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Posted: 8 years ago
#71
Great updt dear Jassy. I love u 4 updatng so jaldi! Sorry 4 chota comment. Thoda busy hun na.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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superb upt
i'm liking this suraj
i think soon suraj also left that place & only imvaan were left back
waiting for next part
cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73
Wonderful update
Waiting for next one
Continue soon 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74
Awesome update chashmish.
Loved it.
SuKor scene,their dialogues and the lightning in the sky...u described it so beautifully,great job dear.
Thank god that Kabir's truth came out in open.
Will be waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aloo I loved it... I ll leave a longer review in a bit ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aafato'n ke parindey "IshaqZaade" Chapter 20 Special Promo
Chakor sneaks in suraj's room and shuts they door...Vivaan,ranjhana tejaswani knocks the door ...

Chakor and tina's mehndib function...

Tejaswani plays a dirty trick to stop chakor and vivaan's wedding ...

The actual update will be posted on Sunday...I'm working on it right now Please do comment and tell me are you excited for the wedding chapter ?

Love-jasmene
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Aafato'n ke parindey "IshaqZaade" chapter 19

Recap : Suraj and chakor fights...Imli and suraj gets...vivaan proposes chakor but she refuses...chakor wins delhi marathon..kn and suraj are arrested...

Next morning : the basti people were decoting the village and everyone was so happy ...everyone was working together...Chakor looked for imli here and there
and found her sitting alone sad under a shelter...chakor goes to her and sits beside her..

Chakor: Imli main janti hun k tu sad kyo'n hai...
imli : Tujhe fikar karey ki konu zaroorat naahi hai ...
chakor: Zaroorat hai imli ( holds her hand ) Imli chal thik hai main maanti hun k main 10 saal tak yaha'n nahi thi isliye tujhe mujhse woh lagaav nahi jo bachpan main
tha...Magar maa-bapu k barey main socha hai tuny ? ( Imli looks at her ) Tu uss suraj k liye jail janey ko tayyar thi na...leik yeh socha tha k maa-bapu ka
kia hota ? main nahi thi 10 saal yaha'n par tu thi...tuny ek beti nahi beta ban kar unka khayal rakha...yeh kehna bilkul ghalat nahi hoga k woh mujhse ziada
tujhse pyaar kartey hain imlu...Please jo gunah karta hai usey saza milti hai..isey karma kehte hain...english main ek kahwat hai "what goes around comes around"
aur hindi main bhi toh suna hoga tuny k "Jo jaisa karta hai waisa bharta hai" Please imlu ek insaan ki khatir apney poore parivaar ka dill na dukha..
Imli : (Tears rolled down her eyes ) Hum bohat kosis karey did khud ko samjhaney ki...magar ..magar hum kaa karein humra dill nahi manath...( she hugged chakor)
chakor: Tu fikar na ka imli...aaj pehla din hai ...bass tu isi tarha'n har roz apney dill ko samjha or dekhna ek din sab thik ho jayega..tere agey poori life pari hai
main toh soch rahi thi apni imlu ko parhau'n likhau'n ta k tu bhi apne sapne poore kar sake...( chakor hugged her back and asked her to stop crying )

Chakor went to haveli to meet vivaan and invite him and ranjhana for today's celebration in village...when she stepped inside the main gate she remembered how suraj
played holi with her...when she stepped inside haveli she remembered how suraj brought her here to kn...she was going toward vivaan's room and on her way she saw
suraj's room and remembered how when she came inside haveli for the first time accidentally went to suraj's room...how suraj grabbed her in his room when she sneaked in
haveli at night...she was lost in her thoughts when vivaan saw her standing in front of suraj's room and he called her name...'Chakor" she came out of her thoughts..

Vivaan : chakor tum yaha'n ?
chakor : Haan vivaan woh main tumse hi milney aai thi..
vivaan : toh phir yaha'n kia kar rahi ho ? aao mere room main beth kar baat kartey hain..
chakor : nahi woh actually I came here to invite you and ranjhana ji for tonight's celebration in village..
vivaan : Arrey yeh toh bohat acha kiya tumne k khud aa gai humey btaney...isi bahaney thori batein bhi kar lete hain..
chakor : nahi vivaan mujhe na abhi sitapur jana hai tabhi toh shaam tak wapas aa paungi..
vivaan : Sitapur ..itni subha kyo'n ?
chakor : Haan sitapur...waha'n se mujhe apney college main private exams k liye form fill karvana hai...kn aur suraj ko jail bhejney main pehley hi bohat waqt zaya ho
gaya mera aur main apni studies par focus nahi kar pai...6 months baad exams hain or maine abhi tak books kholi bhi nahi'n...
vivaan : ( Laughed ) Ohh toh marathon ace runner 501 student bhi hain...mujhe nahi pata...
chakor : kaisey pata hoga ? kabhi poocha tumne...achaw abb main chalti hun tum yaad se ranjhana ji ko le kar raat k jashan main aa jana ...Bye
vivaan : Thik hai...Bye ( he was looking at her when she was leaving and he brought something out from his shirt's pocket it was a beautiful wedding ring )

Evening 7:00 pm chakor came back from sitapur and the entire village was looking like a bride...everyone was dancing and singing...kasturi came to chakor and gave
her a gift it was a beautifull yellow and pink chiffon saree...Chakor goes to wear the saree and comes out wearing it...( Pink blouse..it was a scoop shaped sweetheart
neck blouse with long arms...They pleats of the saree were oink too but the pallu was yellow..) staright open hairs wiht yellow and pink jhumkas she was looking
so pretty that her maai had to put a kala tika on her neck...

In jail...Suraj was getting released and kn asked inspector to leave him too but suraj explained him how he gave statement against Kn and got free of all the
accusations...This angered kn and he promised suraj that he will take revenge...suraj left from jail and immediately called shikhu and imli to bring his clothes and
jeep ...Imli and shikhu goes to pick suraj from jail and when they come back to village suraj's eyes fill with anger seeing how everyone one is celebrating...
He signed imli not to tell nayone that he's here...He was about to leave when he saw chakorthere happily talking to vivaan he was awstruck seeing chakorin that saree
but remembered how she along with vivaan sent him to jail he gets more angry seeing chakor talking to vivaan happily ..he goes to side where he can se chakor and
everyone else but no can see him...

A song starts to play...chakor stands a side and watches other girls dancing..

(Ulajhee hai yeh kis chaal me tu
Hai aaj kal kis haal me tu)
(Ulajhee hai yeh kis chaal me tu
Hai aaj kal kis haal me tu)

Some girls come and drags chakor to dance with them chakor refuses to dance...but a women from village insists her to dance as all the happiness is because of her
chakor agrees to dance...

(Hamko aaj kal hai intejaar, koyee aaye leke pyaar)
(Hamko aaj kal hai intejaar, koyee aaye leke pyaar)


Yeh rup hai kyon thamka, yeh rang hai kyon chamka
Yeh saans teree mehakee hai kyon
Yeh mastee hai jo chhalakee, yeh chunaree hai jo dhalakee
Yeh chal teree behakee hai kyon

(Hamko aaj kal hai intejaar, koyee aaye leke pyaar)
(Hamko aaj kal hai intejaar, koyee aaye leke pyaar)


She was dancing very happily and suraj was smiling...but suddenly he realized that he's smiling at chakor and remembered what she did to him so he got angry...
Now everyone is basti started to dance ...That's when suraj walked toward chakor and the more steps he was taking the more people stopped dancing seeing suraj...
chakor was still dancing ...

Koyee aaya, dekho aaya, aa gaya
Aa gaya woh aa gaya, aa gaya woh aa gaya

chakor was dancing and she turned while dancing and hit into suraj...she just looked at him confused...

Koyee aaya, dekho aaya, aa gaya
Aa gaya woh aa gaya, aa gaya woh aa gaya aaa gaya le k pyaaarr...

