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SukiDakanya

@SukiDakanya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: _Namita_

Because, I am bossy!! My friends say so as well...😆

Because, believe it or not, in school I was the youngest and I got sick of it. Even at work in my dept, I am 2nd youngest!
Plus the fact, I am only 5ft in height! I gotta make up in my bossiness!!! 😆

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#32

@Sanya Being a neat freak, I hate quoting long posts, so I'm gonna reply this way.

First of all, thank you so much Sanuuu 🤗 I'm simply bowled over by your lovely analysis! And 48 hours? LOL, that's far too much for anything I write 😆 I'm just beyond flattered though. Thank you ❤️

I'm pleasantly surprised whenever I come across a different interpretation of something I write, especially one as wonderful as yours. The bit about the kid having his eyes just gives you the feeels!

But since the story is based on my understanding of his character (which I know hasn't and won't remain consistent, because this is a daily soap, after all, and characters will be butchered to serve the storyline and bring in ratings), I'm going to write a bit about what exactly I had in mind while writing the whole dream sequence.

When Suraj feels upset after imagining the first few scenarios (ImVaan and Chakor with happy families while he's all alone) he thinks it's because he's jealous/possessive. He thinks he's incapable of feeling anything other than these negative emotions.

So he imagines Chakor alone, like him, longing for a happy family, unlike him (which he's already eliminated as the cause of his sorrow by trial and error, previously having subtracted and added elements in his dream) and finally comes to a realisation.

And no, in this story at least, he doesn't even think for a moment it could be his daughter, because to him, that would be presumptuous.

Also, Suraj never refers to Chakor's daughter as anything but (v/s ImVaan's kids whom he calls a lot of names 😆).

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PenguinBaby

@PenguinBaby

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#33

@Aru you're too cute.😆

I hope you didn't mind me interpreting your post, and I know you'll say No I Don't Mind! even if you did.

Well the truth is that I love reading analyses like these, and I too wanna try my hand on them. But I never know how/where to start. So I read other's analyses and try to write them in my own words. Just to practice and see whether I can write things like these. I never post them of course, but I did here bcoz I felt that it's a safe place to try and hoped you wouldn't mind. And I am glad that I bowled you over😆

I know Suraj hadn't imagine the little girl as his, but I imagined.😆 Take it as my love and sympathy for Suraj which makes me do this! And take my bits as my try-ons to add the emotions LOL😆

Hmm I understand what you said. I get it! Suraj can be a person with lots of negative emotions unlike Chakor, who's full of too much positive thinking. They need to balance each other!

PS : Exams?

-Sanu

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Saanu, you should post them! And no, of course I don't mind!! All of us here love over analysing and over thinking stuff and sometimes seeing things that sure as hell aren't there. We all enjoy writing and reading such posts and that's why we're on the forum!!

As for my exams, I have one each for the next three weeks, then theory begins, then an official study break and finals are in Jan so looong road ahead!

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

And a huge thank you to everyone who left such insightful comments and to the sweeties who wished me luck!

I'll reply to all of you individually when I have a little more time on my hands!

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Radhika_r
awww!!! aaru wish i had some contact with script writers i would have passed this on to them😃
awesome OS!!👏 enjoyed it!!

would have loved to see Vj act it 😃

Don't we all wish we knew them and could shake some sense into them? LOL.

Thanks a lot, Radhika 🤗

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: -Shanzy-
Love it! So beautifully written. I Hope that such a scene happens in the show. '"
Can you write something on a jealous and possessive Suraj? Would love to read it. Keep it up, love.

Thank you!

That's something I am looking forward to writing! Maybe after I find a potential candidate cos no one can take Vivaan seriously 😆

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PenguinBaby

@PenguinBaby

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Ohh such a long road indeed! All the very best sweetheart👍🏼

You'll do great 🤗

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BreakingBlue

@BreakingBlue

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#39

This is amazing! Suraj's emotions are captured so well, I could literally imagine him brooding over what he said before and feeling uncomfortable imagining her with some other guy!😊

His possessiveness for her though! Right on point! 👏

Really beautiful, this piece! 😊

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Get-Lost
Sorry for the late UnRes.

You want an honest opinion; after 'A Man After Midnight' part 1, this is your best written piece. Sachi.😃
Loved the way you contrasted between ImVaan brats and Chakor's kid inner monologue of Suraj.
It was a pleasant read. Enjoyed every word of it. Keep writing.😃👍🏼

Sid

Peeped in, ended up cringing at all the grammatical errors in this OS (was in too much of a hurry to proof read back then) and saw your lovely comment. Let me know if you unres a comment next time, okay? 😆

Thank youuu, Siddy 🤗I'm flattered someone (and that too you, so picky when it comes to fanfic. I won't lie...it makes me super glad 😆) actually has favourites among stuff I've written. A Man After Midnight is the beginning of the most OOC Chakor story everrr. Thanks a ton, though ❤️ (I enjoyed writing "Sunflowers" best, BTW. Didn't even realise the title's obvious connection with Suraj back then 😆)

Edited by Aradh_27 - 8 years ago

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