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Posted: 8 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Chashmish786

Hi vinlora..
Thank you so much for liking it...Umm I can't tell that wedding will happen in chapter 20 or not because I'm still writing it and its getting pretty lengthy ...I myself don't know what's going to happen next because I don't plan everything I just write whatever comes in my mind ...

I will mention your name in chapter 20 because I'm writing a special chapter for you ( remember you asked me to writ lengthy but I told u i can only do it once or twice in a week ) so am writing special chapter 😳

Aww...that's so sweet of u Jasā¤ļø Thank you so much 😳 and you know na how much I'm addicted to your FF...bole tho Jabra FanšŸ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago
#92
Great update!
The way Suraj just lifted her up in front of every one was hilarious and amazing too!

Vivaan ne mauke ka fayda utha lia😈

Chakor isn't feeling too good about her sudden engagement to Vivaan and Suraj's decision to marry Tina? Kahin kuch kuch ho toh nahi raha Madam ko?šŸ˜†

Update soonish!

-Sanu

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Posted: 8 years ago
#93
beautifully written , Jasmine!!!
Looking fwd to your next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#94
Hey there!I just read the whole story in one shot! It is AMAZING!😳
Eagerly waiting for chapter 20!😃
Btw... nice to meet you, I'm Akhi! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#95
Jassy!
Amazing update dear.
Suraj left and apne baap ko chod diya jail mein sadhne ko! Ab toh kn jail se niklega toh ekdum gussa hoke niklega!
Hard times ahead Suraj babu!
Loved the way suraj is drawn towards Chakor during the dance.
Chakor was confused regarding accepting the proposal. Her dil gave the pyar ka signal!
Oho! Suraj babu gusse mein Tina se shaadi vi karne nikal gaye? It will be amazing to have both the shaadis at a time. Expecting some bollywood type tadka masala from the next updates.
I am sure u'll rock the wedding updates and I loved the promo. So excited to read what happens in the next updates.
I am so addicted to your story. You are zabardast yaar! Well, I use amazing most of the time, used zabardast today, for a change! šŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
#96
C h a p t e r 1 5
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It's a kiss, I bet my precious Photoshop here it gonna be a kiss... Okay maybe not exacly a kiss but when a guy's lips meets the girl's lips, its a kiss, at least in SuKor's case I believe that, so yeah...šŸ˜†šŸ˜³.. Okay first things first, Chashmishhh šŸ¤— please accept my apology for commenting really late here even though I know you'll forgive me šŸ˜†šŸ˜³

Alright now enough of my baakh baakh, I'm gonna talk about SuKor first here uski baath hi bakhi saab (umeed hi kya kar sakthi ho mujhse šŸ˜†) okay? Good šŸ˜†
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What was that, was Chakor looking for Suraj that time 😳, pati-dev ko dekh ne kiliye itni bechain ho rahi hai hamari Chakoriya šŸ˜†šŸ¤£
But then comes Tina 🤢, but I must say she is a mirchi gal, but she's a no match to our Chakoriya here šŸ˜›.. I had a good laugh when Tina didn't even give a damn about Suraj and who he was (good girl Tina šŸ‘šŸ¼, stay like that and never come in between SuKor, please and thank you 😊), Chakor sure did enjoyed herself there..šŸ˜† Can't blame you Chakor, even I did 🤣

Suraj thinking about Chakor , he is starting to fall for her subconsciously and great choice of song for both of them (CVs please zaara dekhiye toh), I was visualizing Suraj thinking about Chakor and that song in the background and it was hawwwttt (btw I imagined Suraj wearing black shirt with jeans so I hope you understand šŸ˜†) but then comes KN 😔🤢, so I'm just gonna ignore him šŸ˜†

Now comes the fun part 😃 (no not about ViKor, I'm skipping that but I'm gonna highlight the part where she felt uncomfortable with his touch, that right Chakor be uncomfortable, stay uncomfortable, he's a girgit raja, so stay away from people who is girgit šŸ˜”šŸ˜†.. Okay putting that aside, why does Suraj have to come to Chakor? Hmmm, simple because he's falling for her šŸ˜†

suraj : itney pyaar se kyo'n dekhh rahi hai ? woh chaand hai Suraj nahi... ( Winks )

