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needuraj

@needuraj

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Ithna jaldi last chapter ;( . But koi nai u r awesome :*

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: katheriene
Amazing update👏
Loved how suraj pulled chakor's leg😆
Suraj knows chakor so well😊
So sukor kissed 😊
Where is chakor
Waiting for next
You can call me kathie, my real name is sonali

Thanks Sona!

Want to see scenes like this, hope one day it happens.😳

Yep they kissed after a long time, many years passed.

You will find Chakor in the next part dear!😊

How can I finish without our favorite couple.

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: pershial

No! thats not the reason
i should wait for ur next part for a week (waiting is not a very big issue but u ended it with a suspense )and to know that i should wait for one week 😭

About ur 3rd part
it was just amaaazing...(you could guess my reaction)
really everything was so perfect 👍🏼
especially chakor and trishna conversation (funny )😆
as always sukor conversation was also super😊

"Bad night evil dreams about u " seriously? i was laughing 🤣
chakors expectation of suraj to call her baby was naughty 😆
waiting for ur next part sadly 😔 and very eagerly... 😃

Sorry dear!

But don't worry I will try to post BILY on time and there is a surprise on Saturday!😉

I don't know how it will be? You have to wait!

Thanks a ton for your lovely words.

I think I can realate your reaction to my little sis when she reads my stories!😆

You caught the right word dear "Baby"! It's going to play a beautiful role in BILY!😛

Hope the next part will be up to your expectations sistah!

See you!

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#74

Hahaha...This part was very interesting...

So sukor get married...And there invisible lakshman rekha...

So sukor first kiss okay it's not first by according to them...But here is chakor suraj kiss her and after there kiss she has to ask him how dare he kiss her but nooo she check her mehndi first it is okay or not...This girl is crazy...

And chakor's monologue are hilarious every time I laugh hard...you know what maithu what i love in this ff most..., it's your mind blowing dialogues...I literally imagine our sukor here...Wonderful update...so its karva cahuth and now chakor purposely disappeare...so suraj's on angry mode...let's watch what next for us...

Arz kia hai...

Tum jab bhi mila karo nazre utha kar mila karo...,

Muje pasand hai tumhari aankho main apna chehra dekhna...!!!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: gibbu
Res...❤️

Unres...
Congrats for another beautiful story. Read all parts today itself. Loved its novelty value, esp its prequel coming up as another fiction!! i see that you are turning a pro with your amazing writings. Kahaniyon ki baarish !! Superb.👏

The bickerings of the two legal luminaries here is just awesome. This Chakor is a funny contemplating creature. Loved her invoking God and her brains every now and then. Her thoughts in pink are just hilarious 😆 ; Hitler, Gorilla, Godzilla, Big Boss, boost, rose.. . i love all her appellations.
🤣

Feels like more than a play of destiny, its a play of SR - everything is possible 😉 without his violating any of the contract terms, perhaps he knew her sleeping pattern also beforehand. He knows her inside out. Wasn't the couch disappearence also deliberate? And Trish, girl !!! what have you caused: chemistry morphing into biology🤪. Smokin'

Waiting to take a glimpse of their teens in Baby...

Reading your comment made my evening Sweetheart!

Luckily nobody is there to see me else I would have to reply for 1000s of question as I was grinning.

With all your love, encouragement and wishes, I'm improving buddy.😳

I wanted this Chakor to be here to celebrate my 10th story!

What else can she do with Hilter and Gorilla holding both her hands.😃

Play of SR!🤣

He knows his game so well dear!

Speaking about her sleeping pattern, he know her so well!😊

May be he planned with his parents for the disappearance of the couch!😉

Trish is the best buddy of this story, she instigate the fire when the ice was already melting with the heat of their bickering.😳

Thanks once again dear!

Will try to make it up to the mark.

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: vs215blooms
Maithu dear,..😊 fabulously written... Perfect equation...😳 i love SR... He s amazing... is someone kidnapped chakor?? Whr did she go? Suspense... Restlessly waiting for d update...😊

The equation should be perfect so the solution could be find like SR & CSR.😉

I can't say what happened for now!

Thank u!😊

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: appledesire
Part 3.. so magical... classic & highly romantic ...
Sukor kiss... suraj helped chakor to broke karwa chauth fast( if she kept) thru hungry kiss 👍🏼
Chakor mini me monolgues superb..
I cannot wait till 4 may for next..
Sizzling chemistry n emotions portrayal.. mind blowing.. thanx for such a nice update

Still in sukorland..

Thanks a lot buddy!

In few words you summed up everything.😊

If only it could be the karwa chauth day, the kiss would have been more than magical.😳

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: vk1nonly
Wow now I know that 12th birthday secret.it was a kiss but I wonder they were just kids then.Can't wait for so long .But anything for sukor and your stories.

Thanks dear!

I can't say more than that about her 12th bd!

There is a 5 years gap between them as mentioned in the introduction of BILY, so Suraj was in his teens so fantasies are aloud.😉

I will make my next update on time.

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: vk1nonly
I think she fainted due to her fast of karwachauth.

NO COMMENTS!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Great update!
I loved their romance and small fights. Liked how she was upset that he didn't recognize her voice.

So they were already in love when they were younger, it seems Chakor thought that Suraj changed and forgot her or something similar.

Poor Chakor is in some kind of trouble, eagerly waiting for this update and for the prequel.

I'm feeling sad for her to feel left out.😕

If they were in love, I can't say that for now. Sorry!

Thanks yaar!