A SuKor OS - An Eventful Afternoon *16+* - Page 4

Originally posted by: BreakingBlue

*screams*

(Gets thrown out of the house for 10 minutes)

Sanu this is beautiful! 👏 I read the three previous ones as well, this one is more stand alone though I felt.

I love the subtle hints here and there about her having fallen, and having fallen hard for her hero! Great going, girl! You finally looked at the right direction (*cough* away from Vivaan and at Suraj *cough*)! I'm so proud of you! 🤗 (wipes away them imaginary tears)

And no, this wasn't vulgar at all (@Sahas is overjoyed it's 16+ 🤣)!

It's just so amazing, with love, lust, and a pinch of heartbreak. I did feel a bit sad for Vivaan though, I have to admit.

But all in all, I'm in love with this OS! It's just the right amount of sugar, spice and everything nice! 😳 ❤️

Originally posted by: paridhi9797

I totally LOVED it... AMAZING Os dear 👏
I really love the sensuousness all your OS have 😳
*Gutter mode active* 😉 😆
The 1st part...HOT 😉 ( from nxt tym pls put on a disclaimer in d beginning *cold-water needed afterwards* 😉 )
The last part... 👏 I really wanted a scene like this where Vivian realizes whom he lost...so thankyou 😃
Awesome OS ⭐️

P.S- Itna accha kaise like leti ho tum?? How ??? I wish I could write this well...

Originally posted by: srividhya68

great os
loved it so much
vivaan's heartbreak was the highlight
sukor made my screen burn

Originally posted by: ArjunfanNAJAAN

it was so romantic.

Well written and very interesting.

Originally posted by: sumaiya10

It was sooo beautifully wriiten sanuu. Love u sweetie.

The way u described chakor's love for him, his one liners, their intimacy, everything was just beyond perfect. Words can't express my appreciation for u. It was just sensuous and subtle.

Vulgar.. LOL. It was just hot n romantic in its own way. This os helpls us to imagine our sukor more romantically filled with passion and pure love, which they can't show on tv.

Loved everybit of it and got totally smitten by it. Looking or will be waiting eagerly for more os/ts's from u on sukor, thahaan.. Please do pm me when u write new os.

Sorry for late review

Originally posted by: sumaiya10

also have another prompt for you😛I'd like to see the aftermath of their first time-their awkwardness as they interact with each other in front of the family pretending nothing has changed, Suraj's innuendos, Chakor's discomfort etc etc.[/DIV]

Same ditto thought. I thought about the same thing which aru thought. I hope u got my point sanu.. [:p] i too have the same prompt.. 😳 i'd also like to see their akwardness and chakor's blush in their first time.

I know i know I'm getting a bit greedy. I requested few days back for an os and again I'm doing it. Well i will blame it on u because u write so beautifully that I'm getting addicted and wanting 🤗 ,wishing and requesting you to write one more

Please sanu u can take ur time. I just hope u will fulfill my wish and make me happy again 😊 and thank u sooo much aru that u mentioned it 😊 🤗

Originally posted by: rosemahal

Wowww. Nice continue dear