Flirty Suraj in the house people 🤣 and he remembers her talking with Chand baba šŸ˜†, how sweet is that ā¤ļø and the fall, I was hoping he catched her before she fall but who cares, at least we get to see a kiss so it's all worth it for me šŸ˜†

Totally, I loved the whole chapter here 😃 and thank you so much for working so hard to give us awesome chapters šŸ¤—
PS: Could you tone it down with the express update here šŸ˜†, it's getting hard for me cope up with 😃
PS again: Just kidding šŸ˜†šŸ˜› keep updating more so that it fills my time to read about SuKor when we have non-SuKor scenes in the episode 😃

*Edited*
Okay I swear i didn't know this comment was gonna be this long, I guess I'm the who needs to do the toning down a little šŸ˜†
Edited by _YmBrYnE_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: ..chotu..

Bade bade jhappiyas šŸ¤—
Arey itna jaldi update karte ho! Now I feel bad for Nehaji. Bechari kahan atki hui hain šŸ˜†
Coming to the update it was awesum as always. Mindblowing song attachments. Ekdum perfectly fit karte hain. I am so greedy for sukor scenes and u fulfill all my wishes. Muaahz!
Oh suraj broke down! Bechara aur kitna dil ki awaz ko unsuna karta!
Hey woh drink mein kya mila hua tha? Want to know who wants to do that? Suraj? Idk. I'll wait for tom.
I am absolutely enjoying the story!

Abold: Ek ROFLOL koh sirf ek dusri ROFLOL ko samajh sakti hai 🤣🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
#98
wow
aesome upt
though suraj is anti hero he has a special aura that grabs all the attention towards himself
loved the mandir scen
waiting for the special epi
cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#99
C h a p t e r 1 6
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Chashmisshhh šŸ¤—
Okay I'm getting straight to the point, starting off with SuKor (which means the whole chapter cause it's a SuKor FF šŸ˜†).. Okay so here I go:
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I KNEW ITTT... 🄳 It was a kiss and Ioved ittt.. remember I said that didn't want SuKor to kiss under the bet's influence, I'm definitely not taking it back šŸ˜†.. I prefer them kissing like this 😳 (I'm sticking to my logic of the kiss, medical jargons doesn't work with me 🤣)

Why is Suraj getting beating from KN, he is strong enough to beat him back 😭, hopefully we get to see Suraj beating KN with the same stick and KN pleading for him to stop.. The day it happens I'll be yelling "Take that you 🤬" šŸ˜†... But I felt for Suraj though, how he must have felt getting beating man... It's really heartbreaking to read, but we can see how great son he is for his mother here..
Previously we got to see Suraj thinking about Chakor and now it's Chakor who is thinking about Suraj and the kiss ā˜ŗļøā­ļø..

Before I end my comment-shomment šŸ˜†, I would like to take this time to list out all the characters I hate;
1. KN (Top on my list)
2. Kusum
3. Tia (She's bad, I can just feel it)
4. Vivaan (he's being so chippak chippak with Chakor so I don't like that, sorry Vivaan fans)
5. Imli (She's at the bottom of my list which is a good thing here šŸ˜†)

Alright now gonna comment on your next chapter before you update chapter 20 here šŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
Aafato'n ke parindey "IshaqZaade" chapter 20 *WEDDING SPECIAL*

3:30 pm at haveli :
while ranjhana was doing preprations for chakor's mehndi ronight in haveli tejaswani was preparing to welcom the Raichands in a grand manner along with preparing
for tina's mehndi as well...

At basti : chakor's house...

Kasturi was making chakor's dress ready while chakor was waiting for imli to come home but she was no where to be seen...

Chakor : Maa tu yeh sab ready kar main imlu ko dhoond kar ati hun..
kasturi: Pagal hui gai ka chakoriya..honey wali dulhaniya aisey bahar nahi jawat...
chakor : maa kia keh rahi ho ? mujhe ghar main qaid kar k rakhogi ?
kasturi: haan kari hai qaid..bss thore dino k waste hi toh meri bitiya meri ankho'n k samne hai ( she said with teary eyes )
chakor : ( holds kasturi's hand ) maa aisy baatein karogi toh main kahi'n nahi jaungi...
kasturi: dhatt pagli...aisa nahi kehat...acha chal jaa or imlu ko dhoond k jaldi aai jana..

Chakor hugs kasturi and leaves to find imli ( she was wearing the same white dress with colorful dupatta ) she searched for imli everywhere and finally found her on
cliff she was about to jump when chakor pulls her back..

Chakor : Imlii pagal ho gai hai ? yeh kia kar rahi thi ?
imli : ( starts crying ) Toh aur ka karein hum ?? humre paas aur konu raasta nahi..
chakor : Imli main janti hun k suraj ki shaadi ki khabar sun k tujhe jhatka laga hai magar iska matlab yeh nahi k tu apni jaan de dey..
imli : Toh hum o kaa kari hai didi ? suraj sirf humka nahi humre bache ko chorh raha hai...

Chakor was shocked to listen this...she trund imli to her and asked what is she saying...Imli narrates everything that happened between her and suraj 1 day before he
got arrested...Chakor was listening to this silently and after imli said what she wanted to chakor could not control herself and she slapped imli so hard that she fell
on ground crying...

Chakor : Imli tu ...mujhe samajh nahi aa raha kia kahu'n tujhse ? aur abb kyo'n ro rahi hai ?? suraj par ilzaam lagane se pehle yeh soch le k uss raat jo huva woh tum
dono ki marzi se huva tha...( she holds imli and makes her stands and asks ) kia usne tere sath koi zabardasti ki ? yaa tuny usey roka tha ?? bol jawaab de ( she shouted)
Imli : Na...nahi..hum bhi nashey main they ( she was crying )
Chakor : Toh jab tu mee lakh samjhane par apne dill ko samjha nahi paai or yeh ghatiya kaam karte waqt maa-baba ki izzat ka khayal nahi toh abb kyo'n ro rahi hai ?
aur tujhe kia lagta hai tu apni jaan de degi toh sab thik ho jayega ? maa-baba ka soch un par kia beetegi..meri shaadi hone wali hai imlu ...jiss ghar main
khushiya'n dastak de rahi hain waha'n matam chaa jaata...please tuny jo ghalti ki hai usey badal nahi saktey magar koi hall zaroor nikaleynge...or us suraj
ko main...

Chakor asked imli to wipe her tears and go home she will come back after a while...imli leaves from there but before she left chakor stealthly took her gun form her
belt and she also left from there...she reached haveli and saw decorations going on for the function ...she goes to backside of haveli and enter from a window and
stealthily goes to suraj's room he was no where to be seen...she heard shower voice from bathroom she understood that he's in bathroom...she locked the room's door
and shouted "Suraj" "Suraj" ...after shouting 3,4 times suraj finally opened the bathroom door ( he was ready for tina's mehndi function..he was wearng white salwar
with seaweed green kurti...he was wiping hairs with towel ) He was shocked to see chakor in his room and shuts his eyes and opens them again..

Suraj : Bnadhua billi tu...tu sach main yaha'n hai...
chakor: Main toh yaha'n hun suraj magar tum nahi rehne waley...tumhari himmat kaisey hui meri behan k sath aisa karney ki...jaan dene lagi thi woh apni (she shouted)
Suraj : Kia? kia kiya maine imli k sath ? aur tu kia kar rahi hai is tarha'n yaha ?
chakor: Achi tarha'n se jante ho tum k tumne imli k sath kia kiya hai...Maa banney wali hai woh...aur bacha tumhara hai suraj...( she shouted once again )

suraj at first was shocked but then brusted out laughing...and said he is not father of that child...chakor was in no mood to listen to any excuses she pointed gun
at suraj and shot...she shot at the lamp ...suraj looked at her..

Chakor : Yeh sochney ki ghalti bhi matt karna k mera nishana chook gaya hai...yeh jo darr hai na yeh dekhna chahti hun tumhari ankho'n main...

she shoots again and another lamp breaks...

chakor : bass bohat dekh liya darr abb tumhari bari hai suraj...
suraj : Pagal ho gai hai jaan se marey gi humein...dekh chali jaa yaha'n se goli ki awaaz sun k koi aa gaya or tujhe yaha'n dekh liya toh..
chakor ; bakwaas band karo apni suraj ( she shouted ) tumhe aaj koi nahi bacha sakta mujhse...tum achi tarha'n jante they imli tumse pyaar karti thi...aur tumne..tumne
uske pyaar ka faida uthaya...

she was saying this while suraj was slowly moving toward her..he immediately grabbed gun from her and she fell on the bed...he was about to say something when there
was a knock on the door...tejaswani and vivaan with some other people were asking him to open the door...he looked at chakor angril holds her forearm..

chakor : yeh kia kar hey ho chorho mujhee...( he places his hand on her mouth )

He immediately takes off her dupatta and ties her hands and pins her to wall beside the door...he opened the door behind which chakor was tyring to remove his hand from her mouth
but failed...he opened the door half and aksed them why are they shouting...he was struggling to hide chakor too ..

Tejaswani : beta humne goli chalne ki awaaz suni do baa kia huva sab thik hai naw...
suraj ; haan hum gun saaf kar rahey they toh goli chala kar dekh rhe the k thik se saaf hui k nahi..
vivaan: do baar goli ki awaaz ai thi..
suraj : kyo'n abb tumhe uss se bhi problem hai..chalo jaiye sab hume tayyar hona hai humein...

he shuts the door and removes hand from chakor's mouth..

chakor : kia batmeezi hai suraj hath kholo mere..( she tries to leave )

suraj looks at her angrily and pins her to wall...there was mere 2,3 inches space between them..both of them had fire in their eyes ...

Suraj : batmeezi ki baat tum matt karo...tum humare kamre main chori chupey aa kar darwaaza band kar k hum par goli chala rahi thi kuch seconds pehle...dimaagh ghar
chorh kar ai ho ? agar koi tumhe dekh leta yaha'n mere sath toh kia hota andaaza bhi hai ? kuch hi ghanto main mehndi hai teri ...or dulhan yaha'n apney
hone wale pati k barey bhai k kamre main hai...abb humari ek baat kaan khol kar sun le..tujhe humare bare main jo sochna hia soch...magar yeh baat palley
baandh le k meri shaadi tina raichand se hone wali hai...teri behan humare liye humesha ek naukrani hi thi...jaa abb yaha'n se...

he untie her hands...and opens the door...chakor without saing anything keaves from there carefully so no see her...it was almsot 5:00 pm and kasturi was intergoating
imli regarding chakor...imli was sitting quitely ...chakor comes back home and kasturi asks her where she was ..she makes an excuse and goes to get ready and call imli
too...While getting ready she tells imli something... ( Chakor was wearing white lehenga with green embroiders on boder and white backless blouse whose tie was green
and he dupatta was drapped around her lehnga in a half saree style ) She tells her plan to imli and says that she will talk to tina and ask if she really wants to marry
suraj...they were talking when kasturi entered and ask imli to go and get ready and she does chako's makeup and giver her jewellry ..

The raichands arrived haveli and was welcomed by tejaswani...tina was smiling but when he looked at suraj her smile vanished ...

after a while chakor came to haveli with her parents..ranjhana welcomed her by doing her aarti...vivaan was smiling looking at chakor but suraj was just awestruck
he kept looking at her until tejaswani came and called him 3,4 times and he asked her what ?

Tejawasani : dekho na suraj kaisey sawagat kar rahi hai humari bandhua ka humare ghar main...
suraj : toh ?
tejaswani : kia aap kuch kar nahi saktey k chakor iss ghar main na aye...
suraj : kia ?? humare paas karney ko aur kuch hai nahi kia ? yeh aap aurto'n k masley main humein na ghaseeto mummy...

Chakor and tina sit at same place and The mehndi rasam starts...2 girls are making mehndi design on chakor and 2 are wroking on tina's design...Some girls go in middle
and starts dancing...

Mehandi hai rachne waali
Haathon mein gehri laali
Kahein sakhiyaan ab kaliyan
Haathon mein khilne waali hain
Tere man ko, jeevan ko
Nayi kushiyaan milne waali hain

Ho hariyali banno..
Le jaane tujh ko guiyaan
Aane waale hain saiyaan
Thaamenge aa ke bahiyan
Goonjegi shehnaai angnaai.. angnaai.


Mehandi hai rachne waali
Haathon mein gehri laali
Kahein sakhiyaan ab kaliyan
Haathon mein khilne waali hain
Tere man ko, jeevan ko
Nayi kushiyaan milne waali hain


Chakor and tina's mehndi was almost done so the girls asked what alphabet they want to write tejaswani and ranjhana both spoke at once 'S" "V" ...so the girls wrote it..

Both suraj and vivaan came there to find there name's alphabet

Teri mehandi woh dekhenge
To apna dil rakh denge
Woh pairon mein tere chupke se hariyali banni
Mehandi roop sanwaare
O mehandi rang nikhaare
O hariyali banni ke aanchal mein utrenge taare

Mehandi hai rachne waali
Haathon mein gehri laali
Kahein sakhiyaan ab kaliyan
Haathon mein khilne waali hain
Tere man ko, jeevan ko
Nayi kushiyaan milne waali hain

Both vivaan and suraj found the alphabet but both were disappointed and asked the girls what's this ?

chakor : kia hua vivaan ?
vivaan : chakor tumhare hath par v ki jagah..S hai...
suraj : aur tina k hath par V hai..

both chakor and tina looked at their hands and V was written on tina's hand while S was on chakor's...but everything was back to normal soon...tina was talking to
her friends while chakor was sitting in front of a fan away from the function to dry her mehndi soon because she was thristy...she wanted to call kasturi but when
she saw ranjhana introducing kasturi to other guests so she stayed quite...vivan was busy with his friends and suraj was talking to someone on phonecall so he came
to a side because there was so much noise in function...he was talking when he saw chakor sitting at little distance ( her back was at suraj's side :/ ) she was
continously looking at water glasses that were kept on a table suraj understood she is thirsty...he thought that he don't care and he lft from there...

Chakor was still waiting for her mehndi to dry when she saw a hand that was offering her water without wasting a second she drank the water in one breath and said..

chakor : Thank you viva...( she looked back but it was not vivaan it was suraj..she stood up )

Chakor : tum ...tumhari himmat kaisey hui mujhe pani pilaney ki...
suraj did't said anything and left from there...After sometime the function was over and kasturi and bhuvan asked chakor to come but chakor asked for a minute and she went to tina
they both talked about something and shakes hands and then chakor leaves from haveli with her parents...

after returning home kasturi asks imli why did't she come to her sister's mehndi..chakor tells kasturi its better if she don't come or else she will get hurt seeing
suraj marrying someone else..kasuti understands this and they alk go to sleep..

At haveli : suraj was getting ready to sleep when tejaswani comes there and says..

Tejaswani : Beta hum jantey hain aapko chakor aur vivaan ki shadi se koi masla nahi hai magar aap humari baat samjhiye...
suraj : kia baat hai mummy ...apko humari shaadi ki khushi se zyada chakor or vivaan ki shadi se problem ho rahi hai ?
tejaswani : haan beta kyo'n ke...kyo'n ke abb ranjhana hum par apna rob jharegi k uski bahi ne humai hone wali bahu ko race main haa diya tha..

suraj rolls his eyes in frustration...

tejaswani : isiliye hum chahtey hain k..
suraj : mummy apse kitni baar kahein k yeh aap aurto'n ki bato'n mein humein na ghaseeta karein...hum bohat thak gaye hain hum araam karney dijiye jaiye..

tejaswani leaves from his room but stands outside his door and thinks to herself that she will not let chakor come in this house...I know what to do...suraj before
going to bed saw her standing and thinking something...he understood that his mother is planning something against chakor but he decided not to bother about her..

