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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: meshmesh

Suraj's story is very sad. The fact his sister was also Vicky's victim will make him more determined to protect and help Chakor.

So Chakor will stay with Suraj, interesting. Eagerly waiting for the next part.



Yeah he will do everything to protect her
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi .

Recap; Suraj talked abt his past. How Vicky kidnapped his sister n raped her. Suraj took a oath to take revenge.

Vivaan; Suraj Ins. Ajay is right we have to keep her safe. Suraj; I know she will stay with me. Riya heard it all. Have u all gone mad. Do u know what u r saying she needs police security how will u help if a goon appear? Suraj; u know how she is! She will get scared... she can't live without my support. Riya; wrong she needs to get free from u so she can live her life on her own. Suraj; Riya... stop! I will take care of her.

Vivaan; enough...! We have to think but Suraj isn't wrong if we gave Chakor to the police custody she may get killed. The police station could have many currupt people who may work cor Singhania.

Riya; I didn't thought abt this. Suraj; what if... Vivaan; what? Suraj; I just gave Ajay the only report n DNA I have... shit. Riya; do u think he will do something like this. Suraj; U break up with him u tell?!. Riya; I break up with him bcz of his behaviour toward u n our working relationship not bcz he is currupt. Suraj; hmm. Riya; what? Vivaan; that was very bad... Riya; tell me what?.

Ajay; I'm sorry Riya but... u were working all the time n u... Riya slapped him. She gave a death glare to Suvaan. Ajay; Damn it. I screwed again. Suraj; ya u did. Ajay; U thought I am currupt? Suraj; y u come back? Ajay; I had a similar feeling. I would say u make a copy of the file n sample.. I think I will enter it as John Do... Suraj nod he made a copy of the file. Ajay left this time for real.

Vivaan; Chakor is attached to u. U have to care for her but when u work she will be alone n she might get scared she could suffer a shock. Suraj; oh man but I can't take her along with me to work. I have to make some arrangements.

Suraj went to make his routine n Vivaan went from there too.

It was evening n Chakor was discharged. Suraj had brought her clothes to wear. Chakor rubs her nose. Suraj; Chakor here wear this. Chakor looked at the clothes.
Chakor nahi...



Suraj; please wear. Chakor; no yuck. She refuse to wear. Riya come in n gave her some of her clothes. Chakor liked one dress hahah .



Chakor starts to take off her clothes in front of Suraj n Riya. Suraj turned to face the wall. Riya; Chakor please not like that. Chakor looked at her she pout. Aahh. She turns n looked at Suraj she hugs him from back. Riya; Chakor I will help u. Chakor; nahi. Only Suraj.

Suraj turns with close eyes. OK I will help u. His eyes were closed n stayed close. He touches her shoulder. She shiver. Riya; Suraj let me help. Chakor hugs Suraj. She doesn't liked it to be touched by someobe else than Suraj. Suraj hugs her back he opens his eyes n asked Riya to leave the room. Riya nod.

Suraj; Chakor I will help u but U have to listen to me. Ok? Chakor nod. Suraj took the blanket. Suraj; Chakor hold it up in front of u. When u have took off all ur clothes. Chakor was removing her clothes Suraj was looking to wall. Chakor; done . Suraj; Gud now u will hold this blanket with one hand. Suraj took out her undergarments...

Suraj; Chakor I... I... can't help u. Here. Chakor took was standing there. Suraj; U done? Chakor; no!. Suraj; y? Chakor; can't! Suraj; what?. Suraj looked at her. She hold the blanket. can't. Suraj; u r very smart. I will take it. Now u can change? Chakor nod. She was ready.

Suraj; come... Chakor walked behind him. But soon she was holding his hand. She was looking here n there she barefoot. Suraj didn't saw that. Chakor n Suraj arrived to the parking lot. Suraj pressed a key. A sound was to hear ping ping. Chakor; oh. Suraj; that is my car n this is my car key n the sound u hear comes from my car. Which now open. Come. Chakor; haan. .

They walked to his car n Chakor felt something on her feet but didn't say anything. Suraj sat on the driver seat he out on his belt. Chakor saw it n copied him. Suraj mobile rung. Chakor; hn... Suraj; mobile. Oh Ajay. Musibat {problem}.

Chakor giggles. Suraj smiled at her.

Phone convo

Ajay; hello Suraj.
Suraj; yeah
Chakor pout screamed loud aahhh . She stamped with her feets n hands. Suraj; shit. Chakor... Chakor...!.
Ajay I will call u back.
Ajay; ya sure.

