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Posted: 8 years ago
Aafato'n ke parindey "IshaqZaade" Chapter 26

Recap : Chakor goes to her maaika and waits for imli...Imli is out ...Suraj steals vivaan's passport...Chakor and suraj argue and she kicks him out of the room...

Morning : 8:00 am

suraj was knocking on a door but it was not his room's ...Someone opened the door and it was vivaan...before vivaan could ask anything suraj comes inside his room and
locks the door..

Vivaan : Yeh sab kia hai ? kia kar rahey ho tum yaha'n ? Hum jaante hain tum hume rokoge magaar...

suraj : Ho gaya ? tumhari bakwaas sun'ne ka mood nahi hai subha subha humara...Hum tumse kuch ziada nahi kahenge bass kuch dikhana chahte hain...

Suraj brings out a paper that was in his jacket's pocket...and hsows it to vivaan...seeing the paper carefully his eyes were wide open...he looked at suraj who smirked
at him and said..

suraj : Abb tum yeh toh hargiz nahi chahte hoge k hum yeh baaki sbako bhi dikhayen...Jaao imli ko le kar yaha'n or use apni patni hone k sare haq do ...
vivaan : Magar yeh hum...main kesee..
suraj : Bass..ek baa keh chuke hain dobara nahi dohrayenge...jaao or imli ko le kar aao...

vivaan looks at suraj angrily and crumbles the paper and then leaves...suraj watched him leaving and smirks...he goes to his room where chakor was walking from one
corner to another curiously ...suraj comes to her and says...

Suraj : Waisey humne dekha hai k tumne apna samaan unpack nahi kiya abhi tak ?
chakor: Kitni baar kahu'n ? jab tak i..
suraj : Haan haan jante hain...tujhe imli yaha'n chahiye thi na toh fir yaha'n kyo'n kharhi hai ? jaa kar apni behan ko welcome karney ki tayari kar...( he said with a
proud look as if he has won a war )
chakor: Matlab vivaan ne imli ko sweekaar kar liya hai ? ( she said smilingly and left from there )

suraj stood there for a minute then went out of his room and goes to tejaswani and talk to her about something...to which tejaswani nods and goes out...and suraj to
himself..

Suraj : Toh aaj se Marathon ace runner 501 humara badla or tumhari barbaadi shuru hoti hai...( now his face had an angry look )

chakor welcomes vivaan and imli...Imli seemed happy and vivaan juts looked forced but chakor did't paid much attention to him and she asked imli to go and rest in her
room ...Ranjhana was not happy at all and was angry with vivaan...chakor after doing imli's grah pravesh came to her room and saw something on bed which was covered
with a cloth...she was looking at it when suraj came in his room and chakor asked him what is this ? suraj did't know what it was so chakor herself removed the cloth
from it and saw a beautiful dress with jewellry ..she looked at suraj but before any of them could say anything tejaswani came there...

Tejaswani : Yeh tumhare liye hi hain chakor...abb tum iss haveli ki bari bahu ho toh uska lihaaz toh rakhna hi hai na...
chakor : Haveli ki bari bahu hone ka matlab yeh nahi k main chalti firti zevar ki dukaan lagu...
tejaswani : yeh apko roz roz nahi pehn'ne hain...aaj khaas mauqa hai issliye...aaj apki Muh dikhai hai or uskey baad ( she looks at suraj with a smirk and then back to
chakor ) uskey baad ap dono ki "SuhaagRaat "

chakor's eyes were wide open...she was okay with muh dikhai but "SuhaagRaat" are they both out of their minds" thought chakor while looking at suraj...

suraj : arrey aisey kia dekh rahi ho...( places his hand son her shoulders and pulls her ) Tumne hi kaha tha na k ek baar imli yaha'n aa jaye toh tum humari pyaar patni
bann kar raho gi ?

chakor : ( removes his hands ) Yaad'dasht kamzor hai shayad tumhari yaa fir sunai kam deta hai..maine kaha tha k main tumhare liye paisey kama kar laungi...yeh pati
patni bann kar rehne ka tumne socha bhi kaisa ?

tejaswani ; toh thik hai agar tumhe itni hi pareshani hai toh talaaq de do humare bete ko or nikal jao haveli se...magar haan sath main apni garbh vati ( pregnant)
behan ko bhi leti jana ta k pure samaaj ke samne tere maa baap muh dikhane k layaq na rahin...

Chakor knw what she meant ...there were tears in her eyes but she forbade them to flow..she looked at tejaswani with anger in her eyes and asked..

Chakor : Function kitne baje hai ?

Tejaswani smirked and said 'Shaam ko 6:00 pm baje" and left the room there were only suraj and chakor in the room...chakor was looking at the dress and then she looked
at time...it was just 11:00 am...suraj was just looking at her ..she also looked at suraj with a fire in her eyes and said

Chakor : Rasam main bohat time hai...main oractice karney jaa rahi hun...
suraj : haan haan zaroor jao..practice nahi karogi toh jeetogi kaisey ? ( smirked and left the room )

Evening 5:00 pm At haveli...

The haveli was decorated beautifully ...Suraj already got ready ..he was wearing maroon salwar with a black kurti..Chakor was in bathroom ...she came out wearing her
dress and wiping her wet hairs with towel and stands in front of mirror wearing her jewellry...after sometime she was ready ( With light makeup beautiful jewellry
and her hairs were long,straight open with just a puff on top) she was yet to cover her face with veil...she was looking at herself when suraj entered the room...he
was awe struck looking at her...she gets up to go but he holds her..she looks at him...

chakor : chorho mujhe ...( trying to free he shoulders from his hands )
suraj : Ssshhh...

