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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Shar456

interesting update maithu waiting for next update to see sukor romance

Thanks dear!
Happy you find it interesting!
Will be on time tomorrow with romance Heee
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj

Wow.it was an amazing update sis..

Suraj was well prepared..
Is the villains going to back once again sis?
Wat chakor s searching for?
Sis tis s not at all fair y u have stopped at the nook point..can't wait 4 their romance..
Eagerly waiting 4 next update sis..

Thank you so much sis!
Yup dear! Suraj was all set to blast LOL
Well I can't reply to your questions now, you will see it soon!
Well! Just 1 more day and all is well!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Amazing update! Action packed.

Chakor-Ayan scene was cute.
Glad that Suraj surprised the villains, that's why he was very impatient.
I wonder what was the plan of Chakor's uncle.
Was Chakor looking for her mangal sutra?
Loved Sukor moment.

Eagerly waiting for next part.

Thank you so much Mai!
Happy you enjoyed ChAyan scene!
Yup dear! That was the reason for his impatience!
Well her uncle's plan was to escape for now!
We don't know yet what she was searching for! :-|
See you tomorrow!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Interesting update maithu⭐️
Looking forward to sukor momentsI will never forgive you for ending the update at the apt moment😈


As I couldn't take part in the opinion club yesterday, I would share my opinion now😛
This is one of my favorite stories maithu, plz don't end it in 2-3 partsthe fire has just lit between sukor😒
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Posted: 7 years ago
It was amazing update Maithu! Loved it.
The last part was just perfect
Please don't end it too soon
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Golden.dust

Interesting update maithu⭐️

Looking forward to sukor momentsI will never forgive you for ending the update at the apt moment😈


As I couldn't take part in the opinion club yesterday, I would share my opinion now😛
This is one of my favorite stories maithu, plz don't end it in 2-3 partsthe fire has just lit between sukor😒

Thank you so much dear!
Happy you are liking it!
Heee What to do dear, suspense is needed and it is for 2 days and not 4 days LOL
;-)

It is still open for all the buddies who want to share a word, so no pbm!
I can understand dear, but as I said in my previous posts, it's not easy for me too to quit it but as I always say, I need this story to end in a good way.
And it's done, 3 more stories are on their way, so for sure, you will get to read the fire in one of them Heee
Please understand dear!
Sorry!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Krupy

It was amazing update Maithu! Loved it.

The last part was just perfect
Please don't end it too soon

Thank you so much dear!
Glad you loved it!
HAppy you enjoyed it!
I can't assure you how many parts I will have dear! :-|
See you tomorrow!

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Posted: 7 years ago
Hello!

How are you all doing?
As we are nearing the end and few things are needed to be get cleared, so need of long long parts, I'm thinking of doing 2 parts for this one.
One is here and the next one is for tomorrow!
So in case you didn't get any message, it's because, I will send it tomorrow only! Sorry!

Link to the previous part : Part 13

Happy reading!

*******

Part 14 A


With their thumping hearts, both opened their eyes to get drown in own world.
Letting the baby's bib to fall down with the feeling flowing all over her body, she gripped tight his nude shoulder as he was just in his track pants.
Her open waist which was out of her saree border, got in contact with his body, making those places to burn with fire.
Her open hair which feel on the side of her face, hiding partially her pretty eyes, got his attention as it was hiding something so interesting for him.

Getting his right hand from her waist, he slowly got it to her face, to pull those strays of hair behind her ear as his fingers caressed her skin, making her shiver under his touch as she closed her eyes again.
"Chakor" he called her normally but his voice turned out to be so huskily that it made something something in her tummy as she just hummed while her cheeks got colors "You are so"
"I think your mother need help to find your bib!" Shieku to Ayan as they neared the room, breaking the magic the newly married couple were as Chakor opened her eyes alarmed.
Adjusting her hair, she tried to get up only to fall on him more as he was still holding her.
"Leave me!" she said.
"Huh?" he saw her as he was still in a trance.
"Ayan and Bhai are coming!" she said as her eyes travelled forth and back from door to his face.
"Hmm Yeah" and he removed his hand, letting her get up and he also sat.
She bent to take the bib and right at the moment, her brother knocked on the door.

With still her heart in her hand, she neared her brother and gave "Here it is!"
"You see!" turning to the kid "We have come on right time to get it!" he said and in return he got a smile from the kid.
As Shieku was about to open his mouth, she made it close even before he could say something "I will be down soon Bhaiya! You feed him!" smiling at his sister, he disappeared from there leaving the couple alone as the atmosphere turned hot and awkward with him on bed, hands giving support for his head and she over the door, with her eyes closed and right over her beating heart.

