The revolutionary RagKor- A different attempt - Page 5

Thanks a ton smita😍😍 its always a pleasure reading your wonderfully written analysis. It is like a synopsis of my story.

Part 3:

Superb update Nikita. So the decision regarding the ammunition is still pending as such decisions aren't easily taken & shouldidn't be . Loved Ragkor 1st romantic encounter in the bush😍😍😍. So Raghav babu knew when would be Chakor alone, great going, seems he is already starting research on her 😀😀. The entire scene was very enjoyable, right from his covering her mouth & pulled her behind the bush, her biting his hands, then grabbing his collar & then fascinated by each other was fantastic. Then his lifting her , while her lips touched his lips , made them tremble, gave them 440 volt electric shock was just 👌👌👌 🔥 🔥. I loved the line "I totally forgot about it in all this….and again both got reminded of the brief touch and felt a thrill run through them…"when she asked what he wants to talk about. After hearing him it was inevitable that she wouldn't believe him but it's good that though she was angry with him but didn't completely disbelieve him. She tried to find out the truth by herself and got her brother guilty. Loved the portion when Chakor remembered Raghav , it seems she too attracted towards Raghav & can't get him out of her mind .

Part 4:

Lovely updates. It's good that Chakor wants to meet & say sorry to Raghav . And I can understand very much what could be his condition without seeing her for so many days.

Loved the lakeside romantic meet. Both of them lost in each other. Loved the way he was trying to console her and made her smile, mesmerized by her beauty. His touch was causing the exhilaration in her. She felt the warmth with him. Both of them sunken in each other's thought 😍😍, wanted to meet each other over and over . Loved that Chakor unknowingly took a little effort to her dress up in their 2nd meeting 😊😊 & both of them thinking in quite similar way to shut the mouth with lips😳😳😍😍😇😇. They are inclined to each other so much, even despite not being a part of the core committee she wanted to know Raghav's opinion on making bomb & grenades, that means his opinion is valuable to her . The blast was very heinous attempt to destroy the shed & kill the committee members and villagers. So this was the cruel plan by Mr. John to scare the villagers & impress the top brass . Hope everyone is not much harmed. Let's see how Ragkor take revenge on this brutal killings.

uma dear your comments are a treat with those gif's.....i am fida over those....i had a smile plastered all through❤️🤗

Thank you so much for all of it......yes i dont know when i am going to overcome this meejay addiction!!!!!!

missing so much that i guess i end up writing what i want to see on screen😉

Mesh, whenever i see a comment from nemo my face brightens.....❤️

thank you dear so much for it.

my ragkor journey is so incomplete on screen that my secret fantasies with them come out this way i guess!!!!

Chakor and Raghav looked at each other ……They thanked their stars that the venue of the meeting had been changed and that the shed which these guys had blasted was empty……Raghav wanted to rush and throttle Mr. John for the gruesome act. But Chakor held him back……Let him enjoy his so-called moment of victory today. We will jolt him from his dreamland later …..….

Both started their walk back…. They knew others would be getting worried….

Chakor felt Raghav’s grip on her hand tighten….what is the matter Raghav? ….just wondering what if we were inside the shed! She stopped, looked at him and said…..Don’t worry, nothing will happen. God is with us…He just couldn’t control himself and hugged her…..I cannot imagine staying without you Chakor……I want you to be with me always……She was taken aback…. He gathered all the courage he had and said…..I love you Chakor….Infact I fell in love the moment I saw you from the window. She just kept staring at him trying to ignore the tingling inside her…….

Everybody at the shed were getting worried for Chakor. Only Vikrant was worried for Raghav too…He was the one who knew that they were together…They were about to send a search party for Chakor……. ……

Chakor said….pleaseeeee let us go back to the shed…..and she almost started running….Raghav tried to speak to her but her lips were sealed….poor guy said…… Sorry if you didn’t like it….I will never ever say it again…but please don’t get angry……Those were my genuine feelings……Nonetheless I promise they will never ever come forth again……..But the only response he could evoke was the rustle of leaves.

