist

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Keep tagging when ever you update this story.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Chapter two


Flashback of a day before marriage


Angad's residence , moga, 11pm

He knew he was doing wrong to both of them. She was not as happy as she seemed to show to everyone during the marriage functions.


Meanwhile her ex was hiding behind corners and crying all to himself. He saw how much that guy was shattered , peeping through curtains and whats not , watching him suffering losing his love to another man.


Angad was aware that tejo and fateh loved each other deeply.

He stood watching his own reflection in the small mirror hanging on a wall of his washroom, battling with his inner self. His male ego taunted him harshly

" This was not u buddy. U've changed. U became a selfish human just like everyone else. Her own selfish family used her for their canada dreams and sacrificed her's instead , her in laws were selfish for their own son's happiness and now u , a very selfless soul had become selfish in her love that u couldn't see her pinning for her ex. U couldn't see her pain. This was not u at all. Dude, what have u become?"

Angad was hurt. His love was one sided. He had to back off somehow. But it was too late. Both families were happy. Wedding functions were going on. By next morning, he will be married off to Tejo. It was too late . How was he gonna face the families.

" Sorry i can't marry your daughter . I changed my mind the last minute".


He was restless full nite .


The marriage day , 9am

He was dressed fully in a gold sherwani ready to take his baraat with his grandparents and some relatives when he received a phone call from a stranger .


Riya was kidnapped once again.


The kidnapper instructed him not to proceed with the marriage otherwise the little girl would be killed. He obeyed. After all he himself was prepared to back off .

The kidnapper demanded 20 crocre in ransom and the location given was far from Moga

She was held captive in Chandigarh.

He rushed immediately to his niece's rescue after getting the money ready.


His grandparents pleaded him to inform sandhus but he refused. If tejo found out riya was missing, she would tag along and he couldn't risk her life. The kidnapper sounded quite dangerous.


As he left for Chandigarh by road, he texted to fateh stating he was backing off from the marriage and he(fateh) should unite with tejo at the same mandap.

But there was no reply from fateh.

He even rang him after not getting a response for the sent message. Surprisingly, fateh's phone was switched off. He was puzzled.

Why was fateh not responding???


To be continued

(chapter three already uploaded on page three)

Edited by Aniash - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Minhasmansi92

Keep tagging when ever you update this story.


Chapter two uploaded on pg two

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: thunderbird

Fatang ne baag ke shaadi karli kya 🤪🤣


Twist in chapter two pg two

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Bhai Fateh to nahi jisane zhooth mooth bola angad ko ki Riya is kidnapped? so angad misses the marriage and Fateh can be the groom?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ch -2 , kidnapper wants the marriage to be stopped , can be jasmine or even Fateh , banda kuch bhi kar sakta hai..

But 20 crores J jaisi ladki hi maang sakti hai😆

Well it's getting interesting😳😳

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