SuKor OS: Life Without You. - Page 3

You write really well!

awww!!! aaru wish i had some contact with script writers i would have passed this on to them😃

It's amazing yaar...loved it...thank u so much and A😊ll the best for ur exams...stay blessed. .

That was simply wowww... 👏
I could literally imagine each n evry dialogue being spoken by suraj/VJ himself...
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I wish the CVs could take some ideas from u n gift us a scene like THIS 👏
Lovelllyyy writing... 😳

P.S- best of luck for ur xams which I think r coming 😃

Oh I just loved reading it...👏

Its so beautiful
You shud continue it.

Aradhna! You write so well dear. Truely loved this OS! I wish this happens in the show someday! If not the whole thing, then atleast parts of it. Please do write more. Thank you for this one. 🤗

Love it! So beautifully written. I Hope that such a scene happens in the show. '"

First of all,good luck for ur exams Aradhya!! 👍🏼
Now coming to the os,it's very very beautiful..totally loved it.
Kudos to u dear. 👏 👏
U write so well that I could clearly imagine everything happening right infront of my eyes.
It'll be really great to see something similar to this on the show someday.
Suraj himself brought up the topic of her second marriage and when he thinks back on those words after a while,he couldn't even bear the thought of a second guy in her life,I mean imagining her holding the hand of another man,'cut the hand',comment very much proved it and his heart exposed his possessive side to his mind...brilliantly written part...plus that sunflower part was beautiful and too good.
"And now,he knew he wanted that boy to be him",this line is the perfect ending to the already perfect os...,eagerly waiting for this to actually happen in the show.
All in all,it's a totally fantabulous os. 😳

so beautiful... you're a fantastic writer!