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Posted: 8 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: pershial

hi maithu ur second part was really good i loved it.sorry i cant comment yesterday as newbies are not allowed to post more than 10 topics per day but now i am able to comment .

ur second was really amzing👍🏼 waiting for ur future FF or SS😊


No pbm dear! No need to say sorry!
Thanks yaar!
Will try to make my other works worth to read too.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62
Maithu Maithu Maithu!
OhMyGod its been ages! 🤗
First things first, Belated Happy Birthday Love! ❤️ Have a great year ahead! 🥳

Coming to this TS, let me just say, I was on the couch when I started, now I'm on the floor. 😆
It was brilliant! The way they were all teasing Chakor, I was laughing so hard, by God! 🤣 And sorry for not being able to reply to your PMs, haven't been coming online much. I will start to drop by more, I don't wanna miss out on stories like these.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Bravo... Bravo... Bravo... U r such a sweet heart maithu... It was amazing... Lack of words to say abt ur beautiful TS.. Suraj's attitude... Wow... 👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: BreakingBlue

Maithu Maithu Maithu!

OhMyGod its been ages! 🤗
First things first, Belated Happy Birthday Love! ❤️ Have a great year ahead! 🥳

Coming to this TS, let me just say, I was on the couch when I started, now I'm on the floor. 😆
It was brilliant! The way they were all teasing Chakor, I was laughing so hard, by God! 🤣 And sorry for not being able to reply to your PMs, haven't been coming online much. I will start to drop by more, I don't wanna miss out on stories like these.


Hi dear,

Hope you are doing good!
Thanks for the wishes.

It's my pleasure to hear you back here.😊
I was gone missing from this forum for almost 2 months and going back to pages to read your works and other friends works too.

In soap she is Jagaat Matha, so I wanted to make her a kitten to see how it feels.
I think it worked well!😉

For future stories I will send u PM for sure.

Thanks once again!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: vs215blooms

Bravo... Bravo... Bravo... U r such a sweet heart maithu... It was amazing... Lack of words to say abt ur beautiful TS.. Suraj's attitude... Wow... 👍🏼


Merci buddy!
Fallen in love with this Suraj again!😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Magnificient-that's all I can say. 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: parboni

Magnificient-that's all I can say. 👏

Thank u!😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey dears!


I wanted to see the reaction of KN here when he comes to know about his Kitten and his Son.
When I started to write, I thought it will be short but no. It exceeded 2500 words!

Enjoy reading. Hope I didn't lose the essence of this story and the characters.

**********

Last Part


"Dad! Why did you call me?" Suraj asked taking a place in front of his father.
"What is happening?" KN demanded.
"Business dad!"
"Nothing else?"
"Why? Are you expecting something to happen?"

Seconds started to pass, Suraj started to play with the paper weight.
"What are you doing with my Kitten?"
"I don't think we have bought a kitten Dad!" he played with his father's words.
"Don't play with my words Son. I'm talking about Chakor." a little seriously.


"Chakor! Don't worry dad!
I didn't eat her with my questions.
She is doing her job and I'm doing mine." he replied knowing well what his father wanted to hear.

After a second of reflection, KN informed:
"From today, I will drop her and pick her up on my way to office for the rest of the time."
"Why?" words came out even before interpreting it.
"I don't need to answer your questions Son." KN stated the fact.
"Dad, I promised Kasturi Maa that I will pick-up and drop Chakor during this one month." he didn't want to let a chance to spend time with his love.
"You don't worry Son, Kasturi will be happy to know that I'm doing that job."

"What about Chakor's opinion?" Suraj asked.
"She will be happy too!"
"If only you know!" Suraj muttered under his breath.
"Did you say something? You seem worried." KN asked seeing his son.
"No! Nothing!"
"Ok! Did you prepare for the meeting with the Methas?"
"Going on dad!"
"Continue the work!"

Suraj turned to leave and went near the door to open it when he was interrupted by KN:
"Get me few files I asked Miss. Rose."
"She is on leave." facing his father.
"Files are on her table. It's marked as RA Project."
"Ok!" he turned again to leave.
"You know where her cabin is!"
"Yeah! 5th floor on the left, at the end of the corridor."
"Get it back soon!"
"Yes Dad!" he left from there.

While taking the lift, he wanted to talk to Chakor so he took out his cell and dialed her number which went unanswered each time he tried.

Back to KN's cabin!
"May I come in?" a voice came from other side of the door!
"Yes Kitten!"
Chakor entered with a bright smile.

