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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

It was a mind blowing update👏

No word for it

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geetkumar

@geetkumar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Wow!!!

This was such a roller coaster ride. Indeed was like falling down a rabbit hole. But, such an enjoyable one!! Each and every phase was most entertaining. Specially Suraj eloping with Chakor. And the best part, Imli nowhere being associated with Suraj.

So finally Chakor realized that Suraj is the most trusted one.

I really wish that Chakor of the serial would realize this soon.

I haven't seen inception,so it is a very fresh concept for me, Which I thoroughly enjoyed. And Suraj in her every thought. Dream come true

The ending was hilarious😆

And also, all the very best for your internship. I know it would be very difficult to get time while doing internship in medical, but do visit here occasionally.

Wish you all the luck.

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Namita

@Namita-M

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Aradhna, that was a treat to read. Made my day dear girl. So wonderfully written with details, that we all would have liked in the show.

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nycgal

@nycgal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

WOW WOW WOW!! Mind blown!! hats off to you , madam !!

My pulse was racing the entire time I was reading your story..left me spell bound and begging for more...Beautiful..the way u got in dialogues n references..a true master !!

THANKYOU AGAIN for your time and efforts..

you will write more, right? when time permits?

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Banjaaran.
now this is what i call desi answer to Inception.
yeah i know i wrote interstellar. actually i meant to write inception and ended up writing that.

what an intriguing, haunting, thrilling, disturbingly exciting story... or shall i say stories.
now i can rest in peace. reading it in snippets was so damn difficult. all that wicked suspense and my poor old heart.

and best part is.. ending. i was terrified that you will go 'khuraafaati' and pen down a dark ending. and i will be left depressed.
but what a delightful ending.

LOVED IT or what!

thank you for sharing this brilliantly crafted work with me.
and for the lovely shout out.
anytime mate!

be around aradhana. and all the very very best for your future endeavours.
success, joy and happiness.

loads of love.🤗

Nimmiii 🤗

Bohot bohot shukriya 😃😳

LOL yes, Inception (Sapanwa mein sapanwa mein sapanwa 😆)

Haha sorry about that...I'm so very restless. It's a wonder I was able to complete the rest of it in one night.

The ending was supposed to be ambiguous...were they only dreams after all? The one on the plane was a dream for sure, but the other two may not be... Two possible answers to this question and the clues for both are in the story itself! I was thinking of posting both the answers along with a list of references, but I'll wait for a bit in case someone wants to have a go at it :)

Nah...couldn't go khuraafati. Had one in mind. The Chakor POV canon-divergence I told you I was thinking of writing. But I didn't feel the urge to write it and so stole the whole "Suraj turns author" bit from that fic.

Thank you sooo much for your wishes, love, appreciation Nimmi 🤗

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: nycgal
WOW WOW WOW!! Mind blown!! hats off to you , madam !!
My pulse was racing the entire time I was reading your story..left me spell bound and begging for more...Beautiful..the way u got in dialogues n references..a true master !!

THANKYOU AGAIN for your time and efforts..

you will write more, right? when time permits?

Thank you, Rajshree! 😃

@bold I'm glad you noticed! I always put in more thought in the references than the story itself and it makes me very happy when someone points it out.

TBH, I'm finding it very hard to be inspired by the current storyline. The story happened only because I binge watched old eps. Maaan, I miss old Suraj so so so much!!!! The crafty devil, always one step ahead, flirting with Chakor, leaning in for a kiss to annoy her, his convos with KNR "beer mangwaein kya?" "aap pata kijiye latest sports car kaunsi hai jo aap humein gift karenge", pulling Vivaan out from under the bed "chuha bil ke andar chhup gaya" , rolling his eyes and chastising TJ-Ranju like a school teacher. Also the show just had this freshness to it that was lovely.

Sorry I broke the order to take this little trip down memory lane.

I will get back to you lovely ladies and thank you so so much for liking the story and leaving me your precious comments!! 😃

Edited by Aradh_27 - 8 years ago

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ipkrr

@ipkrr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Wow Aradhana!

You are a really good writer...your creativity, continuity & consistency in thought process is amazing. I'm always amazed by how you weave parts of the story seamlessly into your writing!

Vivaan is consistently put down :) Imli made inconsequential, Suraj redeemed easily and is so in love (I just could not relate to this) & I love your portrayal of Chakor!

Keep writing & thanks for taking the time to share your stories! My response seems so little in light of the time you've spent in giving this SS to the forum...so please know that I enjoyed reading this and you are one of the few reasons I still hang out in this forum.

