50 shades darker: Tejo SS pt 3 updt on pg 5 - Page 3

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bluekohl

Lol yes. How do you know?


Lol.. you know as a Fire sign, you can easily identify the other fire signs...😆

I'm a Leo and my Brother is a Sagi... so.. easy to identify those vibes...😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hi guys... I'm back with second part. Hope you like it, and if you do, leave a review.

Part 2- Let the fun begin



Tejo came in the kitchen with two pizzas, looked around and rolled her eyes.

"Umm...well...mummyji abhi aap ye cold compress lekar aaram kariye. Minor burn hai, theek ho jayega. And Mahi, don't worry. I've got pizza. So hamara jugad ho gaya hai. Let's have a movie night aaj. Hey Amrik, if you want to come you're welcome too. Just get some plates and let's go. Bahut drama hai waise bhi iss ghar mein." Then she looked towards her husband and his girlfriend... "Aur tum... Ghar mein baki log hain, khana order karlo. Mana ki tum nakara nikamme ho, par ye kaam toh kar hi sakte ho. Aur aadat daal lo. Kyonki jaisi tumhari nayi joru hai na, uske hisab se ghar ka khana toh tumhare naseeb mein ab hai nahin."

Fateh was shocked. This was not Tejo... She could never. He knew his Tejo, he had known her for a long time... and she wasn't this.

Fateh was just pondering about it, when Jasmine jerked him roughly.

"Fateh...waise tejo keh toh sahi hi rahi hai. Mummy ko chot lag gayi, aur lagta hai Tejo ka toh jugad ho gaya... humein sabka khana dekhna padega. Kaise karenge hum sab...?"

Fateh frowned.

"Jassu dadi ki tabiyat kharab hai...unhe ghar ka khana hi chahiye. Papa ko humesha ghar ka khana hi chahiye hota hai, maine unhe kabhi bahar ka khana khate nahin dekha. Kuch jaldi se bana do na...?"

"Are aise kaise bana doon. Mujhe nahin aata itna kuch...?" Jasmine rolled her eyes.

Now everyone was ready in dining room, waiting.

"Aaj khana milega ya nahin..?" Khushbeer was already pissed, while Fateh and Jasmine were shuffling around.

"Wo papa aaj bas order kiya hai, 20-25 minutes mein aate honge" he said in a small voice.

"Well main batati hoon." Tejo entered, with a plate of fruit and put it in front of Khushbeer. His eyes lit up suddenly, Tejo was the light of his eyes.

"Wo kya hua na, mummy ne khana banaya, Jasmine ne giraya, aur ab aap sabhi khane ka wait kar rahe hain, jo fateh ne order kiya hai. But you know, I don't want you to go hungry, so here's a fruit platter for you papa."

Khushbeer was looking at Jasmine, shooting daggers at his worthless son and his mistress when Machi spoke.

"Are ye toh aisi hi hai...tum bana deti khana Tejo...hum wait kar lete."

"What? Main bana deti... Main kya aap sabki servant hoon?" Tejo said in indignation.

"Are aise kaise bol rahi ho tum...apne ghar ka kaam karne se koi servant ya maid ban jata hai?"Fateh asked her angrily.

Tejo looked at her with a calm expression and then smiled.

"Apna ghar... Matlab wo ghar jahan tum mujhe shadi karke laye the? Wo shadi jo meri marzi ki thi bhi nahin? Wo ghar jahan tum meri behan ko apni rakhail banakar rakh rahe ho?"

Fateh was shook to his core. He could not even find words to say to her...but Jasmine wasn't about to listen anymore.

"Ab jo ho gaya na wo ho gaya. Ab tumhari jarurat yahan kisi ko nahin. Toh tum ye ghar chodkar chali kyon nahin jaati? Divorce do, aur humein aajad karo."

Tejo looked at her and sighed. Ehh this monster was partly her creation. Maybe she should have slapped her couple of times...Better late than never.

Tejo slapped her. Within five seconds the mark was visible on Jasso's face.

"Chup. Yaad rakh ki tu kaun hai, aur main kaun hoon. Main Tejo Sandhu Virk hoon...Tu... tu ek mistress hai. Tujhe kya lagta hai, main ek rakhail se dar jaungi? Main ek aisi ladki se dar jaongi jiska khud ke jeeja ke saath affair hai..." Tejo laughed, a cold calculated laugh.

"Anyway, I'm going to leave now. We're having a movie night. Just because iss loser ne meri life ki aisi taisi kar di hai, doesn't mean ki main har waqt roungi. And papa I'm really sorry." For the last part, her voice became softer, and genuine.

Edited by Bluekohl - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#23

Uff kya aag hai🔥🔥🔥

Mazaa aa gaya blue. kaash show me dekne milta aisa kuch. Koi na padke hi sahi sukoon milega. Much needed dose of entertainment yaar. Keep going woman. Ur too good👍🏼

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Yaayyyy way to go Bluekohl. Mazza aa gaaya. This is how all of us want Tejo to be but kya kare hum Sab ki phutti kismat but I loved it. ❤❤❤❤


Mazza aa gaaya. 😀😀😀

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Amazing... We want this tejo☺️

Loved reading❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#26

Blue...awesom chapter..i wish we could have got this Tejo..alas abhi stories padhake hi kaam chalana padega

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: FIREMYSOUL

Uff kya aag hai🔥🔥🔥

Mazaa aa gaya blue. kaash show me dekne milta aisa kuch. Koi na padke hi sahi sukoon milega. Much needed dose of entertainment yaar. Keep going woman. Ur too good👍🏼

I agree yaara ..I loved how she was soft towards papa virk

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Posted: 3 years ago
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i am loving this cynical version of tejo. and she is right, why does she need to make dinner for them. "better late than never"- true facts. she has all the right to be this unforgiving and brutal.


kudos blue!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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tejo is on FIRE.

band baja di jasfa ki

maza aa gaya yaar

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Posted: 3 years ago
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awesome written

loved these shades of Tejo

lolz gurpreet has to cook serves her right for being at side of her bachha

so jasmine pop up in kitchen to just show her haque which is not still she got i guess as you referred her to his GF

lolz jasmine attempts to cook food and gurpreet horrified seeing her in kitchen. Fateh knew his apsara can't cook so he didn't took chance to taste her made food

two events at same time

fateh got sprain in his back areh tejo toh phool jaise najuk aur light hai compare to that hulk but i wish jasso should have there to witness this fall i bet she would have thrown that patila on fateh🤣gp bach jaati

jasso don't have common sense to use cloth while taking hot vessel gp thinks right t tejo is adopted she doesn't have genes of dimwit sandhus

how coolly she handle that burnt situation of gp and further will enjoy pizza with mahi n amrik with movie

and she is right after choosing jasso fateh don't have ghar ka khana in his fate😆

loved this tejo rather than sanskari one in show. bring on more shades of tejo

thanks for writing wonderful piece

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