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Posted: 3 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Whoa you are so fast…👍🏼

Like Flash…

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Good night dear.. 🤗
see ya tomorrow


Chapters are uploaded to keep up with the story. especially the flow. Delay will break the excitement to read. That's why i seldom write fan fictions. More on one shots or two shots. Lesser time consumption.

I wrapped my online classes day before yesterday. Then chutti till year end . So decided to write this fan fiction. After that don't know when will get the time.


Tbh , losing interest in the show. So i don't think next year i will continue writing. Plus returning to worksite . Definitely no time to write. Working from home is flexible and less tiring. U don't need to travel

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Posted: 3 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Whoa you are so fast…👍🏼

Like Flash…

Image

Good night dear.. 🤗
see ya tomorrow


Chapters are uploaded to keep up with the story. especially the flow. Delay will break the excitement to read. That's why i seldom write fan fictions. More on one shots or two shots. Lesser time consumption.

I wrapped my online classes day before yesterday. Then chutti till year end . So decided to write this fan fiction. After that don't know when will get the time.


Tbh , losing interest in the show. So i don't think next year i will continue writing. Plus returning to worksite . Definitely no time to write. Working from home is flexible and less tiring. U don't need to travel

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Posted: 3 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Aniash


Chapters are uploaded to keep up with the story. especially the flow. Delay will break the excitement to read. That's why i seldom write fan fictions. More on one shots or two shots. Lesser time consumption.

I wrapped my online classes day before yesterday. Then chutti till year end . So decided to write this fan fiction. After that don't know when will get the time.


Tbh , losing interest in the show. So i don't think next year i will continue writing. Plus returning to worksite . Definitely no time to write. Working from home is flexible and less tiring. U don't need to travel

True and pace of the story is awesome… I read the 5th chapter as well n loved it how Fateh, gippy and Angad , Nani flopped Jasso’s plan…👍🏼 and still have no clue about other..

Tejo is so dramatic yaar behosh kyun ho gayi 😆 apne future in-laws ko sambhalna tha naah.. 😆 just kidding.. usko behosh hi rehne do filhaal until all bring down jasso together..

I have dared to write one and still its incomplete as I lost interest in show and then I started working full time so couldn’t find any time and inspiration.. I want to complete that but I need clear and focused mind.. as there are lots of things going on..

I stopped watching n lost interest long ago.. since they have started Shimla track the writing and show both going down the hill from hill station.

Awesome you have a long break.. I only have off on weekend this time.. from next week onwards my working Saturday is back.. 🤪

I totally agree when you work on site that tends to take your time for work as well as commute.. I myself travel 80-90 miles for 3 days for my work. I don’t get anytime to think n to write anything rather than random comments here and there..

Do come to say hi whenever you get time and tag us..🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

True and pace of the story is awesome… I read the 5th chapter as well n loved it how Fateh, gippy and Angad , Nani flopped Jasso’s plan…👍🏼 and still have no clue about other..

Tejo is so dramatic yaar behosh kyun ho gayi 😆 apne future in-laws ko sambhalna tha naah.. 😆 just kidding.. usko behosh hi rehne do filhaal until all bring down jasso together..

I have dared to write one and still its incomplete as I lost interest in show and then I started working full time so couldn’t find any time and inspiration.. I want to complete that but I need clear and focused mind.. as there are lots of things going on..

I stopped watching n lost interest long ago.. since they have started Shimla track the writing and show both going down the hill from hill station.

Awesome you have a long break.. I only have off on weekend this time.. from next week onwards my working Saturday is back.. 🤪

I totally agree when you work on site that tends to take your time for work as well as commute.. I myself travel 80-90 miles for 3 days for my work. I don’t get anytime to think n to write anything rather than random comments here and there..

Do come to say hi whenever you get time and tag us..🤗


Will try to upload chp six soon. Before u go to bed. Will tag

I want to complete it today . Max tmrow.

I think i will wrap up in ten chapters.


