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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 1:
Painful to read Rajini acts on Sukor! Wanted to kill her with my hand!
Thank god or thank u dear that Sukor were aware of their feelings her Eyes!

Part 2:
Chakor love is back!😊
How come KN/Rajini r not doubtful of him?

All the whole, interesting parts! Cont soon!👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: maithu_

Part 1:

Painful to read Rajini acts on Sukor! Wanted to kill her with my hand!
Thank god or thank u dear that Sukor were aware of their feelings her Eyes!

Part 2:
Chakor love is back!😊
How come KN/Rajini r not doubtful of him?

All the whole, interesting parts! Cont soon!👏


Thank u so much for this comment I really loved it,
KN and ragini think that Chakor is traumatised and their reason of no doubting Suraj will be shown as a flashback in chapter 3once again thank you for you comment
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: tarasuresh

Amazing amazing amazing

Update fasttt


Thank you , will try upload over next day
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
My heart stopped when your intro said that Suraj was dead. Boy, am I glad he isnt!
Lovely start Naya! Sorry for the late reply!
Please do continue soon. I promise I'll reply earlier. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: BreakingBlue

My heart stopped when your intro said that Suraj was dead. Boy, am I glad he isnt!

Lovely start Naya! Sorry for the late reply!
Please do continue soon. I promise I'll reply earlier. 😳


Aww such a heart warming comment , thank you so much sorry for the shock lol, I will update chapter 3 soon , take you time with your replies I really don't mind
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Chapter 3

kamal narayan shouts at ragini and says to her that 'Samar chaudry is not Suraj rajvanshi and we already have checked for his recors and he is dead' ragini insists that he is Suraj but kamal narayan shouts again and says to her 'get lost from here' ragini goes and vows to reveal the truth of Samar.
Samar sees chakor walking on a wall on the terrace and gets worried for her as she is trembling whilst walking and he fears that she might slip, 'hey girl get down from there you might slip'
chakor says 'get lost Mr Samar , I'm perfectly fineee.' exactly 5 seconds later samar hears chakor screaming 'aaah' he runs towards her and finds her not on the wall he shouts and shouts but there's no reply 'chakor , chakor where are you?' he then shouts 'jagat mahta please come back' all of a sudden someone holds his shoulder and he turns he says 'chakor' and pulls her into one of his bone crushing hugs they stay like that for quite sometime, samar says to chakor ' idiot , I told you didn't I not to climb on the wall, if you had fallen I would have lost you AGAIN' , chakor says 'why do you care so much and why are you so bothered' samar doesn't say anything and chakor says 'let me tell you , it's because your Suraj rajvanshi, your my Suraj and you love me and I love you' Suraj goes to walk away and chakor stops him and holds his hand and says 'for a whole month, I wasn't myself , I didn't talk to anyone I was in a trauma because I thought you , were dead, no believed me when I said your not dead, chakor was crying and Suraj turned to her and said I'm sorry chakor , I hurt you so much that I didn't realise, they hugged again and Suraj says 'i promise I'm never letting you go AGAIN' chakor says 'promise' , Suraj says 'promise' and they sit on the terrace for sometime and talk ' Suraj , don't you think it's time for us to take revenge from kamal narayan and ragini', suraj says 'yeah we should and that too together he kisses her on her cheek and says 'but how are we going to do it'
chakor says ' your going to ruin kamal narayan and I'm going to ruin his daughter just exactly the same way as they did to you' chakor cries and Suraj feel her crying and sits her on his lap and hugs her 'chakor I'm fine stop thinking about what they done to me' 'but Suraj when kn checked your arm for the bandhua mark why wasn't it there'
suraj says 'because I covered it up with..'
'with'...
'with foundation'
'you mean my foundation' saying this chakor starts laughs and Suraj smiles seeing her laugh and he says 'this was missing for a whole month ' she says' what' he says 'your smile and laughter, they hugged once again and then they got to work to get revenge...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow...it's interesting. ..thank u...waiting for the next part. ..

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