Suraj get off the car n walked to her side n opens the door. Suraj hold her tight. I'm sorry. Chakor . Suraj; sshh. Chakor look he gave her his watch. Suraj; I'm sorry I'm taking u in a car but it is save no one will see u. U r covered. Look my window glasses r dark n it is me no goon. I'm ur friend right?. Chakor nod she sniffs n cleans her nose with her hand. Suraj smiled at her he gave her a hanky but she cleaned her hand on the dress... .

Suraj was back on his seat n called Ajay.

Ajay; everything fine?.
Suraj; ya everything fine.
Ajay; Hi Chakor!.
Chakor; doost {friend}.
Suraj; y u called?.
Ajay; I have given the samples to the Labour n soon we will have the result.
Suraj; Gud n how we go further?
Ajay; first we need the prove n the sample is now our best chance.
Suraj nod. Ok.
Ajay; when u arrive give me a hint. I will stay around to her protection.
Suraj; no no there is no need.
Ajay; I don't care what ur problem is I will come that's final.
Chakor; Final.
Suraj; fine... Bye.
Ajay; bye... bye Chakor
Chakor; she waited... bye bye {the 2nd bye sounds more like bhai}.
Suraj n Ajay; Bhai?
Chakor; Ajay bhai bye .
Suraj .
Ajay... piep...

Suraj n Chakor arrived. It had rained the day n there was a large puddle n Chakor jumped in. Ah hahaha. .

Suraj; Chakor... but he was lost in her innocent she was the who brought the light back into his life. Suraj hold her tight he then saw she were barefoot. He lifts her up into his apartment which was one of the secures buildings in thr city.

Chakor n Suraj were in the lift. Chakor pushed a few buttons just for fun. When the door opens she clapped. Suraj was still holding her in his arms.

Suraj put her down n took out his key. He opens the door but made her wait... Chakor cries . She putted her hands on her eyes. Suraj comes with a wet towel n cleaned her feets n legs n gave her some house shoes to wear. It were his shoes but she loved them even if they were to big for her small feets.

Suraj opens the door completely. Chakor walked in n made big eyes... Suraj closed the door. I will take care of u. That is my promise n I will keep my promise.

Chakor was jumping around Suraj shows her the bedroom. Chakor; my? Suraj nod. Chakor jumped on the bed...


Suraj was sitting on the couch his new bed...

So hope u liked it


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Posted: 7 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: _Sukorian_

Sukor an innocent Love

- An Accident -

Hi thank u for reading .

It is a sunny day the temperature r very high. Suraj Khanna lives alone in his apartment in Delhi.

He wakes up daily at different times bcz of his work schedule.
(can u guess what kind of work it could be?).

Today he had to wake up early to arrive at his working place. He never comes late he is very responsible alot of pressure is on his shoulders.

Suraj got up from the bed n streched his body up he did some small fitness like push up n step ups to maintain his fitness. He then went to the washroom n took a cold shower . Suraj; shit too cold... . He took his towel n dry himself n wore some fresh clothes.

He was standing in front of the mirror looking at him. Suraj; Hi handsome . Today u look just mind blowing . He left with his case for his work.

On the other side of the city a girl is running. She is running away from goons who r following her to kill her.

A goon; Get that girl we havr to kill her before she can speak to someone.

The girl runs n runs she alwys tries to be faster than them n she succeeded. She collided with someone... A man; girl what is ur name n y r u running like this?. The girl; My name Chakor. Goons following. She hides behind the man.

The man took her inside his car to hide her. U r save here. Just wait till I call u. Chakor nod with an innocent smile. Ur name?. The man; Vicky.

The goons went to Vicky. A goon; Sir she run away. Vicky hit him badly just to impress Chakor. Vicky; get lost I have her n I will clear this. Go. The goons run away from there.

Vicky got in his car Chakor looked at him with big eyes she thanked him but the biggest mistake she could do was staying in the car in the hope of help.

Suraj was on his way to his work place. When the sun vanish n clouds took his place. Suran; Damn hope it won't rain. I forgot my umbrella.

Chakor cried a lot in the car. Vicky hits her n she lost her conscious. She was thrown out of the car n landed im front of Suraj was hell shocked to see her he tired to remember the car number but the car doesn't had one.

Suraj looked at her. She was in a very bad condition. He comes closer he was shocked to see her condition she is in deathly cobdition. Suraj frighten he could imagine what could have happened to her.

