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Shar456

@Shar456

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Posted: 7 years ago

#251

Interesting story but also sad that vivaan n his father escaped I hope sukor n Ayan will be safe

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

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Posted: 7 years ago

#252

Beautiful update👏

Loved the way Sukor came closer to each other😛

Loved Sukor's moment😊

The end was shocking, the vilians escaped, hoping nothing happens to Sukor &Ayan

Waiting for next

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#253

Wow..it was really an amazing update sis..

I just loved the cute antics of ayan while suraj talks to him..

Girija and chakor bond was lovely..

Suraj and chakor romance was cute and superb sis..

U know wat sis..i was thinking the same tat how they get mingled..bt when i see ur writing abt our assumptions..i was laughing like a mad..

Tat culprits r escaped..is they harm our sukor?

Eagerly waiting 4 next update sis..

Luv u..tc

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Krupy

@Krupy

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#254

Absolutely amazing!

Maithu thank you for this amazing and relaxing update at the end of this day.

Loving the way they expressed their feelings.

Ayan is soo cute. Well he must be he is Sukor's baby.

Eagerly waiting to find out what will happen now when enemy's escaped.

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#255

Amazing update

Getting Girja back was a sweet and thoughtful surprise by Suraj.

I was surprised by Sukor's scene in Chakor's bedroom, but liked how you showed the progress of their relationship.

Liked the discussion during the film. Sukor's confession was cute.

What a twist at the end!!!

Eagerly waiting for next.

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 7 years ago

#256

Maithu first a big🤗

yes exactly this is the way I wanted their proximity to proceed... smooth, platonic with ice broken and lovely... both feeling for each other not forced feel... loving that word😉

i was feeling like listening to a song!!! loved it

what a apt thing that he values her relationship by bringing in Girija. loved their bonding.

his talks with Ayan is so cute... Cute suraj...

Hmm I knew those culprits will escape... as how can my sukor be in peace... and sure they will try to harm Chakor and Ayan... Sure Suraj is plannng his strategy.

excellent Maithu

keep going!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: Shar456
Wow maithu wat an awesome update please maithu one small request some romance of sukor as this story is my favorite

I'm doing my best dear!

Well I can say that there is a dinner thing in the next part ;-)

Thank you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: Shar456
Interesting story but also sad that vivaan n his father escaped I hope sukor n Ayan will be safe

Thank you so much dear!

Happy you like this story!

Hope all goes well!

See you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#259

Originally posted by: katheriene
Beautiful update👏
Loved the way Sukor came closer to each other😛
Loved Sukor's moment😊
The end was shocking, the vilians escaped, hoping nothing happens to Sukor &Ayan
Waiting for next

Thank you so much dear!

Glad you loved Sukor moments!

Let's hope for the best dear!

Thank you !

See you

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#260

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
Wow..it was really an amazing update sis..
I just loved the cute antics of ayan while suraj talks to him..
Girija and chakor bond was lovely..
Suraj and chakor romance was cute and superb sis..
U know wat sis..i was thinking the same tat how they get mingled..bt when i see ur writing abt our assumptions..i was laughing like a mad..
Tat culprits r escaped..is they harm our sukor?
Eagerly waiting 4 next update sis..
Luv u..tc

Thank you so much sis!

Happy you loved this part, Ayan cuteness and everyone's bonding!

Well, I would have asked the same if I was a reader so wrote your thoughts Heee

Will let you know in the next part, what happens!

Thank you!

See you!