To everyone’s relief, Chakor came in followed by Raghav. Everybody started talking at the same time and there was quite a din…..they wanted to know whether she had seen the blaze…..where had she been…..why was she so late in coming…all were talking…all were relieved that they weren’t present in the shed today…..Finally Vikrant hushed everybody and Chakor managed to tell them the entire story of how her cousin was keeping a tab on her and how they had traced the guys who blasted the shed today to Mr. John…..She also told them how Raghav had helped her in all this. She tried to keep all her emotions at bay while saying “RAGHAV”. Everybody started clapping for him. Raghav was shaken out of his thoughts and managed to smile.

All the while he kept looking at Chakor who pointedly avoided his stare. Chakor then suggested that since all of them were tired with today’s happenings, she would like to postpone the discussion to some other time. Truth being that she just wanted to run from there. All agreed. Rana reminded them to arrange for a meeting as soon as possible because he had to reply to his friend at Lucknow.

Before Raghav could speak with her, Chakor managed to escape. He was exasperated. He wanted to know what was going on in her mind. Chakor took a deep breath when she reached her door. She freshened up, barely listened to her parents and gave some vague replies when they enquired about the blast and about where she had been. She excused herself saying she was tired and wanted to sleep. Lying on her cot,eyes wide open she tried to go through all that happened. Raghav’s ‘I Love you’ stood prominently among the happenings. She kept thinking about it and a sea of emotions seem to drown her and she drifted to sleep…….

The next morning Mr. John got the shock of his life seeing the troupe going around the village square as usual…. …..he was seething in anger…..And they enjoyed his frustrated look.

By the end of that day Chakor knew what her heart wanted…A smile rose to her face... But she knew that the only option she had was to keep quiet…. Nonetheless, knowing that, that was what her heart wanted gave her immense satisfaction!

Rana wanted to hold the meeting the next afternoon as he had secured more details from his Lucknow friend and he was eager to share it with the others…. The information which he had got was indeed Dhamaakedar!

Raghav couldn’t concentrate on anything. His parents got tired asking him what the matter was…..but he brushed their questions aside, sometimes gently, sometimes by venting out his anger which later made him feel bad too. Finally he decided that he couldn’t go on like this. He needed his answer and he would get it….. whatever it was…. by the day end……

The meeting began. As part of the non-cooperation movement, Gandhiji had urged people to set up local schools and Chakor had managed to start one in the village, on a small scale though. Volunteers took turns teaching the village kids. She assigned work to those volunteers and small things like making banners, arranging for street plays etc.to a few others and then the general crowd dispersed….. She had managed to ignore Raghav all through.

Vikrant asked Raghav to wait out for a minute. He then told the core committee that Raghav was a very intelligent and brave young man. He had known him since childhood and he felt that he would be an asset to the group. So he wanted to request the committee to include him. Chakor knew that whatever Vikrant was saying was correct. But she kept mum. All looked at her….. She said that she was ok with whatever the majority decided. …She ignored the racing heart beats.....Love for the nation was naturally above all personal nitty gritties but was there an excitement too? wonder wonder....... Everybody generally liked Raghav...…Plus now he had saved Chakor too so he was their hero and nobody opposed. Infact they welcomed him happily. He whole heartedly thanked all and hoped that he would live upto their expectation. Chakor’s tried to maintain an unaffected look during the entire proceeding.

The meeting was then called to order. Rana took over. He told them….. the revolutionaries in Lucknow are planning to blast one British office in every nook and corner of India, at the same time on the same day, i.e. 13th of April 1920, to commemorate the one year of Jallianwalla Bagh massacre and they need our help to make the bombs and grenades…. Hearing this, all shouted in unison, INQUILAB ZINDABAD except of course Chakor….All looked at her ……I don’t like this violent way of solving issues……Raghav butted in….. Have you forgotten what Mr. John did? Have you excused the British for the Jallianwala Bagh massacre? Is the Rowlatt Act justified? They don’t deserve Ahimsa….I think we should help Rana……..But Raaaghavvv don’t you know what Gandhij…..Chakor even I respect Bapuji and would love to follow his principles whenever possible…….But these guys don’t deserve mercy…..Both weren’t liking this argument but they were firm in their views…..All the others had gone quiet….First time they had seen somebody standing up so strongly to Chakor……

