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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: pershial
😭
u know y i am crying

What happened sis?

Why are you crying?

I will try to guess!

You lost the comment you typed?

Or you are sad for Suraj?

Or...

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Amazing update👏

Loved how suraj pulled chakor's leg😆

Suraj knows chakor so well😊

So sukor kissed 😊

Where is chakor

Waiting for next

You can call me kathie, my real name is sonali

Edited by katheriene - 8 years ago

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SilverLove.

@SilverLove.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: maithu_

What happened sis?
Why are you crying?

I will try to guess!

You lost the comment you typed?
Or you are sad for Suraj?
Or...

No! thats not the reason

i should wait for ur next part for a week (waiting is not a very big issue but u ended it with a suspense )and to know that i should wait for one week 😭

About ur 3rd part

it was just amaaazing...(you could guess my reaction)

really everything was so perfect 👍🏼

especially chakor and trishna conversation (funny )😆

as always sukor conversation was also super😊

"Bad night evil dreams about u " seriously? i was laughing 🤣

chakors expectation of suraj to call her baby was naughty 😆

waiting for ur next part sadly 😔 and very eagerly... 😃

Edited by pershial - 8 years ago

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gibbu

@gibbu

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Res...❤️

Unres...

Congrats for another beautiful story. Read all parts today itself. Loved its novelty value, esp its prequel coming up as another fiction!! i see that you are turning a pro with your amazing writings. Kahaniyon ki baarish !! Superb.👏

The bickerings of the two legal luminaries here is just awesome. This Chakor is a funny contemplating creature. Loved her invoking God and her brains every now and then. Her thoughts in pink are just hilarious 😆 ; Hitler, Gorilla, Godzilla, Big Boss, boost, rose.. . i love all her appellations.

🤣

Feels like more than a play of destiny, its a play of SR - everything is possible 😉 without his violating any of the contract terms, perhaps he knew her sleeping pattern also beforehand. He knows her inside out. Wasn't the couch disappearence also deliberate? And Trish, girl !!! what have you caused: chemistry morphing into biology🤪. Smokin'

Waiting to take a glimpse of their teens in Baby...

Edited by gibbu - 8 years ago

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Sruti

@vs215blooms

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Maithu dear,..😊 fabulously written... Perfect equation...😳 i love SR... He s amazing... is someone kidnapped chakor?? Whr did she go? Suspense... Restlessly waiting for d update...😊

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@appledesire

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Part 3.. so magical... classic & highly romantic ...
Sukor kiss... suraj helped chakor to broke karwa chauth fast( if she kept) thru hungry kiss 👍🏼
Chakor mini me monolgues superb..
I cannot wait till 4 may for next..
Sizzling chemistry n emotions portrayal.. mind blowing.. thanx for such a nice update

Still in sukorland..

Edited by appledesire - 8 years ago

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Vanshika Singh

@vk1nonly

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Wow now I know that 12th birthday secret.it was a kiss but I wonder they were just kids then.Can't wait for so long .But anything for sukor and your stories.

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Vanshika Singh

@vk1nonly

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: vs215blooms
Maithu dear,..😊fabulously written... Perfect equation...😳 i love SR... He s amazing... is someone kidnapped chakor?? Whr did she go? Suspense... Restlessly waiting for d update...😊

I think she fainted due to her fast of karwachauth.