The Greener Pasture....My first & final Story on my Sukor , my ado - Page 9

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Posted: 6 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: katheriene

Beautiful update Sumi, no words for it🤗

The pace is fast but loved it
Teju consoling Chakor & allowing Chakor to cry for seeing the real Chakor😊
Loved the way Teju made Chakor understand about making Raghav a part of life😊
Raghav making Anjor asleep was beautiful👏
Raghav's confession, Chakor's decision was perfect👏
KY's revelation was bang on
Ragkor knowing that the culprit is in the haveli
Anjor now knows the truth😕
Raghav got hit on the head
Interesting precap
Waiting for next


Thanks Sonali

Yes I wanted Teju to make up for the damage she did early. and I strongly believe that every wrong action needs to be corrected.

i so much wanted family scene and I always loved Suraj and Saanvi scenes so thought to bring it about.


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Posted: 6 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: 77nikita

Fantafab sumi dear 👏👏👏

Suraj comeback full on whistle whistle 😳

Thanks for fulfilling our wishes!!!

Chakor being smart, police also kadak...its such a pleasant change from the actual😉

Cherry on top was the way teju explained things to anjor... that's what grandma's 's are supposed to do, right? I felt that was seriously lacking in the serial... they would just show anjor running away and teju making her wierd faces and that's it... no explaining, no trying to make a kid understand stuff... very wierd that was...

So thank you so much for writing this...

Waiting for the bonus😳


Nikkiii

I had to write full 10 Chapters to get that word I crave for from you...

suraj come back yesss... the lion has to roar na...hope the effect was felt...

seriously yaar all the grannys are not worried about upbringing and especially Teju hmmm

Thanks for reading it patiently...

Bonus😉


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Posted: 6 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: A.Theepa

Great 👍🏼
Hamara suraj wapas agaya
Eagerly waiting for Bonus 😳


Hi Theepa

thank you deary


Yess Hamara Suraj Wapas aagaya 👍🏼

Bonus he he will get back...😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
#84

The epilogue and the Bonus

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The pasture is green.. everywhere...

Love is in the air everywhere...

And...

She is small, beautiful and fits into me perfectly!!!! Everytime!!!

They rose again, high above as they are divine not to be doused!!!

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Chakor could not understand anything but was feeling dazed...

Chakorr that chakorr brought her to senses, incessant tears were flowing...

She hugged him tight tight fusing into him... Chakor ham aagayee thumhara Suraj aagayeee

An ambulance came to take Chakor and Suraj

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After their initial emotional moments with Teju and Anjor, they were taken into the treatment room.

The hospital ensured they were in the same room as Suraj was insistent and chakor was dizzy too...

Suraj was badly wounded but he was not leaving chakor's hands who was in the next bed.. the doctor was smiling and treating his wounds. He said the head wound is too much so I shall give you anesthesia as it will be painful. He outrightly said No, no making me unconscious as I had just come to consciousness and can bear any pain just holding my Chakor. The doctor finally finished dressing his wounds and

She was dizzy but her brain was thinking, how can this happen??? I searched him everywhere!! How did he turn to Raaghav and her heart shuddered had I accepted his love as Raaghav... What will he think of me... her mind was boggling..

Her hands which was held by him shook... he knew there was too much going through her... She opened her eyes and saw her hands held tight by him...

Suraj!!! She just went near him... DP... Don't think too much... I know whats going in your mind... he spoke without opening his eyes...

Jungli billi thum sirf hamara hai aur hamesha hamare hi rahehi...

(your are just mine and will always remain mine, I will rise from ashes, to ensure you are mine in any form)

I know you love only me and cannot love anyone!!

I love you Paakandhi for this, as I know you will never leave me!!. Thank You once again...

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It was few days gone by and the Haveli was decorated to ensure that the King returned from exile... all were waiting for SuKor... Anjor along with Rajjoo, Giria had made special arrangements.

But...

Sukor and Teju were travelling towards the village in Lucknow...

The old lady was eagerly waiting for her son's return... its going to be more than 30 days... no sign of him... have I lost him again...

He came to her... standing at the doorstep, Ammaa...

She was confused... his SR attire...along with Chakor and Teju besides him.

Raaghav, mera beta, she went running to him, hugging. Teju was all tears...

Who are they? Where were you? Why did you not come early?

He hugged her made her sit, he said Amma you have to come with me as you are no more to stay in this house... the people around gathered... they were all awe to see them.