Finally Rana raised his voice and said….WILL BOTH OF YOU KEEP QUIET AND JUST LISTEN FOR A SEC……The plan is to blast the offices in the night when nobody is around…..That means no human loss… Only immovable material will be destroyed…..Isn’t that a small price to pay for all that the GORAS have done till now??? Nonetheless, it will serve as a severe warning……We just want to show them that we aren't cowards any more…… Chakor please think….our countrymen need our help now…..She thought over….confirmed and reconfirmed that there wouldn’t be any human loss…..Then she finally nodded…..Rana said ….we have to be very careful though… Mr. John has already tried to harm us and his plan has gone bust so he will be very angry…. …..They named this operation GOBAR(COWDUNG IN HINDI) but it actually meant gola and barud….hindi for ammunition…..All of them had a hearty laugh on this…. The meeting ended.

When Chakor turned in the alley to her home, a familiar voice called out…Chakkkooorr….

As usual Sri dear stumps me with her comments... love you loads😍😍

Beautiful update Niki di..so glad tht no loss of lives nd no one was hurt due to d blast.. bt Raghav confessed his feelings😍loved d confession scene😍d way he was tightly holding her hand..tht fear of loosing her..nd finally d way he huged Chakor nd poured his heart out to her💜💜bt Chakor trying to keep all her emotions at bay.. hiding her feelings in front of him,trying to avoid him, giving him unaffected look😍obviously we all know for our Chakor county comes first..bt poor Raghav😁

Loved d way both of dem argued abt d blasts..happy tht Chakor gave her nod for d blasts only after knowing there will b no human life loss..looking forward to see how will Ragkor nd others make d plans successful ..nd eagerly waiting to see how will Chakor react to Raghav😍

Nikki loved it to capital of LOVE...

thank god no loss of lives... thats good....

whataaa different way of confession of dude, chweeto cannot hold himself and as usual dame gives a confusing look... poor guy sab pussss !!! cant she atleast smile at him... poor guy cannot concentrate and end up shouting at elders too 😆

Liking Rana and Vikrant too... thank god some good samaritans in your story...

Dame is so excited but country comes first hmmmm... hearts too race.... poor her.

a very good one Nikki... you are keeping the pace but waiting waiting for.....her to speak her heart.....

Okies next update soon please!!!🤗

😍😍😍sumi

Everytime I am writing ragkor invariably MEEJAY creep in and then I just imagine them and write...

Thank you dear for loving them and yes even I am waiting for her to speak her heart😜😜

Again thanks a ton smita❤❤❤👍

Part 5:

What a Fantastic update dear . It's quite relieving that no casualties were caused by the explosion due to change the meeting venue & being the shed unmanned. Raghav was quick to teach Mr. John a condign lesson but Chakor stopped him, waiting for the right time. But the suddenness of this incident made Raghav frightened & he couldn't control his emotions & finally expressed his feelings to Chakor 😍😍. But Chakor was trying to flee from his love embrace😞😞 , avoiding the amatory glance of Raghav, hiding her feelings towards him😟😟. The entire scene was beautifully written👌👌. She constantly trying to escape of his vision keeping him disquiet. But his confession made her restive😉😉. Let's see for how long she could resist herself from expressing her love for Raghav.

Mr. John was shocked seeing his plan fail was quite enjoyable😁😁😁 . Loved to see Chakor finally reached the conclusion but didn't want to confess as to her country is above everything . On the other side Raghav was restless, his anxiety are being expressed in anger but he determined to get his answer . Loved the detailing of the movements & the meeting. Liked Vikrant for giving the proposal to join Raghav in the core committee & Chakor too agreed with him😊😊. I have enjoyed their argument too regarding the use of ammunition. Just imagining meejay in the scene, make me super happy😍😍. Let's see how the story progresses.