"Sit!" she made herself conformable before he could continue:
"How many time I told you to not ask permission before entering?"
"It is a good habit!"
"You are going to teach me now?" he asked with a smile playing on his lips.
"No! No!" she replied immediately.
"How is Suraj performing, Kitten?"
"Good!"
"Just good?"
"H...He is learn...learning fast."
"From today evening, you will travel with me from office to home."
"Mmm" she hummed without making eye contact with KN.

After few seconds, KN announced:
"I don't want you to be near him."
Hearing his voice a little louder for the first time, Chakor lifter her head to face KN to find his face with a expression she has never seen before, he continued:
"One more week and then there is no need for you to come here until you finish you studies."

She was startled by this sudden announcement and order as tears started to form in her eyes.
"Di...Did I do something wr...wrong?"
"Should I answer? I saw you both." still in same tone.
"I...I didn't. I...I"
"What I...I?"
"I..." tears started to flow from her eyes.
"What? You want to say you are not at fault? He is the only reason?" more louder than before.

"Dad!" Suraj exclaimed closing the door behind him, he heard his father accusing Chakor without knowing the reason.
"You should knock when I'm not alone!" KN said to his son.
Suraj went near Chakor and passed a tissue paper from the table to her while sitting beside her.
"Can I know if I'm the reason for her state?" asked Suraj to his father as he took hold of her free hand under the table, lightly squeezing it.
"If I say YES?"
"You shouldn't hurt her!"
"May I know why?"
"Nobody can hurt her!"
"Only you?"
"Why will I?"
"Answer yourself to your question!"

Suraj taking a deep breath started, facing his father, making an eye to eye contact while griping strongly Chakor's hand:
"We are in love!" he said which made Chakor stiffen in her seat, closing her eyes and a smile broke in KN's lips which she didn't notice.

Seeing his father's sudden change in expression, Suraj was hesitant to continue but a nod from his father encouraged him.
"We know what we are doing.
We know our responsibilities.
We will wait until she finishes studies and take her career to the level she wants.
We will be together in every phase.
And I will talk to Kasturi Maa and Bhuvan uncle when Chakor wants."
"That's good!" KN said enthusiastically making mortified Chakor to open her eyes to see father and son duo exchange happy vibes through eyes.

"Kitten!"
"Hmmm!" Chakor hummed in feeble voice bending her head.
"When are going to come to home?"
"Evening!"

Suraj started to laugh alone, later joined by KN.
Chakor felt like lost in a forest of an unknown world.
"He asked when you want to come to home as his DIL?" Suraj reformulated his father's query in-between his laugh.
She hid her face bending a little more and blush warmed her cheek.
"I should take a photo!" said Suraj leaving her hand to take his phone.

KN grabbed his phone and said sternly:
"She is precious! Never hurt her!"
"Cool Dad! Why will I do that to my Flechazo?"
"Flecha What?"
"A name only to be called by me!" Suraj informed.
"Ohh OK!"
"By the way how do you know that"
"I saw you both coming to office hand in hand." Suraj interrupted by KN.
"Luckily!" Suraj muttered in a way that just Chakor can hear him.

******* MORNING *******

"Get in Baby!" Suraj said opening the car door for Chakor.

Since the first day in the office, Suraj comes every day morning to take her with him once he confirmed she is alone at home.

The reason for him to confirm his surrounding is that he doesn't want to disturb Chakor with any other thoughts other than HIM and Studies.
One more reason is to steal a morning-kiss when she opens the door.

She sits calmly in her seat, lost in her thoughts.
Once in his place, he notices she is lost in her train of thoughts.
"What happened Honey?" he asked as he closed in her.
Feeling his hot breath on her face, she faced to lock their eyes for few seconds before throwing herself over him, hugging him tightly like holding him for her dear life.

Suraj embraced her with his chin resting on the crock oh her neck with closed eyes until he felt something wet over other shoulder.
He distanced a little from her and cupped her face.
"What happened Sweetheart?" pushing away the tears which were making their way on her cheeks.
"I...I don't know!"
"Is it because of me you are crying Love?" he asked with sadness evident in his voice.
"No... Me... Maa..."
"Did she ask anything about yesterday?" with care shinning in his eyes.
"Noo... but I feel doing" between her sobs
"You want me to talk to Kasturi Maa?" cutting her in-between.
She shook her head negatively.

