50 shades darker: Tejo SS pt 3 updt on pg 5

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Okay, couple of things to clear.

First, despite the title, it's not graphic sex. It's just I want to explore a different side of Tejo in this fic.

Second, Tejo will be a little different, even bitchy at times. So if you like the sanskari show version, it'll leave a bad taste, and you might want to avoid it.

It's gonna be a several part story, so welcome aboard. Hope you love it, and if you do, leave a review.

Part 1-page 1

PArt 2- page 3(scroll down)

Part3- Page 5


1. THE BEGINNING

Tejo came after a week in Virk household. Nobody exactly knew where she was, she did not tell anyone, not even her parents. She just said she wanted some time to herself.

First thing she did, was to find out about dadi's health, and meet Mahi. afterwards she went straight into her bedroom and unpacked, arranged everything. It was almost evening, and normally she would have headed down to the kitchen, but now she just lied down.

As everyone was sitting for dinner, Tejo was still missing. Gurpreet certainly missed her help in the kitchen. She had gotten used to Tejo, somehow she knew how to do everything. Jasmine on the other hand... It was almost unbelievable how they're so different. She was almost sure Tejo must be adopted. Sandhus were exceptionally dim witted, and it didn't make any sense how they could have raised Tejo. As she was finishing up in kitchen, Jasmine entered. The girl knew how to keep appearance. However, that's all she was. All appearance and no substance. One day she had tried to cook, and the entire food had to be thrown away. Even her majnu couldn't fake, he refused to take the chance with that death stew her apsara cooked. They had to order food from a restaurant. Another day she ruined Rajma by throwing extra salt, without tasting it. That day she'd have murdered her in cold blood, everyone looked for Rajma chawal, and Gurpreet had worked way too much to make that. Gurpreet snapped out as she saw Jasmine jumping around in kitchen...She sighed. This chick would be the end of her life.

"What do you want?" Gurpreet asked.

"ooh i just want to help...you know...because I'm part of the family...I mean ab toh..." Jasmine went on but Gurpreet cut her short.

"Fine, take that patila(a kind of pot) to the dining table."

Next, two things happened simultaneously. There were two shrieks from two different corners in Virk household.

First, Tejo and Fateh had collided, carpet had slipped, and now they were both on ground, Tejo on top of Fateh, shooting daggers at him.

Second, Jasmine had dropped the entire patila because it's hot, and she hadn't used a cloth to hold it. To top it off Gurpreet was splashed with some hot curry.

In the living room, where Fateh Tejo scene had unfolded, and Mahi was observing it with a mild interest, she had to run as she heard two screams next moment from the kitchen. Hearing that both Tejo and Fateh too rushed, at least Tejo rushed, but Fateh had gotten a sprain in his back and it slowed down it speed.

By that time, everyone had assembled in the kitchen and Jasmine was gasping for air like a fish. Fateh saw the pained expression and ordered Amrik to get the first aid box. However Tejo stepped forward and dragged Gurpreet gently to the sink and started to pour cold water. She slowly kept pouring when her phone rang. She asked Mahi to take over and rushed outside.

In the kitchen, Fateh knew he had to do something, otherwise his father would kill him and his girlfriend. So, he quietly held her hand wand was about to drag her when Amrik spoke up.

"Haan haan le jao...isi ki wajah se mummy ka hath jala."

Before Fateh could say anything, Jasmine piped up... "Aisa hai galti se hua, aur waise bhi aisa chota mota toh kitchen mein hota rehta hai."

"Really? Toh tum kyon nahin kood jati. Tum bhi jara koi chota, hopefully mota accident karo na apne saath?" Mahi was beyond angry at this point.

Tejo came in the kitchen with two pizzas, looked around and rolled her eyes.

"Umm...well...mummyji abhi aap ye cold compress lekar aaram kariye. Minor burn hai, theek ho jayega. And Mahi, don't worry. I've got pizza. So hamara jugad ho gaya hai. Let's have a movie night aaj. Hey Amrik, if you want to come you're welcome too. Just get some plates and let's go. Bahut drama hai waise bhi iss ghar mein." Then she looked towards her husband and his girlfriend... "Aur tum... Ghar mein baki log hain, khana order karlo. Mana ki tum nakara nikamme ho, par ye kaam toh kar hi sakte ho. Aur aadat daal lo. Kyonki jaisi tumhari nayi joru hai na, uske hisab se ghar ka khanatoh tumhare naseeb mein ab hai nahin."

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Tejo is on fire. Well personally, all these societal sanskaari things had always been beyond my understanding (no offence intended towards anyone) so I will like this savage Tejo for sure. 😆😆

Just a request if you could please tag me in your stories (if it's not too much trouble). I love your plots. I just do not want to miss out on any.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Amazing revenge partner way to go. 😀😀😎😎😎.

Aur bezzati Karo fateh and his jasmine damsel ki. 😂😂

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dee10

Tejo is on fire. Well personally, all these societal sanskaari things had always been beyond my understanding (no offence intended towards anyone) so I will like this savage Tejo for sure. 😆😆

Just a request if you could please tag me in your stories (if it's not too much trouble). I love your plots. I just do not want to miss out on any.

Thanks. Glad you liked it. Personally I'm a very polite person, until you cross me. Then I'm the bitch you don't want to face. I hate how ladies are just so docile, almost like a doormat.

And yes, whenever I'll write more I'll tag you. It's nice to read thoughtful reviews.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awesome kohl... this is what we wanted so bad.

Khair show nahi to story hi sahi 🥳

Way to go kohl ... I am sure this SS gonna be treat for all us tadapti aatmas 😆

Loved reading it .... nd I am telling you update nxt part faster 😈

Don't make us wait 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bluekohl

Thanks. Glad you liked it. Personally I'm a very polite person, until you cross me. Then I'm the bitch you don't want to face. I hate how ladies are just so docile, almost like a doormat.

And yes, whenever I'll write more I'll tag you. It's nice to read thoughtful reviews.

Exactly being kind and polite is one thing but becoming a doormat in the process is never acceptable. Like it's said you can be a good person and still say NO! Unfortunately, the age-old conditioning has been such where a woman saying "NO" is frowned upon and therefore women were expected to be the goddess of compromise; mostly in the name of family respect. I am just glad that with time and even though snail-paced; this mindset is changing. 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I will read later and edit my comment


Keep writing Bluekohl, we need some nice distraction from this idiotic show 👍🏼

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bluekohl

Thanks. Glad you liked it. Personally I'm a very polite person, until you cross me. Then I'm the bitch you don't want to face. I hate how ladies are just so docile, almost like a doormat.

And yes, whenever I'll write more I'll tag you. It's nice to read thoughtful reviews.

Oh yea even I am one of those, I may appear polite soft even sanskari but u cross a line and hurt my integrity ..u will want to run away from my savage mouth.

I have been called a super cold bitch at times 🤣

Loving the story ..this is the type of FL I want to stan savage, smart and knows what she wants.

Does not forgive peeps who question her character or cheat her

Edited by AnjuRish - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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TBH, the way Tejo was portrayed in start after Jas ka kaand, even giving back to F after initial days of marriage, i will expect her to behave this way and not teh way the show is currently showing. I mean when she is alone she might cry, feel low and what not but in front of people she will be savage.


Thats what the show too should show and not another pendulum between tigress and bhigi billi

Nice story...your plots are always good

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awesome plz udate soon a longer chapter plz

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