She could not understand, chakor explained about the happenings, Teju hugged her and was thankful for taking care of her son, no their son as she said Suraj is now son to both of us...

The old lady was at loss of words, she went to bajrangbali and thanked him but was hesitant to go along as they were from the rich family...

Chakor was very sweet in making her understand that if she had not been there Suraj would not have been with them now.

The old lady thanked god saying she got not only a son but a family too... She said I will come with you but I can stay close by not in your Haveli as I am not to used to that luxury living. Chakor said she can stay in Mai's house..

Happily they went and thanked the Ved who treated Suraj. He blessed them and said to Chakor your love is too strong that he refused to leave this world though he was brought here lifeless, but I knew something was holding him back. He blessed them and was happy that they took the old lady along with them.

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Ajor and the whole village was waiting along with KY...

All were happy and Anjor was happy that she got two grannys to play with... She went with them..

Teju ensured Sukor spent some time together after all the hardship..

KY said Chakorji, a happy news the Minister of Urban development has sanctioned a huge amount for the AZ unnati project and we can work a schedule for the same. She thanked and asked but Inspector why did you refuse your promotion and your new posting!! Why you wanted to be in AZ...?

Suraj noticed it ... Arey dumbo Chakoria.. Inspector saab wants to be in AZ as his interest is in AZ..

Haa?? She saw Rajjoo blushing... Oyee aisaa !!! KY went to his jeep asking Rajjoo to take care...

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So !!!

So!!!

She asked!!! Knowing what he was upto !

So we now need to start planning about AZ development!!

Arey DP always in jagat mata mode...

PP and you always in "that" mode.

"That" mode which mode.. Their room was fully lighted with candles with roses strewn all around..

She was in a beautiful yellow saree with a jacquard blouse..

Suraj was in his white and was mesmerized at the beauty in front...

She went up to Suraj with the small silver container... He understood and filled her maang with sindoor and held her very close to him..

Achcha tell me one thing!!! Hmmm, he was just drawing his hands over her cheeks... and held her bare back, playing with her doris...she was loosing herself... My man all myself...

What to tell...

How much you missed me!!

Miss you!!! Pouting her lips, scrunching her eyes ...Haan actually I was better with Raaghav, he was so cute, giving all respects...very careful... he was tigheting his grip...mmm

Achcha he pushed her on the bed... so Maidam wants Raaghav, he teased her... She laughed no no I like only my PP my Suraj, that rough, tough who handles me with love, that love which makes me forget everything...that love which heals me, her eyes was turning dark with lust and so was his...

He made her lay on him holding her and brushing her strands!!! Chakor, I had those nightmares, the image of you shady crying holding on to me, which I could not just get off... I could not figure it too..I was lifeless, with wounds all over, but my soul knew someone was waiting for me, I cannot go away...

She closed her eyes placing her head in his chest, for she was getting into tranquility,,, but Suraj how come the bandhuva mohar is not there... If it was I would have sensed it... but somehow I too got the vibes but the jitteriness of the blast made me go numb... I searched for you the whole valley but... He said yes his right hand was burnt thanks to the herbs...

She became so emotional that she started to shake... He held her tight... she went into him...

He wiped her tears... No more tears my dear, only cheers...

But Suraj what made you hold on to that the shady one was me... He lifted her chin, slowly kissed her lips very slowly very lovingly...and kissed all over her face sending shivers to her spine which she had been craving for... If I have to die let me die this moment in his hands... That thought which made my soul lingering and holding on to for was

Was...

That...

He took her completely into him saying you are small, beautiful and (his voice turned husky with full of lust) you perfectly fit into me...devouring her completely!! And indeed she went into him as they went into another world!!!

Chanduji was happy shining at his adories through the window and ensured that the breeze drew the curtains while he was too turning pink...

Sukor love is divine... No one can love each other like Sukor...

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Surajjj!!!! Chakor stared at him angrily...

Maidam ... please aap aisa math dekho bey!! He turns into Raaghav whenever she gets into the Jungli billi mode...

Kyon Gyaan Dev, dar gaya kya??

Chakor and Anjor both had their hands in their waists laughing!!! They were getting ready to go to their respective classes... Chakor was going to the sports centre as a coach training the children for the oncoming marathon.

Anjor was ready with her swimming sessions as she was participating in the Asian swimming competition...

Hum kissi baap se bi nahi darthey... Suraj Raaghvanshi Hai mum... he said...

