SuKor OS: Life Without You. - Page 5

Originally posted by: Akshata2010

You write really well!

Main toh teri fan ban gayi... 🤪

Originally posted by: vinlora

It's amazing yaar...loved it...thank u so much and A😊ll the best for ur exams...stay blessed. .

Originally posted by: paridhi9797

That was simply wowww... 👏
I could literally imagine each n evry dialogue being spoken by suraj/VJ himself...
⭐️
I wish the CVs could take some ideas from u n gift us a scene like THIS 👏
Lovelllyyy writing... 😳

P.S- best of luck for ur xams which I think r coming 😃

Originally posted by: janecastle

Oh I just loved reading it...👏

You write so well...👍🏼

Hope we get Suraj monologue in the serial... Hopefully it'll be something like this...

Originally posted by: Ashi345678

Its so beautiful
You shud continue it.

Originally posted by: ..chotu..

Aradhna! You write so well dear. Truely loved this OS! I wish this happens in the show someday! If not the whole thing, then atleast parts of it. Please do write more. Thank you for this one. 🤗

Originally posted by: shravs1101

First of all,good luck for ur exams Aradhya!! 👍🏼
Now coming to the os,it's very very beautiful..totally loved it.
Kudos to u dear. 👏 👏
U write so well that I could clearly imagine everything happening right infront of my eyes.
It'll be really great to see something similar to this on the show someday.
Suraj himself brought up the topic of her second marriage and when he thinks back on those words after a while,he couldn't even bear the thought of a second guy in her life,I mean imagining her holding the hand of another man,'cut the hand',comment very much proved it and his heart exposed his possessive side to his mind...brilliantly written part...plus that sunflower part was beautiful and too good.
"And now,he knew he wanted that boy to be him",this line is the perfect ending to the already perfect os...,eagerly waiting for this to actually happen in the show.
All in all,it's a totally fantabulous os. 😳

Originally posted by: -GrilledCheese-

so beautiful... you're a fantastic writer!

Originally posted by: BreakingBlue

This is amazing! Suraj's emotions are captured so well, I could literally imagine him brooding over what he said before and feeling uncomfortable imagining her with some other guy!😊

His possessiveness for her though! Right on point! 👏

Really beautiful, this piece! 😊