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Thought I'd write a new comment 'cos the res-unres business makes posts very easy to miss!
Sanuuu meri jaanu!!
You accepted my prompt 😳 I was so thrilled reading that!
Coming to the fic itself. I really love how Chakor is so aware of her sexuality here. And I knew when she found the Saree, it would be coming off in no time ☺️😆
The SuKor scene of course is hot hot haaawwwttt!! Who on earth do you think would report you?! All of us on the SuKor ship are smut-loving despos 😆
Coming to the part I liked best, Vivaan's 💔 This was so true to both him and Imli. I can see Imli continuing to love him. But for Vivaan, the girgit, the grass is always greener on the other side.
Voyeur Vivaan was just 🤣 🤣
I really liked that you chose to make him watch their post-coital bliss instead of...ya know, the alternative (them doing it 😆). It made more of an impact and was more in keeping with his character that he'd be jealous of how happy they are with each other and envy their emotional bond more than the physical.
All in all, I loved this fic, Sanu 🤗
I also have another prompt for you 😛 I'd like to see the aftermath of their first time-their awkwardness as they interact with each other in front of the family pretending nothing has changed, Suraj's innuendos, Chakor's discomfort etc etc.
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