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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Suraj's POV after the 8/11 episode.

Hey guys!

So a wee fic inspired by a certain dialogue from tonight's episode. Suraj's thoughts after that scene.

A little less of guilt and gratitude in this one. So if you want to read that, check out

Four Times Suraj Saw Chakor

And if you want to read about Suraj realizing his love for Chakor, read this

Starry Night

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Edited by Aradh_27 - 8 years ago

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@Aradh_27

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Namita

@Namita-M

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

Aradhna, girl you write so well! I wish, this would be Suraj's monologue at some point in the actual show. It would make me so happy!

Hugs sweetheart🤗

PS:

since, I'm so much older, I reserve the right to call you sweetie or sweetheart!!! 😆😆😆

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: _Namita_
Aradhna, girl you write so well! I wish, this would be Suraj's monologue at some point in the actual show. It would make me so happy!
Hugs sweetheart🤗

PS:
since, I'm so much older, I reserve the right to call you sweetie or sweetheart!!! 😆😆😆

Thank you, Namita 🤗

Haha, call me whatever you want 😆

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Sid

@Get-Lost

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

Sorry for the late UnRes.

You want an honest opinion; after 'A Man After Midnight' part 1, this is your best written piece. Sachi.😃
Loved the way you contrasted between ImVaan brats and Chakor's kid inner monologue of Suraj.
It was a pleasant read. Enjoyed every word of it. Keep writing.😃👍🏼

Sid

Edited by Get-Lost - 8 years ago

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Princy

@princy48

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

Jus a word.."AWESUM"⭐️..yeah that was jus awesum😳 ...whyl reading i was imagining it onscreen ..jaise kaash aise serial mein hota...beautiful...keep up d gud wrk..will be waiting for ur nxt story..😉

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SukiDakanya

@SukiDakanya

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

That was me testing if I could post something or if I'd had to pm you...😳

This was amaaazing!! You use the available material to fashion a very very canonable Suraj.

Perfect down to the little details of her daughter having a sunflower in her hands... to him sleeping where he could see her.

Yup it's all in the subtlety of Suraj babu's possessiveness. "cut that hand!"

And how you show that he is a mama's boy, of course he would take her on his first trip outside of the AJ.

Brilliant monologue ❤️

I would like to see Suraj step up to the plate and try to become that bhagyashaali boy for chakor.

Edited by sukiya123 - 8 years ago

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srividhya68

@srividhya68

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

wow
really so nice
i wish they show something like this in the show too
loved it
suraj's conscience has finally decided to return @ an unwanted time😆...poor suraj was full of remorse but i liked it

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SukiDakanya

@SukiDakanya

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: _Namita_
Aradhna, girl you write so well! I wish, this would be Suraj's monologue at some point in the actual show. It would make me so happy!
Hugs sweetheart🤗

PS:
since, I'm so much older, I reserve the right to call you sweetie or sweetheart!!! 😆😆😆

Dear Nami Di why i get the feeling you love saying that a lot 😳