SS: Down the Rabbit Hole

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Hey all!
As I begin internship soon, this probably going to be one of the last things I write here on the forum.

Was watching the old eps just after the leap last week and that got me thinking about a bunch of what ifs?

The result was a 40page MS Word document!

Hope you enjoy reading it as much as I loved writing it! Do consider leaving a comment/hitting the like button 😃

Shout out to the absolutely amazing Nimmi (Banjaaran.) for being my fic tester and for the "walk a mile line". Love ya, lady!

Dedicated to all my forum friends-old, new and most of all, to the ones that stayed.
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I know as much about hypnosis as I do about rocket science, so those bits may most likely be hogwash, as is the rest of the story. šŸ˜†

The flower dictionary is borrowed from the one in Vanessa Diffenbaugh's "The Language of Flowers".

The inspiration for the story, the plane scene in particular was the book by the legendary Austrian neurologist mentioned at the very beginning.

Title-from Lewis Carroll's "Alice in Wonderland".

If you've made it this far, hugs to you šŸ¤—

I apologise for the typos...sleep deprived (also pretty darn lazy). If you find any, do let me know (via PMs. No chappals in public please šŸ˜†)

Thanks for reading!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res.
Unres.

That was one roller coaster ride! But I absolutely loved the fact that you managed to unite Suraj and Chakor every time. No matter how the events had changed, the future was altered, by the end they found themselves together, in love. They always were meant to be each other's.

1. Even as a bandhua, Chakor was his anchor. His light in the dark, dark world. They balanced each other. In the end, their love won somehow.

Chakor had no history with Vivaan, Imli was saved. Perfect!

2. Okay, so this was quite difficult to imagine. Although the ending of this part was amazing, but imagining Suraj as a beggar, his struggles and condition, it was like swallowing a brick. That is, impossible. He was going to die and was happy that there was at least one person who actually cared enough to shed a few tears.

And then she had done something impossible. Signed those papers, signed the future for Azaadgunj away. For Suraj. Love makes you do all kinds of things right?

3. She was wearing black! And everything was suddenly perfect.

4. Okkay, so the flight part, it was as if I watching a detective show. All deductions and explanations. Very interesting. Then it was all hell and heaven, fire all around. Chakor consumed by the fire. Fire. Sun. Suraj. Consumed by love.

I will say this was one of the most fascinating things I have read. Confusing at times ( like I do not know who was the little baby in the flight, SuKor's daughter?), but fun to read nonetheless!

And so so sorry for the late unres. !

-Sanu

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Posted: 8 years ago
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now this is what i call desi answer to Inception.
yeah i know i wrote interstellar. actually i meant to write inception and ended up writing that.

what an intriguing, haunting, thrilling, disturbingly exciting story... or shall i say stories.
now i can rest in peace. reading it in snippets was so damn difficult. all that wicked suspense and my poor old heart.

and best part is.. ending. i was terrified that you will go 'khuraafaati' and pen down a dark ending. and i will be left depressed.
but what a delightful ending.

LOVED IT or what!

thank you for sharing this brilliantly crafted work with me.
and for the lovely shout out.
anytime mate!

be around aradhana. and all the very very best for your future endeavours.
success, joy and happiness.

loads of love.šŸ¤—


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wooow. ...just mind blowing dear...you are an amazing writer...thank u so much 😊
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Oohhh my god...This was like I watch inception movie and recently saw hindi movie baar baar dekho...sote kahi or ho jagte kahi or wali feeling...But so so thrilling and amazing story this is...In chakor's dreams world everything is messed up kaha ki baat kaha jaa rahi hai...first part I'm shocked chakor is bandhua wo bhi 10 saal se and suraj and tina...?? Haaye daiiyaa 😲 for 1 minute I'm also wondering ander kon sa suraj hoga, The Suraj Rajvanshi or Chakor's Suraj...But this part was beautiful...Our chakor don't know what's going on...But she proud of her suraj and very happy with his confession...

And 2nd one...she married to vivaan like seriously...or divorce bhi ho gaya but again you shocked me suraj is beggar my mouth was open or aankho main aasu aa gaye...yesss chakor is right in reality or in this universe sab kuch same hi hai kuch alag hai to wo hai ki reality main chakor suraj k saath hai...or fir yaha bhi Tina šŸ˜† I hope chakor tina ko ek punch laga hi deti...šŸ˜‰ tina k saath suraj ka naam chakor is now pissed off...

Suraj is right it's her dream and she know what will suraj do...And she knows as well as he always stay with her no matter what...dono dream main suraj ne chakor ko prapose kiya ya karte karte reh gaya...But chakor is happy with her suraj in any situation, she first thought about HIM...how cute...

And last but not list kamalnarayan he is complete entertainer yaha bhi apni funny antics k saath aa gaye plan main ooh gosh this man...Phinominal update dear šŸ‘...what say next nothing left...I'm done coz now my battery about to die...šŸ˜†

Tumhe hazaar baar dekh kar bhi mann nahi bharta...,
Har baar lagta hai...Bas ek baar Or...!!!

Edited by Khushi_Dillse - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chakor in wonderland & driving me crazy n confused. At one point i thought that if all post-leap udaan events were mere dreams. Then came reality check --get up, get up... not once but multiple times. And another reality hit me -- that i neef to hone up my comprehension skillsšŸ˜›




Well i m happy that through all her dreams Suraj n only Suraj has been a constant companion- others were birds of passage. & 'this' Chakor still has latent desire to bring C'wealth n Olympics medals. She must get her athletiv career back. Seriously




Well written story šŸ‘& Ohh! i loved the Dubai portion of her dream the most!!

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