It's been one and half week since they started their love story and yesterday they could have got caught if ...

******* YESTERDAY *******

Suraj need to prepare for a presentation and as Chakor knew the client, she is at his mansion to help him.

They were settled in Suraj's bed with Suraj's laptop in front of them and the door is closed but not locked.
Kasturi is well aware of their presentation only.
KN will be returning this night with Bhuvan as the metting turned in to a problem which got solved only by this morning.

"Angel! What do you think about this graph? I think it reflects our company growth. What say Sunshine?"
"Good!"
"I would like to hear your voice a little more Butterfly!"
"Will try!" still concentrating on the documents she was analysing.
"Fluffy! You know you could have said 'I will try to talk a little more Husband'!" he said encircling his arm around her shoulder and pulling her to himself, making her face him with his last word.

"Husband?" shocked.
"What? When you accepted me as your Lover, it means Husband too Princess."
"After marriage onl"
"Only one thing will change between us after marriage Pumpkin!" he said confidently interrupting her.
"What?" she asked.
"The love between us will increase by tenfold every second, Treasure." kissing her right cheek while taking hold of her right hand in his right.

She closed her eyes feeling him more than close to her.
He released her hand and pushed the laptop a little away from them, accompanied by files and documents, but still trailing kisses all over face.
With the havoc he is creating in her, she loses her balance and falls flat on his bed with him over her, closing her eyes.

"I Love you Cherie!" he whispered near her ear lobe, brushing his lips over it.
"Fruits' name!" with closed eyes.

He flipped their position, making Chakor lay over him.
Her hair caressed her face, hiding his visual.
Snaking his one hand around her waist, pressing her in to him and with his free hand, he tucks her locks behind her ear.
"Cherie means Darling in French, My little heaven."
"Why th...this many na...names for me?" her voice trembling with each kiss he is showering from her forehand to eyes, then nose and finally capturing her lips.

"My wish" he moaned while kissing.
"My wife" he added.
"My flechazo!" he finished sucking her lips

After extracting all juices from her lips, he started to draw her jawline with his sweet tortures which made Chakor to have a grip of him by holding a bunch of his hair and his shoulder.
He unbuttoned first 3 buttons of her shirt which made visible few of her assets.
He lingered his kisses until

BIP.BIP.BIP...BIP.BIP.BIP

Hearing his phone both came out of the magic world they were in. Seeing the caller id, he quickly peeked on her lips before taking the call, going to his balcony.

Chakor who was still in a daze, got up and adjusted her dress, hair. Over all her look.

Just at the moment she buttoned the last one, she heard a knock on the.
When she lifted her head to see, her mother entered the room.
Luckily she is safe for now, all she prayed is that Suraj doesn't show up until her mother is there.

"Have you both finished?" asked Kasturi.
"Yes Maa!"
"Where is Suraj?"
"Balcony" in a little audible voice.
"As you both finish, come down. Dinner is ready!"
"Hmmm" nodding her head.
"OK! Come soon!" saying this, she turned to go but stopped hearing Suraj's word:
"Can we continue what we started Sirenita?" emerging from balcony.

Chakor wanted the ground to open and take her in.
Suraj who could see only Chakor and not the person at the door continued:
"What happened Alma? What are you looking at?" following her gaze, he found Kasturi at the door looking at them, in an expression saying not-understanding what is going on.

Suraj quickly made his mind before anyone could utter a word and started his play:
"Kasturi Maa! When did you come?
I was going to come down to inform you that uncle and Dad will be late.
If you are ok, I will drop you both after dinner."
"Hmm! Dinner is ready. Come down!" she turned to leave the room.
"We have to finish what we started Kasturi Maa."
"Chakor said you both finished your work?" stopping at the room entrance, she asked the question which was poking her mind since he came back from balcony.

Chakor is mortifying with each passing seconds.
Chakor immediately turned her head to face Suraj who was giving a baby like look at her mother.

"We finish the main presentation. Just a last checkup and a few points to note down. That's it!" he informed.
"It's already late! First you both have your dinner then work." she said.
"We will join you in 2 minutes Maa!" he said as sweetly as possible applying all the butter he can to melt her.
Kasturi smiled at her lovely son and left nodding her head at her daughter.