Working on site is exhausting

I was on one full year online classes. Due to covid colleges closed. . Government reduce restrictions for next yr. So schools and colleges will be opened.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aniash


Will try to upload chp six soon. Before u go to bed. Will tag

I want to complete it today . Max tmrow.

I think i will wrap up in ten chapters.


Working on site is exhausting

I was on one full year online classes. Due to covid colleges closed. . Government reduce restrictions for next yr. So schools and colleges will be opened.

Awesome..thank you.. anytime dear. If I go to bed early then will read tomorrow morning 👍🏼
We were open since last April as we are essential healthcare workers.

I know working on site is super exhausting + long commute.. Till the time I get home I get drained

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Posted: 3 years ago
#36

Read all 5 parts together. Haha... couldn't stop laughing at Gippy's entry. Can't wait for Karma to hit hard at Jasmine and hopefully Tejo ends up with Angad in the end 😆☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Chir-Cute

Read all 5 parts together. Haha... couldn't stop laughing at Gippy's entry. Can't wait for Karma to hit hard at Jasmine and hopefully Tejo ends up with Angad in the end 😆☺️


Writing chp seven now

As much as i want her to marry angad and go far away, it won't happen onscreen.

I am following fatejo route with twist and turns.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Aniash


Writing chp seven now

As much as i want her to marry angad and go far away, it won't happen onscreen.

I am following fatejo route with twist and turns.

haha... a girl can only wish, can't she? 🤣🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
#39

Chapter six


5pm , Moga (virks residence.)

As soon he reached Moga, angad rushed to virks to find out about fateh and tejo, if they got married at his mandap as he paved way for their union unexpectedly at the very last moment.


He was taken into a huge surprise coming to know that fateh met with an accident with a lorry travelling speedily from the opposite direction as the driver lost control due to failure in the brakes when he(fateh) was riding his bike to purchase last minute decoration items to be utilised in the wedding.


And with that he suffered severe head injuries resulting into a parial memory lost and could only recall his and jasmin's first marriage to be functions. The last he remembered was when he proposed for jasmin's hand. The doctor also cautioned the families that he was not to be given any kind of mental stress and to just play along with him. "Just pretend that everything was ok"


A flashback of 4 hrs ago at the hospital

"Doctor, how's my son now", kushveer enquired anxiously holding the shattered gurpreet in his arms for a support as soon as the doctor came to visit the families waiting outside the ICU.


The doctor elaborated on some medical terms which the families couldn't understand stating fateh suffered from a partial memory loss and not to be given any sort of stress . His memory shall return with time.


Tejo , who has regained her consciousness seconds earlier was extremely shocked . Has fateh forgotten her?


She didn't dare to go into the room and waited alone outside the door as the rest walked in. Abhiraj held her tightly wrapping her in his arms for a sibling support.

" Sis, everything will be fine".


Minutes later, she ran away crying loudly when fateh asked for jasmin and enquired the families about his and jasmin's first marriage preparations.

They were all devastated that he couldn't recall the actual events but played along for his well being.


Fateh was discharged two hours later as he was adamant to go home and started throwing tantrums that finally the doctor agreed to release him


Tejo returned to her home with her family stating she wanted to be alone a while. They respected her privacy.


Minutes later angad's text message came in spilling the events that occurred in the morning and apologised for his absence at the wedding.

He stated that he was driving back to Moga and would meet them for an apology.


Sandhus were relieved to hear that riya was saved and rupi was determined to get tejo hitched to angad at any cost now that fateh could only recall her sister. He will be romancing her and tejo would be left alone at one corner weeping.



4pm in a hotel room, Moga

Jasmin was delighted to receive a phone call from her mother requesting her to return home immediately. Fateh lost his memory and was asking for her. She got her old fateh. She was glad that happiness was on her way and tejo got the share of her(Jasmin) sorrows.


Gippy and fateh were definitely plotting something huge.


To be continued


(Chp seven already uploaded on page seven)

Edited by Aniash - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Chapter six

wonderful story! Excited to keep reading it. Take your time 😁


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