At morning : It was chakor and tina's haldi function and all the preprations were done in haveli...chakor came there with her parents she was wearing a white saree
with yellow pallu and was wearing Floral jewellry ( Flower adornments encircling her arms...floral embedid belt adorned her waist...and rose maang tika ) she was looking
stunning...tina and chakor were seated on the same sofa and vivaan and suraj were sitting on the other sofa facing their brides...first tejaswani applied haldi
to suraj as he's older and from the same bowl the haldi meant to be applied to tina but when tejaswani was walking toward tina some children who were running here
and there playing collided with she was about to fall on right side but tina held tejaswani but the bowl slipped from her hand and large amount of haldi fell on chakor
and the rest was on floor along with a broken bowl...chakor stood up and tried to wipe the haldi away from her fance and arms but ended up speading it...Ranjhana
called it abshagun because a bride can apply haldi only from the bowl from which the haldi is applied to her to be husband...

Vivaan : maa choriye na...ghalti se girr gaya...chakor tum jao jaa kar yeh saaf kar lo..
kasturi: nahi vivaan babu...ek baar haldi lag jai hai toh utarte nahi...abshagun howat hai..
suraj : arrey aap sab bass ki jiye abb..haldi hi lagane k liye laye they na chakor ko toh lagg gai haldi,...abb jaldi se baki ki rasmei'n poori karein or humein chutti dein..


everyone continued the function but chakor was not feeling well...ranjhana asked her to go and rest in guest room till tina's haldi is going on...she agrees and goes
upstair she was waling in corridor when she collided with someone and was about to fall when to warm hands touched her..one held her waist and the other her shoulder
it was non other than suraj...they were lost in each other's eyes...

Kabhi aisa hota hai , jaage jaage koi sota hai
bin chaahey kahi'n khota hai...

Kabhi aisa hota hai , jaage jaage koi sota hai
bin chaahey kahi'n khota hai..


he helped her stands straight both were still lost in each other's eyes...her one hand was on his shoulder and other was holding his kurti tighly..

Kab armaa'n machlenge kisko hai yeh pata
kabn mausam badlenge kisko hai yeh pata
pyaar ho jata hai kaisye na jaane na dil tera

Nazar se nazar miley
ho dekhengi ankhein sapna

jo yu'n koi sath chale
jo yu'n koi sath chale

woh lagne lagega apna

His one hand was holding her shoulder but he lossen his grip and moved his hand from her shoulder to her elbow resulting in breaking the floral adornment that was encircling
her arm...the flowers fell on ground ...suddenly chakor realized what suraj had done to imli and she pushed him...suraj also came back to sense...chakor was feeling
awkward so she left from there and went back to function...suraj stood there for a minute asking himself that why does she matters to him ? why he feels like he's
drowning in her eyes whenever he looks at them...he also rememberes how she sent him to jail..tried to kill him and how he has to ask vivaan for money...he decided
not to think about her...

The haldi function was over by evening...and sangeet's preprations were started...suraj wanted to discuss something with tejaswani so he goes to her room but when he enters
he saw her talking on phone..

Tejaswani : Humne jo kaha hai woh kisi bhi haal mein poora hona chahiye...( she hungs up )
suraj : konsa kaam mummy ?
tejaswani: ( shocked to see suraj ) umm woh beta shaadi ki tayari k bare main bata kar rahey they..

suraj was suspicious but did not bothered to ask anything else...he talked to tejaswani and left..

Next morning

At chakor's house..kasturi was preparing shagun and chakor was in her room resting on bed and looking at her mehndi that's when she saw "S' written on her hands...she
also remembered how suraj's name's haldi was accidentaly applied to her...chakor said to herself..

Chakor : nahi yeh sba main kia soch rahi hun..Mujhe Bass apne plan par focus karna hai jo maine imli ko uska haq dilane k liye socha hai..and thank god tina and vivaan
bhi shamil hain mere plan main..bass abb sab kuch thik se ho jaye...2 din baad shaadi hai aur...( she was talking to herself when her phone rang she picked it up )

Unknown man : kia main chakor ji se baat kar raha hun ?
chakor : Ji aap kon ?
unknown man : chakor ji kia aap vivaan naam k larke ko janti hain ?
chakor : ji main janti hun unhe..aap kon bol rahey hain ?
unknown man : ji kisi vivaan naam k larke ka accident huva hai or unhe jabalpur k ilaqe k black swan hotel main le jaya gaya hai...ambulance ka wait kar rahey hain..
unke phone main apka number emergency calling par tha..aap please jaldi aa jaiye..
chakor : par hotel main kyon unhe hospital le kar jaiye main wahi'n aati hun..
unknown person : hum ambulance ka wiat kar rahey hain isiliye bahar sadak par chorhna thik nahi samjha...aap room number 14 main aa jaiyega..

chakor was very worried but she decided not to tell bhuvan kasturi anything...she made an excuse and left ...she was also feeling why would they take him to a hotel
but decided not to think anything else...she was on her way..

