TS : Flechazo (Epilogue Added)

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Radhika_r
happy birthday maithu!!
thank you for this beautiful for this TS!!am in suraj dreamland now!!
pl do write more!! make this a three shot would love to read one more update!!

have fun on ur birthday!!

Thanks Radhu darling!

It's my pleasure to please you all with this small TS.

For sure will write more as lots of ideas are exploding in my little brain.

The pbm is that I have less time to write as working in an important project.

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Tabsi
Maithu!! 😳 This was so cute and sweet. It made me smile :))
All those endearments; muffin, doll, sweety, honey, darling melted my heart
I want this Suraj in the serial!!

P.s A very happy birthday to you 😊

Thanks yaar for the compliment and your wishes!

Me too want to see him use at least 1 or 2 sugary words for Chakor!

Let's hope!😉

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Kavya

@Kavi.Kapoor

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

What a romantic conclusion!!!Awesome ending,well worth the wait!

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Jasmene

@Chashmish786

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Actually worth the wait maithu...Thank you so much for such a beautiful, light heart story. You're writing skills are amazing. You deserve the appreciation 👏

And Happy birthday girl 🥳

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: -K.Kapoor-
What a romantic conclusion!!!Awesome ending,well worth the wait!

Thank u dear!

So happy to hear these much of appreciations!

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Chashmish786
Actually worth the wait maithu...Thank you so much for such a beautiful, light heart story. You're writing skills are amazing. You deserve the appreciation 👏
And Happy birthday girl 🥳

Thanks a ton sweetheart!

The best birthday ever with all ur wishes!

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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GrilledCheese

@GrilledCheese

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

loved this one! especially all the endearments were beautiful!

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Esha Singh

@eshasrk

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#58

I read this in one go and I really loved it...
KN in ur story is too good to be true, my gosh when I read how he behaved with BhuKa and Chakor I was pleasantly surprised...and Suraj...phewww one hell of a naughty guy. Really miss such Suraj in the show these days and Chakor totally opposite of what she is in the show...really really nice

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SilverLove.

@SilverLove.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#59

hi maithu ur second part was really good i loved it.sorry i cant comment yesterday as newbies are not allowed to post more than 10 topics per day but now i am able to comment .

ur second was really amzing👍🏼 waiting for ur future FF or SS😊

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: eshasrk
I read this in one go and I really loved it...
KN in ur story is too good to be true, my gosh when I read how he behaved with BhuKa and Chakor I was pleasantly surprised...and Suraj...phewww one hell of a naughty guy. Really miss such Suraj in the show these days and Chakor totally opposite of what she is in the show...really really nice

Thank u!

Yeah I know KN is surreal and Chakor is different.😉

Wanted to enjoy with their characterisation, I think I succeeded😊!