The revolutionary RagKor- A different attempt - Page 3

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It's like a period movie Niki di..superb update👏👏👏👌👌loved d way u described d non-cooperation movement,swadeshi movement in details..so Raghav wants to unmask Chakor's cousin to her..N Chakor not v impress with Raghav.. m v exited to know wht will happen next when Raghav will tell her abt her cousin.. some fireworks r in store for us for sure😍can't wait to read d next update...

Wow nikki dear,

Nice one again..👌

Kind of story that took back to ages. On a BALH forum friend suggestion I had watched a pakistani serial named Daastan(Feautring fawad khan) , story is diff from yours, but the backdrop(the freedom struggle time, back to 30's, 40's) quite similar, so I am visualising meejay is such a setup.😍. Its entirely new to visualise like that but good to feel.

Even I will start to love love KN here it seems😁, let he be good/bad, for sure he accepts chakor's courage and is intellectual both in show and here.

Loved the detailing. Will know history and politics involved too.

Coming to our favs, Aww Raghav..those first attractions😍 ,those looks of him at her, those changes she is bringing in him through her and her persona , lovely to read....

she as of now having no thoughts about him and though aware of his looks, pushing aside those thoughts and still in phase of not having a trust on him as a fighter who wants freedom..interesting..

Awaiting to read how their journey unfolds.

And you too stopped with a tease. intriguing one, so I am awaiting impatiently to read next.

what for those people waiting, will chakor trust raghav, how their one to one first meet is going to be...ohh i am more eager..

update fast please 😁

Uma at the outset let me tell you that you, Sri and mesh have to attempt writing... in fact even smita and sabah...... all of you are too good...

Thanks a lot For the encouragement. Ha ha KN .... some image salvation for him 😜😜

Uff every time I write ragkor I can imagine VJ and meera with their detailed expressions.... want them back badly.

Will update tomorrow morning

Nikki dear super update 👌 beautifully written ...I loved it so much 😍

Waiting for next update...

Thank you dear kavi...updating now

The core committee was unable to arrive at a decision regarding the bombs and grenades as the for and against were almost equal in no. They decided to continue the discussion later as it was getting late. All of them said their byes. Vikrant called out for Raghav but not getting an answer thought that he would have left and set off. Chakor had the company of her friend Leela till a short distance after which she turned for her home.

Raghav knew exactly when she would be alone and was waiting for the right moment. He crept from behind, covered her mouth with his hand and pulled her behind the bushes. Chakor was startled but before she could react, he said...... …don’t get scared, don’t shout please, I am Raghav… I just wanted to tal…..by then his hand was bitten by her and he exclaimed…..ouch…are you mad?…..She turned towards him, grabbed his collar and asked ….How dare you pull me like this? He switched on the torch he had……Her face was close to him, lips hardly a fingers distance away, her eyes shone bright in the torch light, both seemed to be mesmerisedby each other……when somebody from a house neaby shouted……Kaun hain wahan? KaunHain? And both of them tried to duck down. Raghav lost his balance and rolled down a slope near the bushes with Chakor on him. They landed with a thud. The torch also broke… there was darkness around…Both got up, rubbing themselves. They were bruised. Raghav was trying to help Chakor get up when she realised that she had sprained her leg. She tried walking but couldn’t. She blasted Raghav….saying….tumhari wajah se hum iss musibat mein hain….Kaunsi aafat aa gayi thi? Kya baat karni thi tumhe……he finally just closed her mouth with his hand, lifted her and said that he would drop her home and would tell her everything if she would just shut her mouth for some time……

She reluctantly let him lift her but because of the darkness they couldn’t see well and it so happened that her lips brushed his while she was trying to hold him.The ripples it sent in both jolted them. It was a new feeling for both. They seemed to have become senseless, unable to move. Suddenly the chill in the air made them shudder and they realised what had happened. Chakor mouthed a meek sorry because she was feeling very very shy……. She thanked God that the torch had broken otherwise her crimson face would have been seen. Raghav on the other hand didn’t know how to react. He simply started walking, with she in his arms.They walked a few minutes in silence and then Chakor remembered that Raghav wanted to tell her something. She broke the awkard silence and asked him what he wanted to tell her.