"Uff!" he fall on the bed once he made sure that Kasturi was out of his vision.
He turned to Chakor who was biting her nails not knowing what her mother saw, what she can interpret... A lot of question were buzzing her mind until she was pulled by Suraj, making her land over him.
"What are you thinking Osito?"
"What are all those names you are calling me?"
"I think if I learn more names to call you, I will make you speak more to me." he said with a smirk before continuing "By the way Osito means Little bear!"
"Before?"
"Again one-word question! No problem! If I remember it was Alma annnd Sirenita, right?"
She nodded her head waiting for a translation
"Alma means Soul in Spanish and Sirenita means Little Mermaid in German!"
"Maa?" next question came out as soon as possible.
"Don't worry she will not know until you wish! Next time I will be careful. Is it OK Strawberry?" giving a peek on her forehead.
She nodded.
"Come let's go!" taking her hand, they left from there.

******* BACK TO CAR *******

"Don't cry Baby. It hurts me see you like this.
If you want, I will keep distance with you.
Just do one thing for me. Never cry Flower!"
"No I...I don't want" hugging him with her hands around his neck.
"OK! OK! Calm down! I will not go anywhere."

Few seconds passed before he could feel her calmed.
Separating himself from her, he passed water bottle to Chakor.
She corrected her look and said:
"I just felt"
"No need to explain Cutie! Can we go?"
"Hmmm!"

They started their journey to office together knowing well that KN would arrive before them.
Suraj stopped the car in parking place and came down to open Chakor's side door.
He had announced on the second day of their relationship that it's his right to make her feel like a Queen. So he is doing all he can to make her feel like a Queen, HIS QUEEN!

When he closed the door once she was out, he announced:
"You have a small punishment for crying!"
"Wh" even before she could pronounce the first word, he attacked her lips and tortured her until both were breathless.

Once composed from the havoc created inside her, she turned her head around to see if there were anybody else.
"I checked!" saying this he chuckled seeing her reaction.
She sighed.
"Come Cinderella!" interlocking their fingers which separated the moment they stepped out of the private lift.

******* BACK TO KN'S CABIN *******

"I trust both of you. I don't want anyone of you to be hurt." said KN.
Chakor & Suraj nodded as obedient student and left from there.

Months passed. The love birds met whenever possible and they hold their responsibilities.
They never went over than kisses and a start of make out sessions.

They successfully convinced Kasturi and Bhuvan when they opposed stating their status as a reason.
KN let his children deal their life without intervening even when Chakor's parents opposed.

Chakor finished her studies and just one month before she joined the company and this evening they got married.

Chakor and Suraj are in their marital bed, sitting with Chakor back resting over Suraj's chest, his hands around her body with one playing with her hands and another one playing with her nuptial chain while his left leg caressing her feet, making her feel ticklish and the other one taking rest while his chin is resting on her shoulder.

"It feels good to not hide from others Wifey!"
"Hmmm" she hummed.
"Where do you want to go for honeymoon?"
"Anywhere with you!"
"Wow Beautiful! You sound romantic!"
She pinched his hand.
"Ouch! I want sweet tortures Doll no this one."
"Like?"
"Like starting the process to make babies!"
"Chi!" blush creeping her cheeks.
"What is there to say Chi? You know that we are not going to talk for whole night. Just talking about it you are blushing. Remember we have other important things to do" if Chakor didn't intervene, he would have given a full explanation of what all he is going to do.
"Je t'aime!" she whispered closing her eyes in shy, holding his hands which are trembling.
"I love you too Chakor!" kissing her cheek.

"By the way how you learned French?" he asked.
"Not French! Just this!" she answered.
"I'm influencing in a good way I think.
Don't worry I will teach you a lot of things." he winked at her.
Saying that he made her face him and said what he wanted to say since the moment their marriage got fixed before he starts his lessons:
"I don't know how to say wife at first sight but every night I will say 'You are My Life! You are My Flechazo'!"

********** END **********

Sorry guys! I don't want to go in to details of his lessons! You see it will make my mind wild and I will do something something in my writing!

Thanks for reading!
LIKE & COMMENT if you enjoyed their journey and let me know what you liked and not. Tell me if I lost the essence of the story or not because I feel like that.
Will be waiting!

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago


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Posted: 8 years ago
#69
Beautiful ending, no words for it👏
Loved how kn interrogated sukor😆
Loved sukor romance😊
Suraj calls chakor by so many names 😊
The ending dud hustice to the titke
Edited by katheriene - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It was really amazing...sukor romance Uff...just loved It and the way he said "like starting the process to make babies!"
My gutter mind wanted more...but anyways you made the day writing this 😉

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