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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting updatešŸ‘
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U are happy, do u have any idea how happy am i??
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Note : Because I myself like to read long stories and stuff therefore my ff will also have many chapters maybe 60+ but if you guys think It should be shorter than please tell me, I'll try to make the story fast and lessen the chapters but if you're okay with lengthy stuff then also tell me 😊
Aafato'n ke parindey "IshaqZaade" chapter 29

Chakor's POV

I did nothing all day except going downstairs for 2 minutes but still I feel tried as if I've worked all day...This happens often now, Maybe because everything I'm doing is a secret burden to me, secret kept from my maai,baapu, Imli and vivaan..Imli and vivaan
they left this haveli after I started working with Kn. They are happy in their own world and I do feel happy about them. I ssat on sofa, head up and eyes staring at ceiling, few flashes of past appeared before my eyes and I closed them and when I opened
them I could feel the fire igniting in my eyes again but I had to calm down or else...Unknown to me T.v's remote was on sofa to and I accidentally switched on the T'v and a haunted house in a movie was shown and I saw a flashback again..
"Jungle, night time, Chakor screaming for suraj and a haveli in middle of no where"...

1 Year ago

Chakor was sleeping on sofa while suraj was sleeping on bed...Suraj woke up first and sees chakor sleeping peacefully on sofa and wonders to himsel.

Suraj's thoughts : Kitney araam se so rahi hai ...Issey sach main darr nahi lagta humse ? abhi btatey hain...

He gets up and holds his phone and type something and then move forward chakor and keeps the phone near her ear and turns on a loud music, chakor wakes up immediately...

Chakor : Yeh kia bachpana hai ? ( Irritated )
suraj : Bachpana nahi toh aur kia karein ? tum kia yaha'n mehmaan ho jo itni der tak so rhai ho ? jaldi utho or tayyar ho jao delhi jana hai humein...
chakor : Delhi ? kyu'n ? asked a confused chakor..
suraj : humare honeymoon k liye ...
chakor : ( shocked ) kia bakwaas kar rahey ho suraj ?
suraj : bakwas nahi kar rahey sach main delhi jaana hai.
chakor : dimaagh kharab ho gaya hai tumhara...kal raat saari rasmein aur daramey karney k baad tumhari daal nahi ali toh abb...( Suraj placed a finger on her lips )
suraj : Bass..Kitna bolti ho tum..haan delhi jaana hai magar honeymoon k liye nahi waha'n par ek event hai jo tumhe attend karna hai..
chakor : ( removing his finger from her lips ) kaisa event ? main kahi'n nahi jaungi tumhare sath...

suraj grabs her shoulders and makes her stand up ...

suraj : jaana toh tumhe parega..jaogi nahi toh paisey kaise ayenge ? chalo abb jaldi se tayyar ho jao..( pushes chakor )

chakor knew she had no choice so she got ready afetr having an awkward breakfast with imli and vivaan both suraj and chakor left for delhi...They might need to stay for 2 days so chakor packed her clothes and suraj made her pack his clothes
too...they were on the highway and suraj was using a gps...It was almost 5:30 pm but they still did not found the right highway all thanks to suraj's gps he was getting irritated so he grabbed a flask that was kept beside his seat and was abotu to drink
when chakor holds his hand..

chakor : Dimagh kharaab ho gaya hai ? drink n drive krogey ?
suraj : Dimaagh toh mera tab tab kharaab hota hai jab jab tu apna yeh muh kholti ho bhashan dene k liye...Choro humara flask

Both try to take flask from each other and in this fight suraj could't control steering wheel and the hit a tree. But thanks to their seat blets both of them were safe...

suraj : Yeh kia kiya tumne ? ( shouts angrily at chakor )
chakor : Maine kia kiya ? galti tumhari hai sharaab pi kar car tum chalana chahtey they main toh tumhe bacha rhai thi..
suraj : Please agar tumhara bachana aisa hota hai toh ainda kabhi matt bachana humein...

chakor gets angry and gets out of the car and starts to walk..suraj also gets out of the car

suraj : abb kaha'n jaa rahi ho ?
chakor : madad dhoondne...
suraj : alat raste par jaa rai ho..humein aagey jaana chahiye
chakor : mene atey waqt iss taraf dhaaba dekha tha
suraj : Hum keh rahye hain na aagey jaana chahiye.in jhaarioy'n se guzrein ge toh jaldi pohnchenge
chakor : tum jhaarioy'n main jaao yaa bhaarh main mujhe koi farq nahi prta..
suraj : thik hai humein kia..hum apne raste jayenge or tum apne raste jaana..

And both walks opposite ways...

The end

precap : Cahkor goes to factory and hits a villager with hunter..

I hope you like this chapter..I'll try to post another chapter as soon as possible.it short but please bear it with me..Do comment and tell me if you find anything wrong or anything boring ...I'll try to improve it :)
Love-jasmene
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Posted: 8 years ago
Jasssā¤ļø loved the episode. ..thank u so much. ..loved sukor nok jokhs very much...and even I love to read looong chapters. ...so do write long chapters .. ..60+ tho kya 150+ bhi gaye tho no problem for me...I'm ready...eagerly waiting for the next chapter. ..
Love
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Posted: 8 years ago
Interesting updatešŸ‘
Loved sukor's nok jhoks😊
I don't mind lengthy stories, no need of rushing the story
Waiting for next

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Posted: 8 years ago
Sukor and there nokjok kabhi khatam nahi honge...
Omg 60+šŸ˜›...100+ bhi ho to who cares...I love to read this story...you write I'm with you šŸ˜‰ I don't know what happened with chakor but wo suraj ko bhuli nahi hai...And precap scare me more than shocked me...why she doing this...?? What happened with her so she changed a lot...?? Superb update dear...keep it up...šŸ‘šŸ¼


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Posted: 8 years ago
OH goshhh...the story is moving forward so abruptly and I am still stuck in the chap 14...[due to lack of times...exams ahead]...šŸ˜”
First of all welcome back Jasmene,šŸ¤—its so good to have you back...after so long...and I am sooo glad that you updated this ff,[actually.among the so many ff on this forum,written by such talented people,this one is one of my favorites]...the fact is this one,being so much in sync with the real Udaan,this ff is very much relatable...😃


Loved the towel scene in chap 14...

Actually,I am not much talented as a writer,and dont think you need any advice...but still,will be giving you one,casually as a reader...😳go slow,and just be fully un-sanskaari when it comes to sukor romance,the real Udaan is very,very boring when it comes to Sukor romance😔,the makers just dont know how to use the powerhouse Chemistry couple up to their full potential...but here we are all dirty minds...and no restrictions...as wellšŸ˜‰

Take care dear,good going keep it up...šŸ‘šŸ¼

Love to you...😊

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