A SuKor OS - An Eventful Afternoon *16+* - Page 3

Originally posted by: -K.Kapoor-

Awesome piece!Thoroughly enjoyed it, wasn't vulgar in the least.Although I loved Sukor's part, I loved Vivaan's heart-break portion more😈😆.You're a fantastic writer!!!!!

Originally posted by: Tabsi

loved it.. So beautiful.. And suraj rested on chakors lap
Playful n flirty suraj is the best!!
Also just by reading this i could tell chakor is genuinely so happy n in love with suraj <3
A big slap on Vivians face. Loved how he saw them together in this state ..

I totally LOVED it... AMAZING Os dear 👏
I really love the sensuousness all your OS have 😳
*Gutter mode active* 😉 😆
The 1st part...HOT 😉 ( from nxt tym pls put on a disclaimer in d beginning *cold-water needed afterwards* 😉 )
The last part... 👏 I really wanted a scene like this where Vivian realizes whom he lost...so thankyou 😃
Awesome OS ⭐️

P.S- Itna accha kaise like leti ho tum?? How ??? I wish I could write this well...

great os
loved it so much
vivaan's heartbreak was the highlight
sukor made my screen burn

it was so romantic.

It was sooo beautifully wriiten sanuu. Love u sweetie.

The way u described chakor's love for him, his one liners, their intimacy, everything was just beyond perfect. Words can't express my appreciation for u. It was just sensuous and subtle.

Vulgar.. LOL. It was just hot n romantic in its own way. This os helpls us to imagine our sukor more romantically filled with passion and pure love, which they can't show on tv.

Loved everybit of it and got totally smitten by it. Looking or will be waiting eagerly for more os/ts's from u on sukor, thahaan.. Please do pm me when u write new os.

Sorry for late review

Originally posted by: Aradh_27

Thought I'd write a new comment 'cos the res-unres business makes posts very easy to miss!

Sanuuu meri jaanu!!

You accepted my prompt😳I was so thrilled reading that!

Coming to the fic itself. I really love how Chakor is so aware of her sexuality here. And I knew when she found the Saree, it would be coming off in no time☺️😆

The SuKor scene of course is hot hot haaawwwttt!!Who on earth do you think would report you?! All of us on the SuKor ship are smut-loving despos😆

Coming to the part I liked best, Vivaan's💔This was so true to both him and Imli. I can see Imli continuing to love him. But for Vivaan, the girgit, the grass is always greener on the other side.

Voyeur Vivaan was just🤣🤣

I really liked that you chose to make him watch their post-coital bliss instead of...ya know, the alternative (them doing it😆). It made more of an impact and was more in keeping with his character that he'd be jealous of how happy they are with each other and envy their emotional bond more than the physical.

All in all, I loved this fic, Sanu🤗

I also have another prompt for you😛I'd like to see the aftermath of their first time-their awkwardness as they interact with each other in front of the family pretending nothing has changed, Suraj's innuendos, Chakor's discomfort etc etc.

also have another prompt for you😛I'd like to see the aftermath of their first time-their awkwardness as they interact with each other in front of the family pretending nothing has changed, Suraj's innuendos, Chakor's discomfort etc etc.[/DIV]

Same ditto thought. I thought about the same thing which aru thought. I hope u got my point sanu.. [:p] i too have the same prompt.. 😳 i'd also like to see their akwardness and chakor's blush in their first time.

I know i know I'm getting a bit greedy. I requested few days back for an os and again I'm doing it. Well i will blame it on u because u write so beautifully that I'm getting addicted and wanting 🤗 ,wishing and requesting you to write one more

Please sanu u can take ur time. I just hope u will fulfill my wish and make me happy again 😊 and thank u sooo much aru that u mentioned it 😊 🤗

Originally posted by: sandjanarai

i loveee it. the bold chakor,and the loving suraj. write more of such os. they are amazing...

Originally posted by: Aradh_27

Thought I'd write a new comment 'cos the res-unres business makes posts very easy to miss!

Sanuuu meri jaanu!!

You accepted my prompt 😳 I was so thrilled reading that!

Coming to the fic itself. I really love how Chakor is so aware of her sexuality here. And I knew when she found the Saree, it would be coming off in no time ☺️😆

The SuKor scene of course is hot hot haaawwwttt!! Who on earth do you think would report you?! All of us on the SuKor ship are smut-loving despos 😆

Coming to the part I liked best, Vivaan's 💔 This was so true to both him and Imli. I can see Imli continuing to love him. But for Vivaan, the girgit, the grass is always greener on the other side.

Voyeur Vivaan was just 🤣 🤣

I really liked that you chose to make him watch their post-coital bliss instead of...ya know, the alternative (them doing it 😆). It made more of an impact and was more in keeping with his character that he'd be jealous of how happy they are with each other and envy their emotional bond more than the physical.

All in all, I loved this fic, Sanu 🤗

I also have another prompt for you 😛 I'd like to see the aftermath of their first time-their awkwardness as they interact with each other in front of the family pretending nothing has changed, Suraj's innuendos, Chakor's discomfort etc etc.

Originally posted by: ria.april18

Wow... what an OS...

So romantic... ☺️...and not vulgur at all dear... 😳

I loved it so much... 😃

Bold Chakor and naughty Suraj both are awesome... 😉

And cherry on the cake is Vivaan ka popat... 🤣

I have read your previous stories too... 😊

All of those are great... 👏

Do write more and don't worry about reporting... because every SuKorian will love your story... 😉