Chakor ignored the familiar voice and started to walk ahead but then somebody jumped in front of her and blocked her way…when she said…Raghav please let me go….he said…I will ……I just want ananswer….she said …..I don’t have an answer …….I don’t want to speak with you….pleaseeee understand…let me go…..He tried to pull her hand…She tried to dodge him…..in the mini scuffle that followed Raghav hit himself on something and fell down….Chakor gasped and rushed to him….She tried to wake him up…he wouldn’t open his eyes…..She kept shouting Raghav, Raghav….pleaseee open your eyes…pleaseeee… then rushed to get some water….sprinkled it on him…..his eyelids fluttered…..she held his face and tried to wake him up…..tears had anyways started rolling down her cheeks……slowly he came back to his senses….saw Chakor crying…..Before he could ask…what had happened…she just hugged him saying…..Thank God, you are ok…..I got so scared…..It happened all because of me…Are you hurt badly?.....Is it paining?.......can you get up? ……Should I get help?... I am sorry….. I cannot bear anything happening to you…I love you …....blah blah blah……and suddenly she realised what all she had blurted and sheepishly kept quiet……

He hugged her and turned and said thank-you to what had hit him…She punched him lightly…..he then asked her why she had earlier kept quiet about it? She said Raghav, do you realise that our match will not be accepted by the society, by our parents…The difference in the status is a big hindrance…...It cannot happen…he tried to reason with her….she said you will not understand it now…..…He just placed his fingers on her lips and said …You love me right?…..She very shyly said…..Yesss…She had melted with his touch and had lost all power to argue……… They were leaning into each other very closely, their foreheads touching and then… … …..his lips brushed hers, softly, just long enough for her to shudder and feel the warmth of his skin.. She was pleasantly taken aback….. ….The flaring sensations that the soft kiss had caused were like a thousand bombs exploding at the same time……Raghav held her face and kissed her forehead, her eyes, her cheeks …with every kiss, a desire ran from her heart to her chest to places she didn’t even know existed!!!!! ……Chakor unknowingly closed her eyes in anticipation……But Raghav just held her head on his chest and his other arm wrapped around her. At that moment Chakor knew that she never wanted those arms to leave her, ever!

A quick meeting was again called by Rana to inform them that his friend would be sending somebody in a day or two to Azadganj to teach them how to make the stuff…..That person would pretend to be Rana’s cousin and would stay in his house. He further said that that man had to travel to other villages too, so he would be around for 2 days and in that time all of them had to learn quickly how to make the bombs and grenades ….. ….a thrill ran through all of them ….they felt that they were part of the freedom struggle in the real sense…..But again he reminded all of them to be very careful and to be alert all the time.The meeting ended. Vikrant was waiting for Raghav and Leela for Chakor, but Raghav said that he would drop Chakor….. Did the tingling feeling return!!!…. The questioning look on his friend’s face was met with a not so satisfactory reasoning of C’mmon,Mr. John may try to harm her ….. …….She half-heartedly tried to protest in front of Leela and Vikrant but Raghav was firm…..Leela and Vikrant started off for their homes but not before suspecting something.

After ensuring that they were alone, Raghav and Chakor started walking hand in hand. They were enjoying the serene silence together. They realised that they did not always need words to communicate. The silence was equally effective. Suddenly Chakor shivered in the chill of the night. Raghav rubbed her arms and held her close. The warmth flared sensations again. Both didn’t want the walk to end. But Chakor’s house came in sight and the hug was broken. Raghav held her face close, traced the outline, moved his finger over her lips and then kissed her hands. She was totally lost in him. He shook her from her reverie and said that he would meether the next morning at the village square in the protest squad. Chakor said…..No , don’t…He was annoyed and asked Why??? I don’t want to leave you alone, infact I could take you right away to my place and keep you in my room for ever. She blushed and resembled a tomato…he went crazy just looking at her….and pulled her for a hug…...she was enjoying his possessiveness ……. but said….Raghav, let Mr. John think that you are not a part of this….You can help us better that way…..Plus your father will also not get hassled….If you come out openly it might create a problem for you and your family. So as of now pleaseeeee listen to me and be a ghostworker…..hmmm….ok…what you say makes sense chakor……but remember …..the moment this Ghost senses that you are in trouble, he will come out in the open…..ok…done…done….Very reluctantly they said their byes and set off for their homes though both knew that sleep was going to evade them for sure….