Oh yes…I totally forgot about it in all this….and again both got reminded of the brief touch and felt a thrill run through them…..Raghav then in whispers told her all that he had seen….Suddenly he was greeted with a violent jerk and she asked him to place her down… she said…have you totally lost it? …….Do you even know what you are saying? He is like my own brother….my parents brought him uplike their own…I cannot believe that he would have any bad intentions…..

She was very angry……he just tried to pacify her….but she would not listen and started limping back home saying ……thank you for bringing me till here…now I will manage….she started walking away…..he just held her hand and said…..please think over practically once…..then wished a goodnight and walked off.

She reached home and when her parents enquired about her bruises, she brushed it off saying that she had slipped and had got hurt. But she couldn’t sleep very well that night. A set of sturdy arms, a baritone voice and the brief close glimpse of a handsome face in a torch light kept fleeting in and out of her dreams. Then there was a warning beeping too. All in all she had a disturbed sleep.

Raghav too reached home, cleaned himself and tried catching up on his favourite sleep but it had become elusive….He found himself automatically up the next day at dawn and near the window…..

Chakor was very angry with Raghav for blaming her brother. She didn’t bother to look at him when they crossed paths. Raghav was very uneasy. When she came home in the evening, her mom casually said that her brother seems to be very busy these days. He hardly had time to help her in her household chores. That triggered something in Chakor. She tried to enquire with her mom about it but her mom seemed to be busy with cooking and didn’t have the time. With a calm mind she tried thinking about what Raghav had said and realised that his voice had held honesty. Plus she also thought that Raghav had probably nothing to gain by blaming her brother. So she decided to do her own investigation. It took her a good four -five days to get to the bottom of things but when she confronted her cousin, he broke down and accepted…..why…..how could you do such a thing?.....I needed my own money…..how many days could I live off your parents……but you could have searched for a job?….don’t you know how difficult it is to get one these days…especially after the non-cooperation movement…..She asked him to leave the village and go off without telling anybody….If my parents come to know about this, they would be totally heartbroken said she…….She was broken too……

Love you Sri thank you so much dear

Woww just fantafab Niki di👏👌 what a fiery,romantic interaction it was😍Raghav closing Chakor's mouth with his hand&our junglee billi biting his hand😍that was pure bliss&nostalgia😍thn Chakor pulling his collar&Raghav switching on d torchlight,their faces close each other,lips hardly a distance away,both mesmerized..just amazing😍as always I was imagining MeeJay😍😍thn her lips brushed his in d darkness & both feeling jolted..uff wht a scintillating scene it was😍

Infact d entire Ragkor sequence was💜💜glad tht Chakor did her own investigation nd she discovered d truth..she believed Raghav..eagerly waiting to see how will Ragkor saga unfolds from here..mindblowing update Niki di..loved it to d core👌👌looking forward to d next part 😍

Nikiii this is superb

Liked perfect Rag-Kor fiery interaction.. loved it and imagined MeeJay right through

I loved the chatur chakoriya analysing . Also liked how she ignored him...

but still loved how she asked her cousin to go away... saving his grace and also her parents too.

ok Now update the next soon.... 😉

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Me like stupid keep imaging MEEJAY everytime.... sumi I think we have gone bonkers....we need treatment from this MEEJAY addiction... and the only treatment i think is getting them back together in another show😜😜😜😜

Originally posted by: 77nikita

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Me like stupid keep imaging MEEJAY everytime.... sumi I think we have gone bonkers....we need treatment from this MEEJAY addiction... and the only treatment i think is getting them back together in another show😜😜😜😜

Hehe 🙈🙈🙈 no doubt we have gone bonkers....

Getting them back 💃💃💃