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@appledesire

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#91

A big applause for writing such a lengthy.. os..
U r great. .

This is perfect ending..
I love characters portrayal..but 1 thing.. iam eager to know.. how chakor hurt his male ego.?

Chakor.. monologue too much real..
Reading your stories.. such a stress buster.. and.. brought a smile...

Maithu._ dhanyavaad...
Not only suraj.. but chakor is possessive too..

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#92

It was an awesome update maithu sis..i loved pod very much.. Characterisation was fabulous..i was laughing under my pillow while reading tis part..

I just want a husband like suraj..❤️i just loved him very much while reading this..How can a man love a girl like tis..Every girls has a dream of marrying a guy like him..

You just portray him like an angel with devilish antics..Chakor thought was fantabulous...No words to express my feeling..Just Luv u a lot maithu didi..👏😛

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#93

I love Suraj in your stories...

And this SR to above all...

He is perfect husband, perfect SIL, perfect lover, perfect friend and a perfect man...or kya chahiye ek ladki ko...

Sometime I'm jealous of chakor...achha kia jo contact ko jala dia...good job...👏

I always told you I love chakor's monologue but today suraj's dialogues won my heart...😳 He is so much carrying and loving...But love chakor's possessiveness she is too much...😆

Or ye kya Saare villains ek saath...ragini, tina, vivaan or Aditya bhi aa gaya...😆

Long and superb update maithu...just fantastic

Thaam loon tera Haath or tuje iss Duniya se dur le jau...,

Jahaa tuje dekhne wala mere siva koi or naa ho...!!!!

Edited by Khushi_Dillse - 8 years ago

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Sruti

@vs215blooms

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#94

Happy ending...😛 lovely... I enjoyed it... Keep shining dear maithu... Eagerly waiting for your other beautiful works...😊

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av131

@av131

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#95

Loved POD a lottt !!!
Suraj is a man of dreams...
Waiting for BILY next part and TOFM

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: vvv
thankyou so so so much dear kab se intezaar kar rahi thi
and the story is awesome
now waiting for BILY and the one for me
😊
POD is so superb maithu keep it up

Sorry for making you wait dear!

Finished it in the morning itself but didn't got time to post due to 2 continuous meeting.

Thanks yaar!

Glad u find the story awesome.

Will try to update BILY tomorrow morning or else it will be in evening.

And TOFM will be updated after 3 weeks.

Taking a small break from writing !😊

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: katheriene
Beautiful ending👏
It was a long one but loved it😊
There was no loopholes in it
Loved your imagination, you mould sukor in different characters so easily😊
Waiting for BILY & your new story
Continue your ff as well, you have not updated it for long

Thanks Buddy !

Yep! I don't know how come I write this much!

I'm feeling shy with your compliments !😳

I will try to update my FF when I come back with TOFM!

See u!😉

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Wonderful update!. The whole story is great, I love Suraj's and Chakor's personalities here, they're perfect for each other. I see Vivaan suffered a gruesome end 😊. Thank you for your amazing creations!

Thanks dear!

I feared a little if people will be ok with Vivaan being the goon and been killed! As of now didn't got any negative comments about it.😉

Without your support I don't think I would have written this!

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: appledesire
A big applause for writing such a lengthy.. os..
U r great. .

This is perfect ending..
I love characters portrayal..but 1 thing.. iam eager to know.. how chakor hurt his male ego.?

Chakor.. monologue too much real..
Reading your stories.. such a stress buster.. and.. brought a smile...

Maithu._ dhanyavaad...
Not only suraj.. but chakor is possessive too..

Thanks buddy !

I think I should buy a dictaphone with the length of text I'm starting to write😉 but it will have difficulty to understand my English pronunciation !😆

I'm so happy that my writing makes smile my lovely readers!

It's my pleasure to entertain you all with the words I know!

Moreover I'm leaning a lot since I started writing and I'm still learning few new words.

They are always Made for each other !

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
It was an awesome update maithu sis..i loved pod very much.. Characterisation was fabulous..i was laughing under my pillow while reading tis part..
I just want a husband like suraj..❤️i just loved him very much while reading this..How can a man love a girl like tis..Every girls has a dream of marrying a guy like him..
You just portray him like an angel with devilish antics..Chakor thought was fantabulous...No words to express my feeling..Just Luv u a lot maithu didi..👏😛

Glad my writing made you laugh !

I won!😃 One of my objective fulfilled !😉

Me too falling each time in Love with Suraj!

My parents are searching for my groom, should I give his details ?😳

Your comment made my evening dear!

Love you too a lot sistah !❤️

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago