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Posted: 8 years ago
#61
Chap 15 -

uff suraj babu cant handle the Spicey posh girl! N is getting attached to the gaon ki gori... Imlu u just lost the race... 😆

The feisty dialogues and interaction between Suraj and Chakor are so good and true to character!


Diaogues like this are brilliant --

Chakor - suraj babu ? Shehri mirchi kuch ziada tikhii lagg gai ?

suraj : itney pyaar se kyo'n dekhh rahi hai ? woh chaand hai Suraj nahi... ( Winks )

Chakor : I wish k iss suraj ko grahan lagg jaye...

Brilliant scene with the Scenes recap, chanduji ke saath conversation and the rescue scene from lake!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62
So so so so so so so so sorry!
But I just read the chapters and I LOVE THEM SO MUCHHH!!!! They're perfect! As if happening in front of my eyes! All SuKor scenes are mindblowing, especially towel scene! And they also kissed in CPR form! And badtameez KN, beating his own son. Badtameez Imli, hurting her own sister.

I'm totally loving this series. Update soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63
Aloo my lil aloo Chap 16 review -

I lurrrve how you took my last weeks frustrated Sukor quickie of drowning in the lake and incorporated it into this story... fantastic...

Hats off my dear you write well 🤗. Gosh I need to think of more quickie ideas to give you naa!!

Simply amazing how you show a sneaky kiss between them, and the repercussions of it how KN would react how the girls feel jealous... looove it :D :D :D❤️

Are you studying literature by chance??
Edited by sukiya123 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64
@Suki
Thank you so much for all the comments...I will reply to each of them later..Right now I'm little busy with my novel...Just sneaking in and out of forum for sec or two...

By the way did I mention that lake scene was your idea...If not then I sure will do it in chapter 18...😃

No dear I'm not studying literature but writing is something that I loveee...
I'm a shayar by heart as well 😆 ...I wrote many plays in high school and acted in them as well...
now days I'm focusing on my novel...#Horror-thriller-suspense-romance

Oh god...#SelfPraising #LevelBesharmi 🤣

Edited by Chashmish786 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

So so so so so so so so sorry!

But I just read the chapters and I LOVE THEM SO MUCHHH!!!! They're perfect! As if happening in front of my eyes! All SuKor scenes are mindblowing, especially towel scene! And they also kissed in CPR form! And badtameez KN, beating his own son. Badtameez Imli, hurting her own sister.

I'm totally loving this series. Update soon!

No need to say sorry...

I love them too 😆

Right now I'm working on my novel..I will start writing chapter 18 in few hours and you will get the update tomorrow...

Thank you so much...🤪
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66
Super duper update Chashmish...loved it.
I knew from the previous chapter that there was something fishy with this kabir guy,u know whenever u mention his name,I get negative vibes,I guess he works for KN and boy was I glad when Chakor didn't sip that energy drink,thank god usne nahi piya,warna pata nahi Kya hojata.
Tent scene was amazing too...especially when she falls atop him and they both get lost in each other.
But that river side scene once again tops the list of the most beautiful scenes in this update too,especially the way u described their hug and the song to go with it,loved that when he needed the warmth and comfort from someone's arms,he straightaway rushed to the river side as he knew she must be there and without thinking twice he hugged her with all his might,it's like his heart lead her to him rather than his feet because his heart already started falling for her.
Superb song selections u do by the way,very apt and in sync with the situations of the characters.
A huge thank u for giving us such awesome updates which are full of SuKor scenes.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow
awesome upt
suraj crying & hugging chakor...i'm liking it
precap looks scary
waiting for next part
cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68
Aafato'n ke parindey "IshaqZaade" chapter 18

Recap : Tina and chakor fins something fishy about the energy drink...chakor and suraj argue...chakor falls atop suraj...Suraj is hurt and comes to chakor and hugs her..


Suraj was still hugging chakor...both were drenching in rain...chakor's heart was batteling with her mind...In this battle she forgot to push away suraj...after sometime
suraj came back to his senses...he reaized that he's hugging his biggest enemy and cried on her shoulders too...He wanted to leave her giht away but was waiting for an
excuse...he finally came up with one...he loosen his grip and moved his hand from her back to her neck ...chakor felt litte strange...she was trying to understand
what he's up to that's when he whispered something in her ears...

Suraj : tumhe akhir kaar galey laga kar bohat acha lag raha hai...TINAAA...

Chakor's eyes were wide open listening to the name...it did't take too much time for her to realize that suraj is assuming her tina...she pushed him right away..
when suraj looked at her he acted to get shock...
A lighting striked...The rain was getting heavy

Suraj : Jnagli billi tum...tum yaha'n ho toh tina kaha'n hai...
chakor: Mujhe nahi pata tina kaha'n hai...
suraj : Ohh toh jab humne tumhe gale laga rakha tha tab tumne kuch kaha'n kyo'n nahi

Another lightning striked..

Chakor: K..k..kyo'n key mujhe..mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha..sab itna achanak ho gaya..woh main..
suraj : Bass rehne de...yeh woh main kar k humara waqt barbaad na kar...

He turned back to go but chakor called him..."Suraj" ...He looked back at her

Chakor: Tum..tum kia ...ro ...( Suraj cut her off in middle )
suraj : Hum Ro nahi rahey they...
chakor: jhoot matt bolo ...baarish k katro'n se pehle mere kaandhey ko tumhare aansou'n ne bhigo rakha tha...
suraj : Humne kab kaha k tere kaandhey par humare ansoo nahi'n gire...
chakor: par abhi toh tumne kaha k tum ro nahi rahey they..
suraj ( Laughs ) ...comes close to her and touches her face with his finger and she pushes it away...
Suraj : Bandhua billi...humare aansoo iss liye beh rahey they kyo'n ke humne ankho'n main woh kia use krte hain filmo main ?? 'Glacerine" haan wohi...woh laga rakha
tha...arrey aisey kia dekhr rahi hai ?? hum tina se milne aye they...usey patane k liye bachara banne ka natak karne k liye hi ansoo bahaye they humne
Socha tha thora bechara ban kar do ansoo bahayenge uskey galey lag kar toh woh bhi humse lipat jayegi ...par afsos phooti kismat humari...tina ki jagah tumse paala
parh gaya..

Another lightening striked

Chakor looks at him disgusted...pushes him away and says..
chakor: Acha huva ek baar phir tumne meri galat fehmi door kar di..mujhe na jane kyo'nlaga k tumhare aanso bilkul sachey hain...par nahi..koi itna ghatiya kaisey ho sakta
hai ? tina se dosti karney k liye tum usey emotionaly fool bnaney chaley they ??? chii suraj

suraj : Kia chii ? tujhe kia pareshani hai hum kisi se bhi kisi tarike se dosti karein...chal mill gaya jawaab tujhe...jaa yaha'n se..
chakor: mera camp hai...jana tumhe hai yaha'n se ...( she said sternly )

suraj looked at her for a second and again turned back to go...and she did the same to go to her tent...both were heading in opposite ways...and another lightening striked
...


Morning...It was the last day of the camp..evryone was packing their stuff and meeting each other before and saying good luck...But tina,kusum,chakor were no where to be
seen...after sometime all three of them came to the camp but not alone with police ...coach kabir was terrified when he saw police with chakor...chakor goes to kabir..

chakor : Sir woh jo energy drink apne mujhe di thi na uss din...woh aap inn police walo'n ko bhi de dijiye...inko bhi zaroorat parti hai energy ki inka kaam hi aisa hai...
Coach : K..K.kaisy baat kar rahi ho..ch..chak..chakor...
Tina : ...waisey bohat na insaafi ki hai aap ne...chakor ko energy drink or hume kuch bhi nahi ? ghalat baat hai..
kusum : arrey oo coach sahab...aisey paseenney kyo'n chootan lagg gaye thaarey ?

They were talking when two officers came from store room where the drinks were kept and informed that they found som more drinks with the same powder in it...

Kabir : Yeh sab kia ho raha hai ? main ...mujhe kuch nahi pata..cha..chakor kia hai yeh sab ?
chakor : Mr.Kabir tripathi yeh aapke karmo ka natija hai...aap ko sharam nahi aai ek teacher ki post ka akmaan ( insult ) kartey hove ? aapne ek guru or shishaye
( tacher n student ) k naam par kalank ( blacken ) lagaya hai...apko kia laga tha aap meri drinks main steroids milayenge or mujhe race se bahar karva denge...

*FLASHBACK*

Chakor ; tina yeh drink main white pwoder dekho...
Tina : yeh kia hai ?
chakor : Main sceince lab ki machine nahi hun k dekh kar bta dungi k yeh kia hai ...
tina : hmm..pr yeh bohat ajeeb hai...coach ne sirf tumhe drink di..yeh keh kar k usne sabko di hai or fir iss drink main se yeh ajeeb sa powder...iski smell bhi
bohat ajeeb hai...

chakor : I know humein kia karna hai...
she took a paper and collected some powder on it...chakor,tina,kusum,vinny planned that tomorrow morning kusum will go to hospital to get this powder checked...and
chakor will act as if she's actually drinking the energy drinks ...the reports came by evening and it was confirmed that there were streiods in the energy drinks
they reported this to police and chakor gave her statement...

*FLASHBACK ENDS*

Coach kabir knew his game is over so he tried a fail attempt to run but his own students caught him...he was arrested by police...and this news was given to kn...
he was so damn angry and went to suraj's room and found him sleeping on his bed...he shouted 'Suraj" ...suraj woke up and kn again insulted and blamed him
for the failure again...but then told him that they're save as the coach did;t said anything agains them...he held a press conference outside haveli and gave his
statement...

