SuKor OS: Life Without You. - Page 2

Thank you so much! 😃

@bold Love it when someone says that!

LOL, I guessed as much 😆

Thank youuu 🤗

I take a lot of pride in my stories if someone says Suraj was not OOC. He's not an easy one to write 😆

I'm glad you picked up on the sunflower bit...I think that's my favorite scene out of everything I've ever written 😳

He's a mamma's boy through and through, but in a good way!

@bold You and me and everyone on the forum 😆

Thank you, Srividhya 😊

I thought he wasn't remorseful enough in this one 😆 I got fed up of writing about his guilt. Already done it so many times

Because, I am bossy!! My friends say so as well...😆

Because, believe it or not, in school I was the youngest and I got sick of it. Even at work in my dept, I am 2nd youngest!

Plus the fact, I am only 5ft in height! I gotta make up in my bossiness!!! 😆

Thank you 😊

When I read your writing I can picture it happening and it does not seem contrived...that's a salute to your writing skill as well as your perception of the characters.

write more...

@Priya The quote button is giving me grief. So just gonna reply to you this way.

Bold, nah...I think you would just be the doc with the best bed side manners and will ease your patients' qualms with your superb story telling! 🤗

Works in my favour that I want to be a psychiatrist then 😆

Thanks Namita!

UNRES.

Aru, Aru, Aru😳. You always make me speechless with you deep, intense writings and I always need at least forty-eight hours to decide on a reply which will make sense and also, convey my truest feelings.😆

You know, whenever I read these continuity fictions, all I hope ki kaash aisa hi hota toh maza aa jata!

This whole monologue, this hurricane inside Suraj's mind is so Suraj. He said something without thinking, it slipped not from his tongue but from his heart. So, this is my take on it.

PS. I got a little carried away but I will give you credit for that.👏 You make me go bonkers.🤪

He had accepted her unknowingly from the first night itself. She was his biwi, dharam-patni, bandhua billi. She was his. And now she had become his kawach. His protector. (UNQUESTIONABLY CORRECT). He had done absolutely zilch to earn this precious shield. And he realised that he cannot just let her put her life in danger for a man like himself.(So sweet of him!) He wanted to put an end to all but he knew she will never let him do that. Not in his ways of course.

Then he imagined the future. Imli Vivaan. Together. Him. Alone. It was perfect. (So much for saccha pyaar).Then he imagined his, who would be by then, his ex-wife and that bhagyashaali ladka (Boring, pompous git, too boring for his fireball🤣 AWESOME LINE) and all hell broke loose. He wanted to jump in this horrendous imagination and just punch that faceless guy already. (LOVED HIS POSSESSIVENESS!!!) Cut his hand too! LOL. I want to cut his head, btw.🤣 And say, "That bhagyashaali ladka is Suraj babu only! Leave you faceless, dry, boring man-boy!"

And then he imagined a little female brat, who looked just like her mother.😳 Did he imagine, dream in a tiny corner of his heart, that although the little girl looked totally like Chakor, she had his eyes? I would love to think he did! But I guess he did not, that's why his heart sank😭. He should have looked closely.

Then, he imagined a different scenario. Imli-Vivaan. Together. Him. Alone. It was perfect. Then he imagined her, sitting beside him. Alone. No faceless guy holding her hand or hugging her or touching her. And it became more perfect.❤️

You are mine.

And I am yours.❤️❤️

A silent prayer his heart secretly wished.

Maybe he realised that he cared for her. Maybe he accepted that he valued her. Maybe he wanted to be her husband forever.

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Oh damn it got way too long, I feel so embarrassed. Looks like a mini-shot.🤣 See Aru, what you do with my brain and heart?!😡

And if you did not read the whole thing, which I understand,😆 I will just sum up everything in one word. It was PERFECT! I LOVED IT. His possessiveness to kill that man, oh made me drool. And how he did not feel anything after seeing Imli and Vivaan's toli of bacchuas! And his acceptance...dreamy af. I was in a Suraj dreamland since I read this. And I still am.

-Sanu

PS : All the best for the exams!👍🏼🤗 Acche se exam dena aur humara naam roshan karnaaa❤️