The goons were back at their hideout. The Boss was waiting for the gud news. The head of the goons; Boss!. The Boss; what? The goon; she... he was breathing heavily. The boss; I hope for u that u killed her!. The goon shook his head n the boss points the gun on him. The goon frighten. Boss Vicky baba took her. The boss laughed in amusement. Hahaha. Great then she is death my son never leaves a work incomplete. The goon reliefs.

Suraj called the ambulance. He checked her pulse n her breath. She was not only hit in the car but also raped by the man. Her lower part was bleeding he took off his jacket n hides her place.

Vicky arrived at their place. The boss/papa; Vicky my son. He took him in his arms n tapped his shoulder in proud. Vicky; Oh Dad when I heard that the girl run away I was worried but that stupid run into my arms. The Boss; what u did with her? Vicky; oh dad she won't say anything anymore I throw her out of my car after... He smiled evil. The boss; that is my son. Well done.

The ambulance arrives. A paramedic; wow what r u doing there. Sir get away from her. Suraj moved after doing the first aid. The paramedic; Oh that is a police case I can't do anything.

Suraj stood up. What u can't do anything! What is ur name? The paramedic; Sir it's police case have done this. Suraj anger grow he took the collar. I am M.D. Suraj Khanna I don't care if it is a police case. I have sworn to take care of the patient's at any culture n situation bcz I work for their lives. It is my duty n urs too. Take her in I take the responsibility.
N remember one thing if she dies here I will make u responsible for her death!.

They took her into the Ambulance n drove to the hospital. A nurse; Oh my gosh what happen Mr. Suraj Khanna ur shirt is full of blood. Suraj; Riya it's not my take her to operation theatre I'm coming n call the police it is a rape case with attempt to murder. I also need clean bags for her clothes to save the evidences. Riya; ya sure.

... what u say I'm sorry it's short I know but I wanted to give u a proper start .


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Posted: 7 years ago
#64
It was very cute update😛
Chakor was so cute😆
Suraj is so patient with her😊
Loved ajay & chakor's friendship as well😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: katheriene

It was very cute update😛

Chakor was so cute😆
Suraj is so patient with her😊
Loved ajay & chakor's friendship as well😊
Waiting for next



Thanks u deqr sorry for my mistake with the update post...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting update!
Chakor is so innocent and Suraj is taking good care of her.
Chakor trusts no one except Suraj but doesn't rate his taste in dresses 😆.
It was a lovely moment when Chakor called Ajay Bhai.
Will Ajay keep an eye on Chakor when Suraj is at work or will Suraj take her with him?

Eagerly waiting for next.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: meshmesh

Interesting update!

Chakor is so innocent and Suraj is taking good care of her.
Chakor trusts no one except Suraj but doesn't rate his taste in dresses😆.
It was a lovely moment when Chakor called Ajay Bhai.
Will Ajay keep an eye on Chakor when Suraj is at work or will Suraj take her with him?

Eagerly waiting for next.



Thank u dear. Yeah something like this gonna happen
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi thank u all for ur lovely n sweet comments. Thx for ur patience with me .

Recap; Suraj has decided to take the responsibility of Chakor. Ajay will help.

Suraj was sleeping on the couch whereas Chakor is sleeping on the huge bed alone in the darkness. She was afraid scared the darkness was haunting her. She was crying n couldn't move out of the bed she couldn't see rightly in thr darkness.

Chakor cry grow from a small whimpering is become a loud scream n cry. Suraj woke up n runs to the bed room. He couldn't see her n switched on the light. Chakor looked up n with her hands she calls him.

Suraj totally confused he walks to her. Chakor hugs him tight. Suraj caresses her head. Chakor sniffs n sob. Suraj; Chakor relax I'm here na there is no need to be scared. Tell me what is burdening u?. Chakor didn't answer she just fall asleep in his embrance.

Suraj; Chakor... he hold her back n slowly put her on bed. But she was holding him tight. He couldn't move he grip was strong. He made her lie comfortably n tried to lie next to her it didn't take long n he slept peacefully after a long time.

Chakor woke up first in the morning she looked at him his arm was around her on her back but with the other hand he made a pillow bcz he had put his pillow between them. Chakor lied over him with big eyes she looked at him. Chakor doesn't like it to be alone n the stilness was literally killing her. She hide her face in Suraj chest. Her hands were holding his shirt.

Suraj felt the weight on him but he likes the warm breath on his chest he automatically hugs her. Chakor was unknown of the feeling in her but she smiled feeling him.