*** What was that? ***

- Why I'm reacting so with her? -

*** Why didn't I get up immediately? ***

- What is happening? -

*** Should I say sorry? ***

- Do I have to do something? -

*** His voice? ***

- What happened to my voice that I lost it? -

*** He is doing something! ***

- She is indeed affecting me and my mind! -

After a lot of thinking, he lifted his head, freeing his hands while she opened her eyes and both turned to face each other to see that something is not same in their equation.
Something has changed!
Something really happened!

"Iii" both said.
"Uuu" both said making the awkwardness grow further!
"You tell!" once again both!
And the next thing was also a similar one as both asked the other one to talk through their hands, making both of them to smile at each other.

After showing her his hand to stop with a smile on his lips, he said "I think you need to go to see Ayan!"
"Hmm! Yeah! That was what I was going to say too!" she said with a smile as she made out of their room.

And that day night, something happened that neither he nor she expected when they were lying side by side on the bed.

*** It's strange! ***

- Why did I do this? -

*** Should I move? ***

- What can I tell her? -

They were thinking of a simple thing as if it's the biggest thing happening in their life.
You might be asking if it's a kiss on forehead or him putting his hand around her and pulling her closed to him...
No! It's nothing of this sort!
He just put his right hand over her left hand which laid on the bed, in an instinct and now thinking 1000s of ideas to get out of it.

Right at the moment both were about to open their mouths, Ayan cried, making Suraj to taking his hand off hers and Chakor made it up to Ayan in a jet speed to check what was wrong.

Once checked, she gave him water to drink and put him to sleep, to join the bed and sleep on her side as he was facing the wall on his right.

- This needs to stop! -

*** Why it's always awkward with him now? ***

And both slept with these different thoughts.

Around 11 in the morning, the inspector came and gave some papers to Suraj and wished him luck before getting out of his office.

"Can you please check them?" Suraj said to Chakor as she sat opposite to him with Ayan on her lap as he asked.
"Can't we check on this after lunch?" she asked.
"Now is better than later!" he said handing over the papers and getting Ayan who holding her Mangalsutra.
Seeing his hold on it, Suraj freed it from Ayan's hand and accidently his hand touched a zone which is kind of forbidden for him, the zone over her check, just at the edge of her blouse, making her look scandalized.
Changing his demur immediately, he looked at his child in his hand and said "Let's leave Mama to look at it while we go and get something to play!" and he left from there.

- Great escape! -

*** Is he doing wantedly? ***

Scolding her fate, she opened the file to get shocked as her expression gave away all the question she could have.
With the giggling sound of Ayan, she came back to earth and faced him with a look that said "How did you do?"
And he for the first time told her his part of the story.

***** PAST *****

The night she told him her real identity, all he thought was it wasn't fate which played the game over his family but an unknown person who did this.
And it is not only for his family but for someone else who was meant to be his wife if that is really what his parents wanted.

- Should I tell her who I am?
What if she gets scared and go away?
I need time to think and get the culprits punished!
I need to wait! For truth to win! For Ayan! -

And that is then, he got to think that he can do things besides of her if he is related to her.
After checking with his own detective friend, he got confirmed that whatever she said about her past was real.
And with that he decided to ask her hand for marriage.

- This is what our parents wanted!
And I want to make it come true! -

And the moment she accepted, he wasn't sure of the reasons behind her acceptance.

- I don't know the reason behind your acceptance but I will sure you become a part of the family, our family! -

He promised to himself.

And the day arrived when he brought the documents to be signed.

- Will she read it? How will she react if she sees it! -

And the moment she said she trusts him, he felt like someone slapped him.

- Should I tell her there are documents to claim back her properties and to file case on her uncle and cousin?
Then she might think wrong about me.
No! Not now! Its better now than latter but not in this matter!
She will know it on the right time! -

And with those documents, he filled the cases of forgery and murder and asked time to set a plan to trap the culprits on the right moment.
And that is what happened.

***** PRESENT *****

"You have done all these for me!" she said.
"For us and our parents!" he said.
She nodded.
"I want you to take over your father's company from tomorrow."
"But"
"No buts! You are doing it! I will arrange what all you need!" he came sat with Ayan who was playing with his elephant toy "I will be by your side whenever you need! Got it?"
"As if I have a choice!" she said as she sat.
"And I forgot to tell you that they might got lifelong imprisonment for the crimes they did as what we knew are less than what they really did!"
She nodded with a thankful smile which was evidently returned.

*******

Thank you for reading!
Leave your views over this part!
Sorry for not sending a separate PM, I will be sending it along with tomorrows update!
See you!

Next part : Part 14 B

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update n want more romance waiting eagerly for tom update n little long
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Posted: 7 years ago
It was an awesome part sis..
Sukor awkwardness mixed romance s so cute..
Shieku come at the wrong time😭
The way suraj brought her parents asset to her was superb sis..
Want to read more romance of them😉
Eagerly waiting 4 next update sis..😊

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