TS : Flechazo (Epilogue Added)

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse
This is intense maithu...
Sukor's first kiss...chakor's unspoken love and suraj's most romantic praposal...Everything was fabulous...beautiful written dear...love it...🤗

And Happy Birthday maithu...🥳

This one for you...

Kyon sharminda karte ho..,ye rasmi baaten pooch kar..,
Haal mera wohi hai...jo tumne bana rakha hai...!!!!

Was Suraj still naughty or not?

Thanks a ton for your wishes and for those beautiful lines!

Louve u dear!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: amrutha131
Thanks for this birthday treat Maithu !!! It's very delicious.

Glad the treat worked well!😉

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srividhya68

@srividhya68

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#43

wow
superb
chakor full on lost mode
suraj & sugary word - unimaginable combination
overall epic

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Eatifi

@Eatifi

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#44

OMG...worth the wait..Maithili,👏

I just love this short story...and Suraj...

The man can turn a dead girl alive with this attitude of his...❤️

The seat-belt scene,the gentleman kiss in car...

And the lift kiss...mind blowing...😳

In that particular lift part,,,,Sukor were kissing,,,,,and it was me becoming BREATHLESS...😉

I am in love with this BOLD Suraj..☺️

wish,I could have also encountered some FLECHAZO like this[just kidding]...

Well done...Keep it up👍🏼

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gibbu

@gibbu

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Gosh! All those tags- kitten, doll, sweety, sugar, honey, angel, flower, baby, sweetheart 🤣

!!!!

Coffee mug is an interesting character in this story-no car &lift scenes had it been absent, i suppose... 😃

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Radhika_r

@Radhika_r

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#46

happy birthday maithu!!

thank you for this beautiful for this TS!!am in suraj dreamland now!!

pl do write more!! make this a three shot would love to read one more update!!

have fun on ur birthday!!

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Tabsi

@Tabsi

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Maithu!! 😳 This was so cute and sweet. It made me smile :))

All those endearments; muffin, doll, sweety, honey, darling melted my heart

I want this Suraj in the serial!!

P.s A very happy birthday to you 😊

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: srividhya68
wow
superb
chakor full on lost mode
suraj & sugary word - unimaginable combination
overall epic

Thanks Sri!

It's one of my wish to see him use these sugary words for Chakor!

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: KUTUR
OMG...worth the wait..Maithili,👏
I just love this short story...and Suraj...
The man can turn a dead girl alive with this attitude of his...❤️

The seat-belt scene,the gentleman kiss in car...
And the lift kiss...mind blowing...😳
In that particular lift part,,,,Sukor were kissing,,,,,and it was me becoming BREATHLESS...😉

I am in love with this BOLD Suraj..☺️

wish,I could have also encountered some FLECHAZO like this[just kidding]...

Well done...Keep it up👍🏼

It's my luck that a writer ghost entered me to write this TS.😉

Thanks dear!

Hope to write of bold Suraj in future works.😳

Thanks once again!😊

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: gibbu
Gosh! All those tags- kitten, doll, sweety, sugar, honey, angel, flower, baby, sweetheart 🤣
!!!!
Coffee mug is an interesting character in this story-no car &lift scenes had it been absent, i suppose... 😃

I did a small research for those sugary words.😉

Coffee will have an other important role in one OS I'm actually writing😆

It will take time to come out my notepad++😛