Suraj carried chakor on his shoulder against her and her parents will and took her from there and no one from village dared to stop him ...even vivaan failed to do so..

Chakor was continuously asking him to let her go and was trying to get free but he was not in mood to listen anything he just walked to carrying her on his shoulder
and came to haveli...and 'THADDD" He threw her on the couch...Chakor looked at him confused+angry+scare

Chakor : Yeh kia batmeezi hai suraj ? Tum tum yaha'n kia kar rahey ho tumhe jail main hona chahiye ( she said while standing up )
Suraj : Shukar manao k humney abhi tak batmeezi shuru bhi nahi ki...aur jaha'n tak rahi baat humare bahar aney ki toh sun le bandhua billi jail se saaf saaf rihaa
ho kar aa rahein hain...bilkul aisey jaisey makhan main se garam garam churi nikalti hai...
chakor : Tum aisey kaisey bari ho saktey ho...tamam saboot diye they main tumhare khilaaf...Bhaag kar aye ho jail se ?
suraj : Ooo jo saboot tuney diye they na woh papa k khilaaf they ...Hume bahar aney k liye ziada mehnat nahi'n karni pari bass papa k khilaaf gawah ban gaye or tadaa
tere samne kharein hain...
Chakor : Tum apni azaadi k liye apne baap k khilaaf gawahi dene ko tayyar ho gaye...dhitkaar hai tum jaisey betey pe..
suraj : (Shouted ) haan hai dhitkaar hum par ...jiss baap ki tum baat kar rahi ho na woh waisey bhi hu...( he stopped himself from saing anything further ) ...
Tum humare samne humare ghar main khari ho...Abb tu apni khair manaa bandhua billi...

chakor was about to say something when vivaan came there running and holds chakor's hand and asks her if she's fine...and turn to suraj angrily asking how dare he
bring chakor here like this ?

Suraj : Ooo choohey bass kar...ziada unchi awaaz na kar iskey baad teri bari hi ani hai...
vivaan: Tum humara kuch nahi bigaarh saktey suraj...Kn ki saari property humari hai ...Hume maarney se pehle yeh soch lena k tumhe korhi korhi ka mohtaaj hona parega..

Suraj Tightened his fist but controlled his anger because he knew vivaan was right...He looked at chakor angrily but then smirked..

suraj ; acha thik hai..Hum tujhe toh kuch nahi kar sakte...Magar iss..iss bandhua billi ko chorenge nahi hum...
Vivaan: Nahi'n tum chakor ko bhi kuch nahi kar saktey...
suraj : Kon rokega hume ? tuu ? Kis haqq se ?

Bhuvan and kasturi also came to haveli with imli..and now was witnessing the conversation..

vivaan: haan hum hum rokenege...Aur haqq yeh hai...

Vivaan brings out the ring from his pocket and looked at chakor...( Vivaan and suraj was facing each other and chakor can be seen in middle og them ) vivaan turned
to chakor and suraj did the same confused...Bhuvan,kasturi,imli,ranjhana and now tejaswani too was witnessing everything...

Vivaan: Chakor main jaanta hun k tum sirf mujhe apna dost samajhti ho..Magar hum tumse bohat pyaar karte hain aur tumse shaadi karna chahtey hain...Hume poora yaqeen hai k
ek na ek din tumhe bhi humsepyaar ho jayega...

chakor was totally confuse and lost in her thoughts when kasturi came forward and asked chakor to accept the proposal ...vivaan is a nice guy and you can be saved
from suraj too...Suraj was getting more and more angry and was waiting for chakor's reply...chakor after thinking a while looked at bhuvan who also nodded ...
chakor then looked at suraj who was looking at her angrily...She finally took a decision and forward her hand toward vivaan and vivaan happily tried to make her wear
the ring but to his unfortunate the ring was not fitting in her finger so he just inserted it in her ladyfinger ( pinky ) ...