I still watch the show...but somehow cannot drum up the initial enthusiasm I had for the story. I need Suraj to explore his past - clarify the relationship with Imli - for me to get engaged. The current storyline - with him falling for Chakor for what she has done for him - is so lame and unromantic...in comparison to what I was expecting. Let's see where they take it...still watching the show :)

Love

Priya

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna
Res.
Unres.

That was one roller coaster ride! But I absolutely loved the fact that you managed to unite Suraj and Chakor every time. No matter how the events had changed, the future was altered, by the end they found themselves together, in love. They always were meant to be each other's.

1. Even as a bandhua, Chakor was his anchor. His light in the dark, dark world. They balanced each other. In the end, their love won somehow.

Chakor had no history with Vivaan, Imli was saved. Perfect!

2. Okay, so this was quite difficult to imagine. Although the ending of this part was amazing, but imagining Suraj as a beggar, his struggles and condition, it was like swallowing a brick. That is, impossible. He was going to die and was happy that there was at least one person who actually cared enough to shed a few tears.

And then she had done something impossible. Signed those papers, signed the future for Azaadgunj away. For Suraj. Love makes you do all kinds of things right?

3. She was wearing black! And everything was suddenly perfect.

4. Okkay, so the flight part, it was as if I watching a detective show. All deductions and explanations. Very interesting. Then it was all hell and heaven, fire all around. Chakor consumed by the fire. Fire. Sun. Suraj. Consumed by love.

I will say this was one of the most fascinating things I have read. Confusing at times ( like I do not know who was the little baby in the flight, SuKor's daughter?), but fun to read nonetheless!

And so so sorry for the late unres. !

-Sanu

Saaanu 🤗

Thank you for leaving me such a wonderful comment 😃

@bold Brilliantly summed up the essence of the story. This is in contrast to ImVaan who don't end up together in the AUs.

Yeah, writing Suraj in the beginning of AU#2 was no picnic. But the thought occurred to me watching those eps and just stuck.

You noticed the black dress 😛 Did you guess who was at the door right then? 😆

Fire symbolism was unintentional!

Yep, that was their daughter (I was hoping someone would point that out. Not surprised it was you!). A little contrast about how they'd be as parents (trying to save the child before themselves) v/s BhuKa fleeing without a care for Chakor. Also ImVaan's reactions to the baby to emphasise her parentage.

No problem and worth the wait. Thank you so much Sanu! Always love reading your comments on fics 😳

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: vinlora
Wooow. ...just mind blowing dear...you are an amazing writer...thank u so much 😊

Thank you, Lora 😃 Glad you liked it!

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse
Oohhh my god...This was like I watch inception movie and recently saw hindi movie baar baar dekho...sote kahi or ho jagte kahi or wali feeling...But so so thrilling and amazing story this is...In chakor's dreams world everything is messed up kaha ki baat kaha jaa rahi hai...first part I'm shocked chakor is bandhua wo bhi 10 saal se and suraj and tina...?? Haaye daiiyaa 😲 for 1 minute I'm also wondering ander kon sa suraj hoga, The Suraj Rajvanshi or Chakor's Suraj...But this part was beautiful...Our chakor don't know what's going on...But she proud of her suraj and very happy with his confession...

And 2nd one...she married to vivaan like seriously...or divorce bhi ho gaya but again you shocked me suraj is beggar my mouth was open or aankho main aasu aa gaye...yesss chakor is right in reality or in this universe sab kuch same hi hai kuch alag hai to wo hai ki reality main chakor suraj k saath hai...or fir yaha bhi Tina 😆 I hope chakor tina ko ek punch laga hi deti...😉 tina k saath suraj ka naam chakor is now pissed off...

Suraj is right it's her dream and she know what will suraj do...And she knows as well as he always stay with her no matter what...dono dream main suraj ne chakor ko prapose kiya ya karte karte reh gaya...But chakor is happy with her suraj in any situation, she first thought about HIM...how cute...

And last but not list kamalnarayan he is complete entertainer yaha bhi apni funny antics k saath aa gaye plan main ooh gosh this man...Phinominal update dear 👏...what say next nothing left...I'm done coz now my battery about to die...😆

Tumhe hazaar baar dekh kar bhi mann nahi bharta...,
Har baar lagta hai...Bas ek baar Or...!!!

Thank you so much for liking the story, Khushi and leaving me such a sweet comment!! 😃

I'm flattered you found similarities between the fic and those movies! And that the little scene in the 2nd AU made you emotional. Thank you, Khushi 🤗

Hahaha yeah Tina's everywhere. I kinda liked the character. I'd rather watch her than Imli or Ragini, TBH.

I love love love writing for KNR! He's craziness gives me the license to write any OTT crap 'cos it's so easy to imagine him doing it 😆

Maaan you always hit the nail on the head with the shayari!! ❤️ Just perfect, every time 😃

Edited by Aradh_27 - 8 years ago