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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse
I love Suraj in your stories...
And this SR to above all...
He is perfect husband, perfect SIL, perfect lover, perfect friend and a perfect man...or kya chahiye ek ladki ko...
Sometime I'm jealous of chakor...achha kia jo contact ko jala dia...good job...👏
I always told you I love chakor's monologue but today suraj's dialogues won my heart...😳 He is so much carrying and loving...But love chakor's possessiveness she is too much...😆
Or ye kya Saare villains ek saath...ragini, tina, vivaan or Aditya bhi aa gaya...😆

Long and superb update maithu...just fantastic

Thaam loon tera Haath or tuje iss Duniya se dur le jau...,
Jahaa tuje dekhne wala mere siva koi or naa ho...!!!!

Thanks Buddy !

I'm so happy that u love this SR!

Hope you will also love the initial state stage of SR in making too, I mean in BILY !

U remember once I created a post to ask if I can use Characters as I want!

Thateden 🤡 I used most of them!

I think I'm lucky that everyone loves long update else I don't know how I would have done with +4000 words!

Love all the 2 liner poems you write.

I have a question can I use them in one of my future story?

Will be waiting to know!

Thanks once again !

Edited by maithu_ - 9 years ago

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: vs215blooms
Happy ending...😛 lovely... I enjoyed it... Keep shining dear maithu... Eagerly waiting for your other beautiful works...😊

Thank u dear!

All your words means a lot to me.

Will be back with new plots!😛

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: amrutha131
Loved POD a lottt !!!
Suraj is a man of dreams...
Waiting for BILY next part and TOFM

Thanks buddy!

I will say Suraj is man of words!😉

TOFM after 3 weeks! 😛

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SilverLove.

@SilverLove.

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Hi maithu di😊

Awesome ,Awesome, Awesome ,Awesome i love it

it was amazing .

it was not terrible at all.

My Fav

Suraj Dialogue

one scratch on my wife ur whole empire will vanish into thin air (awww i loved it)

Scene

chakor imitating like suraj and surajs reaction this is one of my favvv... scene (i loved their conversation during this scene)😛

this chakor is so funny that i cant control laughing .🤣

i love chakors monologue(i am so similar to her)😆

i loved the conversation when sukor were in police station and adi intervening them (it was kinda cute )

surajs confession OMG there is no words to describe how much i love it .

You are mine and only mine (aww how possessive he is)😉

ok ok i stop here otherwise my comment will be as long as ur post😆(i mean the 4th part of ur POD )really how come u made this much big post?.anyways i love it.thank u very much for taking time to make this big part .😃

ur POD and BILY has become one of my fav stories .

take ur own time for next story

by the way i hope after 3 weeks the bachuva track will be finished.

and i think our forums members will also be back so that ur stories will get many likes.and ur story deserves minimum 100 maximum 10,000++++++++++++ ?????.

I am eagerly waiting for TOFM.

i am very much interested in TOFM as it involves imli .

if possible pls post anything about it .

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Fan Of Your Stories

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: pershial
Hi maithu di😊

Awesome ,Awesome, Awesome ,Awesome i love it

it was amazing .

it was not terrible at all.

My Fav

Suraj Dialogue

one scratch on my wife ur whole empire will vanish into thin air (awww i loved it)

Scene

chakor imitating like suraj and surajs reaction this is one of my favvv... scene (i loved their conversation during this scene)😛

this chakor is so funny that i cant control laughing .🤣
i love chakors monologue(i am so similar to her)😆

i loved the conversation when sukor were in police station and adi intervening them (it was kinda cute )

surajs confession OMG there is no words to describe how much i love it .
You are mine and only mine (aww how possessive he is)😉

ok ok i stop here otherwise my comment will be as long as ur post😆(i mean the 4th part of ur POD )really how come u made this much big post?.anyways i love it.thank u very much for taking time to make this big part .😃
ur POD and BILY has become one of my fav stories .
take ur own time for next story

by the way i hope after 3 weeks the bachuva track will be finished.
and i think our forums members will also be back so that ur stories will get many likes.and ur story deserves minimum 100 maximum 10,000++++++++++++ ?????.