Vivaan : Lo suraj abb chakor Rajvanshi khandaan ki honey wali bahu hai...abb agar tumne is ki taraf ungli bhi uthai toh hum saari jayedaad kisi charity main de denge
suraj : Thik hai karo tumhe jo karna hai hume koi parwah nahi...aur agar tum chahtey ho k hum kuch na karein toh hume humare paisey lauta do...

Vivaan made a bank call and asked manager to transfer 5 lakhs to suraj's account...suraj asked him what will he do with only 5 lakhs so vivaan told him that he's not a fool
to transfer all the money at once...you'll have to wait till I and chakor get married...suraj gave a look to chakor and left from there...everyone was happy with chakor
vivaan's alliance except chakor...she was feeling as if she's doing something wrong...But she thought that everyone is happy with this relation and vivaan is her
best friend maybe this is right decision...

Next morning suraj went to mumbai and fixed his alliance with tina...he was coming back to azaadgunj when he saw chakor in a shiv-parvati mandir...he stopped his jeep and
goes to chakor...( she was wearing plane white long anarkali and her dupatta was colorful chiffon's by which she was covering her head ) suraj came from behind and
pats on her shoulder she opens her eyes and turns to her right side and found suraj standing there...

Suraj : Achaw huva tu hume yaha'n mill gai...eik khush khabri hai humare paas chal rajvanshi khandaan ki future bahoo ko hi sabse pehle suna dete hain...
chakor: kaisy news ?
suraj : Tere liye ek jethani le kar aa rahein hain...Rajvanshi khandaan ki bari bahoo..
chakor: Kiaa ?? Tum..tum shaadi kar rahey ho..
suraj : arrey itna shock kyo'n ho rahi hai...haan hum shaadi kar rahey hain...woh bhi usi din jis din teri or vivaan ki shaadi hai..rasmein bhi ek hi din hongi...
chakor: Tumse kon bewakoof shadi kar ke apni life barbaad kar rahi hai ?
suraj : ( Laughs ) yeh barbaadi wali line toh hume tujhe kehni chahiye...khairr humari hone wali dharam patni ka nama hai Tina Raichand...

This shocked chakor...she remembered what imli said to her...she was list in her thoughts when her ring finger got hurt by a thread of her dupatta and started to bleed
suraj immediately teared his hankerchief and tied it around her ring finger and this was witnessed by Shive-Parvati ...chakor was looking at him confused ...

Suraj : Aisey kia dekh rahi hai ? isliye nahi baandh rahe k tujhe dard ho raha hai...isliye bandh rahey hain k khushi ki khabar sunai hai abshagun na kar khoon baha kr
chakor: Par maine toh kuch kaha hi nahi ...
suraj : Teri yeh jo moti moti ankhein hain na inki wajah se tujhe kuch bolne ki zaroorat nahi parti...

Chakor pulled her hand and looked at they cloth suraj tied around her finger...she was again thinking about imli and she just left from there while suraj watched
her leaving and then rang the mandir bell as loud as he could...

The end...

Precap : Wedding special update...

I hope you like this update too...They chapter 20 will be a long long chapter...Please do comment your views about my story...If you guys wonder why I explain clothes
too much so its because I'm going to study fahsion designing and I love talking about clothes...Anyways as I already said chapter 20 will be a special chapter I will give
promo of chapter 20 soon and chapter 20 will be posted on sunday hopefully ...

Love-Jasmene
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great update Jasmene. Love the mandir scene and the ring. Beautifully done!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: ..chotu..

Great updt dear Jassy. I love u 4 updatng so jaldi! Sorry 4 chota comment. Thoda busy hun na.

Choti aps sahas ka chota comment no worries 😆
Thank you for taking out time and reading this and commenting too...🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: srividhya68

superb upt
i'm liking this suraj
i think soon suraj also left that place & only imvaan were left back
waiting for next part
cont soon

Thank you so much for liking the story...
chapter 19 is updated...
You have to bear the bachua track with me but of course with lot of sukor scenes...

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