New story!! Chapter 3. Updated pg 3

It's Naya I have been on the forum recently and I'm sure you all know that I am writing an FF called emotions well I'm not going to continue with that maybe later but not for now .

And I'm going to write another Sukor SS which is continued from the current track

However my points include

1. Suraj and Chakor getting punishment from kn and Chakor getting shot

2. Suraj's death

3. A leap after a year

4. Chakor has changed and A new entry

So far these are my points that I will include if u have any ideas then let me know pleaseee.

Thanks guys till then bye

Ps. I should update this evening

P.s I live in uk so I think timing is definitely different

Sad that Suraj I'd dead! Hope there is twist in the tale!😃

Eagerly waiting for this one and of course when possible the next part of the FF!😉

I've started writing should be uploading soon

No one can replace Suraj not even his lookalike hahah

It will be the original Suraj don't worry about that

A definite twist in the tale!!!

Updating soon

Sukor SS pure love

Chapter 1

Kamal Narayan has made Suraj a bandhua and ragini has suggested to kamal Narayan that they should do something to chakor, ragini say to kamal Narayan that chakor has forgotten her bandhua place and they should make her realise that she can never be free as she is a bandhua, Kamal Narayan locks Suraj in the cowshed area and Chakor follows

Kn: now you will stay here as my bandhua not as a son

Suraj: kamal Narayan you're crossing your limits, I will not ever be your bandhua NEVER

Chakor comes running in and hugs Suraj , Suraj wraps his arms around her small body and says to her "Chakor don't worry, I'm fine and safe"

Kamal Narayan tells his goons and ragini to take Chakor into the haveli, sukor separate from each other and ragini drags Chakor into the haveli and slaps her and Chakor falls on the floor ragini then signs her goons to bring Suraj in ..

Suraj: Ragini what are you doing to Chakor

Ragini: be patient , big brother this is just the start

Ragini tells the goons to hold Chakor down on the floor and she grabs a knife and starts to write on Chakor's arm BANDHUA, Chakor and Suraj are both in terrible pain and Chakor starts to scream

Chakor:aaah

Suraj shouts : CHAKOR

Chakor is in so much pain that she can't move , ragini removes the knife from chakors arm and says to her, "you forgot what your place is so its just a reminder" ragini and kamal Narayan go out of the house .

Suraj runs to Chakor and slowly picks her up in his arms and gets a first aid for her arm , Suraj hugs Chakor and Chakor hugs Suraj but in pain , Suraj takes Chakor in his arms to their room and places her on the bed and locks the door he then tells Chakor ...

Suraj: Chakor I love you and I'm really sorry for all the horrible things I did to you , but please I never ever wanted to hurt you.

Chakor is hell shocked and surprised but happy to she says to him

"Suraj, you don't have to apologise for the past it wasn't your fault at all , it was all due to kamal Narayan, Suraj I also lo...

Their bedroom doors were flung open by goons, kn and ragini Chakor was unable to finish her scentence, Suraj and Chakor both stood up and were facing kamal Narayan , suraj got dragged downstairs and kamal Narayan was about to shoot Suraj and chakor was held by goons from the top of the stairs, kamal Narayan says to suraj "any last wishes" and he does his evil laugh and he pulls the trigger just then chakor shouts "SURAJ" and she runs from the goons and in front of Suraj , he holds her as she falls down and she is bleeding a lot,

Suraj: chakor what have you done , pagal ladki why did you interfere

Chakor: b..b.. because I love you pakandhi

Suraj cries and hugs Chakor , imli and vivaan are watching this and they cry aswell

Suraj: Chakor please keep your eyes open , please come on your strong , I'm taking you to hospital ..

Suraj is shot by kamal Narayan and falls beside Chakor they are both taken into hospital and Chakor is fine but Suraj is "dead"

Chakor was heartbroken and goes into a silent mode she doesn't eat anything and says to everyone that Suraj is not dead, he will come back he can't leave me and go Chakor is in trauma

Kamal Narayan has made imli and vivaan work for him and is still cruel

Precap: after 1 month New entry and chakor has changed a bit and chakor faints seeing the new person.

Hope you all enjoyed this

Goodnight

Sukor dreams

Chapter 2

After one month Chakor is still traumatised by Suraj's death and she is heartbroken, vivaan now works for kamal Narayan and so does imli , Chakor has stopped talking to imli and vivaan because they both turned bad and said that it's good Suraj died, Chakor started to continue her studies and now goes to college she has quite sport but is now doing boxing in which she always comes first, kamal Narayan has allowed chakors parents to stay in the haveli as she is still a bit traumatised by Suraj's death.

New day: Chakor goes to college and she has her friends there and aditiya is there to support Chakor, Chakor goes into the college and starts her boxing lesson she finishes in the evening and is tired , she walks into the haveli and everyone is crowding round a tall man , Chakor is confused and sees tejaswani crying, Chakor asks her 'what's wrong' kamal Narayan shouts at Chakor and says 'nothing is wrong with her, she just misses her son, the one who I killed' this angers Chakor but tejaswani holds her hand and signs her to calm down

Chakor says to kamal Narayan 'Suraj is not dead he will definitely come back and he will kill you'

Kamal Narayan is about to slap Chakor but someone grabs his hand and stops him Chakor looks at the guy who turns to her and says 'are you okay? The guy then says I'm sorry for this but it's not right to raise your hand on a woman, kn leaves

The guy introduces himself as Samar (but I'm sure you all know it's Suraj)

Chakor is shocked and she continues looking at Samar she says 'Suraj' and hugs hims Samar is shocked and he says to Chakor 'what are you doing, leave me'

Everyone is shocked by this and they try to tell Chakor that Suraj is dead , Chakor does still not believe , tejaswani comes to Chakor and takes her from Samar Chakor is crying saying he is Suraj and has come back, Chakor faints and Samar quickly holds her and picks her up and says 'show me her room' they call a doctor, and he says 'take care of her if she has anymore shock then it will be fatal for her she could potentially go into coma' everyone is sad by this and a tear escapes from samar's eyes and he quickly wipes it so that no one sees him crying.

Tejaswani, imvaan, chakors parents, aditiya and doctor leave from chakors room, Samar stays by Chakor and talks to her saying 'I'm sorry Chakor , even now I'm hurting you and it's hard for me to do this aswell , I am your Suraj but it can't be revealed just yet, he kisses her forehead and leaves, Chakor wakes up and sits on the bed and say 'I knew it, I just knew that your my Suraj'

Over the next few days Chakor has become happier and more cheerful this is noticed by everyone, Chakor keeps it to herself that Suraj is Samar and doesn't let anyone stop her.

precap: Chakor teams up with Samar to get revenge on kamal Narayan, vivaan and imli