I am eagerly waiting for TOFM.
i am very much interested in TOFM as it involves imli .
if possible pls post anything about it .
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Fan Of Your Stories

Thanks a ton sistah!

You made my day with you lovely words.

I think most of us do like Chakor.

One of my sisters is like Chakor. Always muttering something instead of just thinking when she is angry. Sometimes it's fun but sometimes it's terrible. 😆

I would like to be a vampire to listen to others mind. LAMO

I will say even Chakor is possessive.

She never let him speak with girls (BILY), she is torturing with her questions on Ragini...

Possessiveness is something I like in-between couples but not to the point of becoming obsession.😊

As I said I don't know how I did that miracle.

I don't know how I wrote 4000+ words. I'm sure it was a ghost of a writer! LOL😃

I don't know what I was in my previous birth but I know that in this birth I want to try whatever thing possible to do(writing, playing keyboard...)😉

OH my little sis! Thank u!

I'm already grateful to all who read my stories and appreciate my work through likes and comments.😳

Imli is there in TOFM but she will be just crossing their path as I will focus on SuKor only (like I did for all my other posts).

I will not post anything of it but I will post a sneak-peak of a new story CAY!

If you want just tell what does CAY means.😛

Thanks a lot sis!

Love You!

(My comment is as long as my post ROFL)

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Eatifi

@Eatifi

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#106

Aaahhh completed,finaaaly...ll😛

Maithili,I need to give you a really tight hug for this one...it was simply amazing...🤗

Parts that caught me.😳

1.typical Sukor,the tom and jerry couple...

Our hatke jodi,as different as north and south poles,but complimenting each other in every situation,every fight.😃

2.the witty Suraj,his killer one liners.😉

3.the introvert Suraj.⭐️

4.the fact that just like real Sukor,both try to dominate each other...but slowly ended up dedicating their being to each other.❤️

Each and every Sukor part was a delightful read,so aptly written that I could just imagine everything...😳

The kiss was SIMPLY BREATHTAKING...so beautifully described...

Chakor's monologues were hilarious,🤣

(I felt as if its not Chakor,its me.Actually I also tend to have the maximum conversations with myself and I have also made a different self world of my monologues,were I comment on almost everything that happens)😆

The last part where Suraj expresses his feelings,was sooo touching.😳❤️

Only one query???❓

Did they kissed on Chakor's 12th birthday???🤔

It was a beautiful story...really,really liked it.😳

You are an amazing writer Maithili...👏

Keep going...!!!👍🏼

Made my sunday.😊

Edited by KUTUR - 9 years ago

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: KUTUR
Aaahhh completed,finaaaly...ll😛
Maithili,I need to give you a really tight hug for this one...it was simply amazing...🤗

Parts that caught me.😳
1.typical Sukor,the tom and jerry couple...
Our hatke jodi,as different as north and south poles,but complimenting each other in every situation,every fight.😃
2.the witty Suraj,his killer one liners.😉
3.the introvert Suraj.⭐️
4.the fact that just like real Sukor,both try to dominate each other...but slowly ended up dedicating their being to each other.❤️

Each and every Sukor part was a delightful read,so aptly written that I could just imagine everything...😳
The kiss was SIMPLY BREATHTAKING...so beautifully described...

Chakor's monologues were hilarious,🤣
(I felt as if its not Chakor,its me.Actually I also tend to have the maximum conversations with myself and I have also made a different self world of my monologues,were I comment on almost everything that happens)😆

The last part where Suraj expresses his feelings,was sooo touching.😳❤️

Only one query???❓
Did they kissed on Chakor's 12th birthday???🤔

It was a beautiful story...really,really liked it.😳
You are an amazing writer Maithili...👏
Keep going...!!!👍🏼
Made my sunday.😊