Suraj was breathing continually Chakor removed her hands n hugs him with a smile on her face she shout.

Suraj I'm awake. Suraj crack his eye open in scare. Chakor was smiling on him. Suraj was breathing uncontrolled... Chakor; Suraj... she got scared. Chakor was breathing controlled n made him to look on her n copy this. Suraj smiled.

Suraj; Chakor I'm fine thank u for ur concern. But got frighten of ur sudden waking idea. Chakor looked at him as she doesn't know anything abt what he is explaining to her.

Chakor; hungry... brrr her stomach talked too. Suraj laughed loud. Chakor hasn't seen him laughing she clapped n laughed too. Suraj; ok first go to the washroom n fresh up. Chakor hold his hand. Suraj; ok I will come with u .

Suraj n Chakor were at washroom he gave her a toothbrush with toothpaste. She brushed her teeths like Suraj did his. Chakor was kinda jumping from one leg to the other leg. Suraj; with a full mouth if toothpaste. What? Chakor showed on the toilet. Suraj; oh... - Suraj beta aab kiya karega tu? toh gaya {Suraj what will u do now? U r done} -.

Suraj; hmm I'm waiting outside. She waved him a bye... Suraj -. She didn't need help -.

After a while Suraj was waiting poor guy the pressure on hus bladder grew. He hammered on the door. Chakor how long will u take... he looked down the water comes out down from the door crack. Suraj opens the door Chakor was in the bath tube with clothes.

Suraj; Chakor... I have to pee he said more to him than to her. Chakor u have to promise me something. Chakor; noo. Suraj; what? Chakor; no. Suraj; I thought we r friends. I was so wrong abt u maybe u don't like me... U break my heart. He made a heart with his hand n cranked it to demonstrate.

Chakor; aahh . Suraj; oh oh.. Chakor u like me? Chakor nod. Suraj; ok fine I trust u but u have to make a promise. Chakor was thinking. Sura was thinking too - what is she thinking? -. Chakor; ok. Suraj; with a relief. look I'm not angry bcz of this n I forgive u but u have to close ur eyes. Chakor closed them... Suraj; don't open them ok. Chakor nod. Suraj closed the bathcurtain. He finally could empty his bladder .

Chakor; ccchiii. Suraj; unbelievable close ur ears I just... I just pee...
Chakor; bad boy. Suraj finished washes his hands n opens the curtains. Chakor has opened her eyes. Suraj; u r very smart right. Chakor .

Suraj; don't smile like that bcz u r not. Chakor pout. Suraj; u said u r hungry right then y r u taking a bath? Chakor; new... she looked down. Suraj; ok I will give u clothes n u will change like yesterday... Chakor looked
with a sad face. Suraj; what? He is was had alot of concern n tension in. Chakor; bad clothes... . Suraj; ok fine today u wear then later we go shopping. Chakor .

Suraj was in the kitchen preparing the breakfast he started when he remembers to bring her clothes. Suraj enters the washroom Chakor was in towel. Suraj - I'm such a stupid. Just bcz she behaves like a child she isn't one -. Sorry Chakor next time I will knock. Here ur clothes.

Chakor took them n Suraj left. Chakor comes out with wearing the clothes awful! clothes. Chakor found the remote control well she thought it was for the tv but nop the sound systen goes on with painful like heavy metal songs were playing. Chakor screamed holding her ears tightly.

Suraj comes he turns of the music n gave her the right remote control she watched cartoons like the fairy oddparents Jimmy Turner. Chakor laughed n clapped. She was happy Suraj places the food on the table.

Suraj; Chakor come have some food. Chakor to the table but her concentration was on the episode... Chakor took the plate she filled it with food n sat on rhe couch. Suraj comes ready to eat n saw the empty seat. Suraj was a bit angry. He switched off the tv. Chakor confusingly looked at the tv... She stood up n hit the tv. Suraj was shocked he stood up too but to control her. Chakor; bad tv. Suraj; haan bad. Come let's eat together. Chakor; aahh. she opens her mouth.

Suraj walked to her hold her hand n goes to the table with her. He made her sit n sat next to her n feeded her.

...

Thanks again for ur support. Sorry for mistakes.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#69
Amazing update👏
Chakor is so cute😛😛
Suraj is facing difficulty in handling her😆
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: katheriene

Amazing update👏

Chakor is so cute😛😛
Suraj is facing difficulty in handling her😆
Waiting for next



hehe thank u yes he facung some difficulties

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