AFTER 3 DAYS..
Chakor and vivaan met at their secret meeting point..and planned everything...tina saw them together but she did't reacted much...vivaan developed some feelings for
chakor whereas chakor just saw a true friend in him...in these three days vivaan managed to gain full access to kn's locker and
suraj was very jealous seeing this...suraj also came to know that imli was in love with him but he just took it as an immatue crush and asked her to not think like this
again...1 day ago he was drinking sitting alone in middle of no where...imli came to him and sat beside him...on the other side chakor and vivaan were also present at
at their secret meeting place ...Imli held suraj's hand and startd to tell him how she feels for him...On the other side vivaan propsed chakor..it was a shock for her
but she refused him saying she only sees him as a friend...she have dreams...this running is a natural God giftes talent but she has other dreams too...she's studying
in college she wants to become something ...It started to rain...Imli and suraj ran to find shelter and found one...all 4 of them were present at same place but on
opposite sides of the shelter...chakor refused vivaan and left from there seeing the weather getting worse...vivaan sat there feeling heart broken...On the other side
imli was looking romantically at suraj both were drunk...suraj came close to her and bends to kiss her...The wine bottle from imli's hand slips and rolls on ground...


Present day

Chakor and vivaan discussed their plan one last time and both left from there...Chakor,tina and kusum wish each other luck and gets ready to win...Suraj was watching
the Race on t.v whenever the camera zoomed at chakor suraj looked away...He did't wanted to remember anythign ...the race starts...tina takes the lead and chakor was
second now...kn also joined suraj unknown to the fact that there are some officers coming to haveli...suraj was pretending to be happy with kn when they saw chakor
on second position but deep down somewhere suraj wanted to shout to encourage chakor...he did't know why but he wanted to...but due to kn's presence he had to fake
his emotions...Chakor was running...she was remember each and every injustice kn has done to her...she looked at the "Bandhua Mohar' on her hand and her eyes were filled
with fire again and she ran faster...faster...faster and *Marathon Runner 501 chajor bhuvan laal has won the Delhi marathon*...Kn got angry but suraj smiled a bit seeing
chakor smiling and looking at the mohar...but soon his smile vanished when he saw kn angry...Same evening chakor came back to her home...and brought media persons
too...and went to haveli...the officers also arrived there...and vivaan showed them the files...suraj and kn were arrested...Suraj looked at chakor with anger...
He cursed himself for getting happy on her win...chakor looked at suraj..with same anger...remembering everything mean he's ever said to her...when police was taking
kn-suraj imli came there and asked inspector to arrest her but suraj asked her to shut up and don't show any sympathy and get lost...both father-son due was taken in
police jeep...but before leaving suraj whispered in chakor's ears...

Suraj ; Pachtayegi bandhua billi...

chakor looked at him and he just sat in jeep...

they were gone...The rakshas and his son were arrested...Her villiage was free...they battle she was fighting for past 10 years was won by her...she looked at the stamp
on her hand and tears rolled down her eye...kasturi asked why is she crying after winning...

Chakor crying : Maa aaj matt rokna...aaj rone de...Aaj tak jab bhi roi tujhe-baapu ko imlu ko yaa phir apne upar huye attyachaaro'n ko yaad kar k roi...magar aaj
...aaj main apni jeet par ro rahi hun...iss liye ro rahi hun kyo'n k main chillaa chillaa k saari dunya ko btana chahti hun...k jiss rakhshas ne mujhse mera
bachpan cheena ...Jiss umar main bachey dusrey bacho'n k sath khailtey hain...maine..maine woh bachpan iss rakhshas ki goliyo'n se ..iske attayacharo'n se bachne
main kab guzar diya maa mujhe ..mujhe pata hi nahi chala...jab mere kano'n ko maa ki lohrii ki zaroorat thi mainey usi kaano'n se bandooq ki goli chalne ki aawaaz suni
maa...Iss rakhshas ne mera bachpan cheena hai mujhse maa ( she was crying ) lekin issney yeh baat samajhne main bhool kardi k jo mohar isney mere haath par di hai na
woh sirf mere jism k ek maas k tukre par hai ( skin ) Meri rooh humesha se azaad panchi thi maa...abb bhi azaad hai aur humesha azaad rahegi...koi kaali syahi mere
ujwal sapno'n ko andhera nahi de sakti...Abb mera poora gaao'n azaad hai..aap sab azaad hain..jaiye jashn ki tayyariya'n kijiye..khushiya'n manaiye...

"Yeh haunsalo'n ki urhaan hai plays"

The End..

Pre-cap : Suraj gives statemnt agains kn and comes out of jail...chakor dance on Humko aaj kal hai intezaar...suraj comes there while chakor was dancing...Vivaan
propses chakor for marriage...

Here you go..I hpe you enjoy this chapter as well...I know there was only one sukor scene but I had to add other scenes so I can shape the story...about that
bachua thing of imli...You have to wait nd ead the story...Are you excited for precap ??

*Special announcment* Chapter 20 Is going to be a special chapter or you can say a *MAHA* chapter...I will give a little promo of the chapter...
They lake fall and save idea was of @Sukiya...Thank you suki ..
The promo's idea was of @Neha ( sorry tera username yaad ni mujhe 😛 ) Thank you love...

Love-Jasmene
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69
Your story is just amazing, I kinda like this suraj better than the one in the show at least in the beginning...so waiting for next chapter
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Jasmene❤️another amazing update...loved it...thank u dear...and I think maybe uss raath imli aur vivaan ke beech kuch kuch huva ho 😉 hehe

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