Raghav and Chakor had decided that they would tell their parents about the relationship once the operation GOBAR was over successfully….till then they had to keep meeting secretly…(though according to Raghav, meeting secretly had its own charm….and Chakor had to accept that the thrill to hide it from everybody and meet each other gave a different high)……... ….

In the meantime, Rana informed the core committee that the expert in bombs and grenades would be coming the next day from Lucknow.

Chakor and Raghav knew that once this bomb making stuff begins, they would not get much time for each other, so they decided to meet secretly that night. Chakor had a family function to attend in the evening after which she said that she would try and hoodwink the others and come to the shed. Raghav as usual was there before time. He was hoping that Chakor would come. He knew it would be difficult for her with all the relatives present around her. But he was crossing his fingers and praying….It was almost half an hour past the meeting time. Raghav was losing all hopes. Suddenly somebody closed his eyes from behind. A smile spread on the handsome face. He lovingly said Chaaakkkooorr and just pulled her hands and got her in front ……his eyes opened wide in amazement. She was wearing a simple Khadi saree with her hairfalling lose, a light kajal and jhumkas. He was awed by the beauty in front of him….He couldn’t but exclaim, BEAUTIFUL!!! She bent her head feeling shy. He cupped her face but when she saw the look in his eyes, she turned crimson and turned her back to him and was breathing rapidly. He came from behind, moved her hair and put his hands around her waist. That sparked such sensations in her that she actually shivered. He whispered in her ears…..Chakor you are very beautiful. I love you very much…..why don’t you say something…..she tried to move away from him, she was very shy…and a little tensed as they were alone in the shed…...he pulled her back….Please don’t leave me…said he….Don’t know how many days till we meet again like this….He kissed her neck….She was losing herself in his love…..Embarrased with the various feelings he was arousing in her, she jerked herself free and tried to run to the door….But alas her foot got tangled in her saree and she toppled. A pair of sturdy hands tried to stop the fall but that resulted in a tumbling for both…with chakor lying on top of him….He had hit the floor and exclaimed an ouch….she felt bad for him and tried to reach the back of his head to see if he was hurt forgetting that her moving over him to reach his head was causing a stir in him.....when the realisation hit her, she came off him in a jiffy….In one swift movement he pinned her to the floor…She whispered…what are you doing? He said …what are you doing? Don’t you trust me? Do you think I would ever take advantage? You have hurt me Chakor…. She was startled…… noooonoooo I trust you completely….Then lowering her voice she said….but now I don’t trust myself… …....I love you very much Raghav…Don’t you ever think like this…he just hugged her tight. …..

Nikki dear🤗

part5...

Dear, you are just winning me over day by day with the way you write Ragkor scenes..Aww thats Meejalicious everytime and exactly I could visualise it onscreen. uff why you people arent the writers for udaan..how that bhallaji everytime succeeded to find the dumbest writer than before after some golden time in udaan.

First one first, no one was injured was the biggest relief. Then that frightening moment made Raghav emotions came out.. he confessed..aww thats lovable& emotional...soon but loved..:)

And chakor chose to hide and escape from him as of now... and concentrated on their mission for nation...thats typical chakor but poor Raghav.

He was included in the core committee and the change of emotions happening in both when each time they see..i am loving it.

she went home, only his words ringing in heart❤,decided what her heart wants, ❤..still decided to not to convey ..not fair chakor dear.. poor raghav dear. he was so disturbed. couldnt concentrate at home too..lol

then next day, they deciding on lucknow matter and having conflicts in opinion. good to see they having diff ideologies , that will be interesting further too..

true it always hv conflicts to choose the best when the opponent is evil enough..

whats john next move dont know.

relieved to read chakor accepted the blast mission after confirming only material loss involved. hoping its that way alone.

Then raghav determined to know her answer and I would love to hear her too ...❤

waiting eagerly for next..

but, i am late 😁 before I post my reply, yiur next part is here😊