At haveli : suraj came to tejaswani's room to talk about his sherwani but she was in bathroom..he was about to leave when he heard tejaswani's phone ringing he picked it up
and did't said anything..

unknown man : madam ji apka kaam ho gaya hai...humne chakor ko vivaan k accident ka bata kar black swan hotel ane k liye keh diya hai...hello ..madam ji hello ?
suraj hung up the phone and it did't take him much time to realize what his mother has done...he threw his sherwani there and left immediately..

chakor reached there...she was finding the atmosphere of the place wierd...she realized what kind of place is this...and she was feeling stupid for coming here...
she thought to call vivaan but she forgot her phone ...she was cursing herself for being so stupid...she decied to leave as soon as possible but she heard a siren..
police jeep siren...police was coming there and was arresting each and every girl they saw...chakor was near a wall and was tensed about what to do...the police was
coming near but suddenly someone kept a hand on her mouth and dragged her behind the wall and pinned her to wall..it was suraj...chakor was shocked to see him there..
her eyes were already teary ...She tried to push away suraj's hand but he shushed her...they were so close..it started to rain...they were again lost in each others eyes..
Even in heavy rain suraj managed to realize that tears were rolling down her eyes...He removed his hand from her mouth and wiped the tear from her face and he was now
holding he face gently..

Dil mera hai na samajh kitna
Be-sabar yeh bewakoof barha
chahta hai kitna tujhe
Khud magar nahi jaan saka

Iss dard-e-dil ki sifarish
ab kar de koi yaha'n
ke mill jaye ise woh baarish
Jo bhiga de poori taha'n

Both were continously looking at each other...anger was no where to be seen in thier eyes ...chakor was emotional+scared right now...she slowly said 'Suraj main...
Mujhe nahi pata tha..yeh " a tear escaped her eye again ..suraj understood she's scared right now so he placed his finger on her lips and said 'shh"

Kya hua asar tere saath reh kar na jaaney
ki hosh mujhe abb na raha

Lafz they mere zubaa'n pe aa k ruke
Magar ho na sake woh byaa'n

Dharkan tera hi naam jo ley
Aankhein bhi paighaam yeh dein

teri nazar ka hi yeh asar hai
mujh pe jo huva

Iss dard-e-dill ki sifarish
abb karde koi yaha'n
k mill jaye isey woh barish
Jo bhigaa dey poori tarha'n...

*They are mere inches away from each other* *Suraj has places his finger on her lips* * Both are lost in each others eyes*

The end...

Precap : Chakor-vivaan tina-suraj's sangeet ...there's competition going on between larki waley and larkey waley...The bride swapping takes place..


Here you go...Hushh it took me 3 days to complete this chapter...I wanted to complete this chapter with the wedding but It was getting too lengthy so i decided to stope here..
One thing I want you guys to know is that I don't plan everything already..Whatever comes in my mind when I'm writing I just write it ( properly giving a shape to story)
even when I write precap they're not planned whatever i will write here in this precap I'll shape the chapter according to it...so if you guys find any mistake please
forgive me ..I know I don't write well and I fail to explain too but I still try my best...I hope you guys like this chapter...Do tell me about it in comments...Forgive
me for the mistakes I've done in this chapter...Next chapter may get late this time because I'm not well so can't use laptop much...

@Vinlora you asked me to write lengthy chapters but I can write one or two long chaptes in a week...So I hope you do like this one..
@Neha...I'm missing you and your hilarious gifs...where are you girl ?
@Nami di : thank you for always being the first one to read the chapter and commenting love you for that ..:)
@Suki : i'm giving you the credit for lake scene now because I forgot to do it in previous chapters..*Guys the lake scene where suraj saves chakor was inspired bu suki's
post*

Love-jasmene

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