Acchaaa!!!! They said in one voice

Uaaannn cried six months old Aarav from his baby cradle...

Na na beta naa please math !! I can manage anything in the world but not your cry,,, I go crazy...

Mummy, Amma please come ... both the granny's came rushing at the hearing their grandson's cry... lucky is he who has them to cuddle always...

Anjor go down and wait I shall come with my coaching bag said Chakor...

bye daadeee, mumma come soon...

He came and backhugged her, nuzzling, Suraj chodo please I have to go... Anjor is waiting and you don't leave a moment to ...mmm he closed in her with a sweet kiss.

Yes DP, I go all the more crazy looking at you... Mission Dozen is yet to complete..

She ran away from ...hmmm...

Hey marathon runner take care and coach the kids well!!!

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Walked in Inspector Kaushal Yaadav... Suraj ji the plan for the next phase of development is all ready for the Unnati Project. We may go to meet the investors.

He waved to his mothers and kissed Aarav and went along with KY and Chagan.

A sense of satisfaction as he drove as AZ was developing... happy faces... As there were well laid roads, well lit houses, proper housing, sanitation, schools and hospital.

He was now going to take it to the next level of bringing investors to invest in the silk industry and handicrafts to reach to the international markets.

He walked in his blue and white full tuxedo...with style and attitude...

Press, industrial powerhouses were waiting and so were the investors.

They were extending their hands to him and he was shaking them... Thank you

Suraj Raagvanshi Hai hum, the husband of Chakor Rajvanshi...

The media was covering it live as it was first of its kind for a small village to rise to the international level..

Chakor was in her coaching centre watching the TV, looking at her MAN with full of Pride.

My Suraj...

My Sun who rises for me and never sets till I want him to...

(thanks girls I rest completely in peace - My first and the last story and my final post)

Edited by sumsukor - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#85
Beautiful epilogue, no words for it🤗
The hospital part was beautiful
PP understand his DP so well😳
Sukor brought Amma to Azadganj, loved the entire sequence😊
Loved Sukor's romance😳
Sukor's love is divine😊
We got KY & Rajjo love story😉
Atharav is nice name😊
Sukor & Anjor are successful in their respective career😊
Azadganj developed so much
Suraj is on mission 12 mode😆
So it is a good bye , will miss you😭
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Posted: 6 years ago
#86
Thanks sumi 👏
Sukor
Missing them 😭
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Posted: 6 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: katheriene

Beautiful epilogue, no words for it🤗

The hospital part was beautiful
PP understand his DP so well😳
Sukor brought Amma to Azadganj, loved the entire sequence😊
Loved Sukor's romance😳
Sukor's love is divine😊
We got KY & Rajjo love story😉
Atharav is nice name😊
Sukor & Anjor are successful in their respective career😊
Azadganj developed so much
Suraj is on mission 12 mode😆
So it is a good bye , will miss you😭


thanks Sonali

happy that you liked it

yes SR never likes to be indebted, he clears his debt, so in all fairness thought to bring amma to AZ, while so many evil has lived why cant a good soul live.

sukor romance😉😳

Yesss liked KY and thought to pair him with Rajoo... poor girl she has no one and she was indeed selfless in helping Sukor..

Yes career I always wanted Chakor to pursue her dream

AZ development thank you so much that you liked this. So bugged to see the same goats and windmill yaar😆😆

Mission 12 yesss my dude is very very focussed, isnt he😃😆

Will miss you too very much

now dream about your dude😉😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: A.Theepa

Thanks sumi 👏
Sukor
Missing them 😭


Thanks Theepa

I know its too long but thanks for your patience in reading my essays😆

sukor... yes missing but VOOT Zindabad thats my mantra

and I am happy as they are in my dreams...always...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#89
Fantafab fantafab fantafab epilogue dear👏👏👏
Thoroughly enjoyed reading

All points covered just like we would have liked thenm to be

Right from rajjo, to AZ development, to career to Amma and last but not at all the least, the moments... how we have craved for them!!! Ufff

So thank you so much for writing ... it's like an oasis in this parched desert😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: 77nikita

Fantafab fantafab fantafab epilogue dear 👏👏👏

Thoroughly enjoyed reading

All points covered just like we would have liked thenm to be

Right from rajjo, to AZ development, to career to Amma and last but not at all the least, the moments... how we have craved for them!!! Ufff

So thank you so much for writing ... it's like an oasis in this parched desert😳


Thanks so much nikkiii deary

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