Mann yeh sahib ji
Jane hai sab ji
Phir bhi banaye bahane
Naina nawabi ji
Dekhe hai sab ji
Phir bhi na samjhe ishare -

he turns her and flips her hairs to her right...she felt his touch again and her heart was pounding she looked at him in mirror and tried to go away from him but he
held her shoulders again and pulled her to him..

Mann yeh sahib ji
Haan karta bahane
Naina nawabi ji
Na samjhe ishare
Samjhe ishare
Dheere dheere
Naino ko dheere dheere
Jiya ko dheere dheere
Bhayo re saibo -

Both were looking at each other ( In mirror ) without breaking the eye contact suraj moved his hands to her dori...
and that's when she realized that she forgot to tie her dori...she looked down feeling strange...but suraj was still looking at her...

Surkhiyan hai hawaon mein
Do dilon ke milne ki

he held each side of dori in each
of his hand...chakor was feeling strange sensation whenever his finger touched her back..

O kaise hazuri ji
Yeh lab dikhaye
Chupi laga ke bhi
Gazab hai yeh dhaaye


she was very slowly moving away from him when she got feet or two away from
him he held the dori more tightly and pulled her back with her dori...her bare back was now mere inches away from his chest...she was feeling his warm breathes on he back
he slowly tied he dori..he was still looking at he while she has closed her eyes due to his touch...when she felt that he's done tying it she slowly opened her eyes
which met his eyes in mirror and both were lost in each other...


Naino ko dheere dheere
Jiya ko dheere dheere
Bhayo re saibo
Dheere dheere
Begana dheere dheere
Apna sa dheere dheere
Lage re saibo
Saibo, saibo...
Dheere,
Dheere Aa...

They were looking just perfect...

The End

Prcap : Chakor and suraj's SuhaagRaat...

May be this chapter is short but something's better than nothing right ? :) I hope you all like this as well...I love and appreciate you all who read my story and comments
too...I'm really thankful to everyone for such positive and encouraging comments...Thank you so much...

Love-jasmene
*Edited* Chakor's lehnga ...Dupatta draped around her waist in half saree style ( not like this ) and another golden colored dupatta used as her veil...

If you don't like the idea of me posting images of dresses and jewelry then please feel free to tell me and I will stop it...But If you do find this idea good then Duhh You know Bachpan se hi smart hun 😆

*Sorry* 🤣



Edited by Chashmish786 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh Jaz, I love your updates girl. They are so romantic. Totally different from the show and super fun to read.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Jasmine ❤️ beautifully written. ..when I woke up every morning first thing I do is checking whether jaz updated new chapter or not...my day starts with reading your update yaar..thank u so much and love you jaz...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Was waiting for this chapter! LOVE LOVE LOVE it! ❤️ Update soon please! Can't wait for what's next!
And the dress is B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L. ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice upt
loved it
the dress & jewellery were awesome
waiting for next part
cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow awesome, I really like this Suraj and Chakor, waiting for next chapter
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Jasmine ❤️ kaha ho tum??????😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Pheewww all 26 updates read in one take...
Pure 3 hours lage hai muje...
And it was Phinominal...I must say...
I'm enjoying every part of it...
Sukor is my favourite as always...
Ye vivaan muje kabhi chakor k saath achha nahi laga thank god sukor ki jodi bann gayi...
You are a marvellous writer...love your writing...
PLEASE give me link for next updates...Thank you...


"Wo ishq bhala kya,
Ishq hua jiss main sab kuch meetha ho..."
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hellooo jaz ...how are you...?missed you lot dear...and plzzz lz continue this FF ...I really can't get over it. ...hope you are doing good. ..eagerly waiting for your comeback with this fentastic FF
..love u yaar...😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
Aafato'n Ke parindey IshaqZaade ( Continuation )

"Chakor's voice
Kahi'n parha tha humne k "Yaadein" dill ko bechain lamho main sukoon deti hain magar yahi yaadei'n bechain kar k dill ko cheer deti hain...Main ek saal se inhi yaado'n ko apne jeeney ka sahara banaye huve hoon jo mujhe har roz hander hi
ander tarpati hain...Unn beetey lamho'n ki yaadein aaj bhi mere seene main dusra dill ban kar dharakti hain"...

Chakor is seen infront of mirror, dressed in a navy blue anarakli with white embroidery she is staring at herself in the mirror when a someone knocks on the door and chakor asks her to come in, "Maalkin oo basti waley aai gaye hain iss mahiney
ki fasal or phactary (Factory) ka hisaab deyi k liye" Said girja and waited for chakor's answer..."Aatey hain hum..aap sab ko izzat se bithaiye" said chakor in a low toneand girja left after hearing the answer...chakor again looked at herself in the mirror
( Chakor's voice) "Hum 1 saal se iss havli ki maalkin hain...magar jab bhi koi hume "Maalkin" keh kar bulata hai toh yeh lafz mere seene main khanjar sa chubhta hai...Kyu'nke iss rutbey k liye jo qurbani hume dena parhi woh ...woh uss chakor
ko sath le doobi jiski zindagi main maqsad tha...jiski aankho'n main azzadi ki aag thi, magar abb uss aag ko inn aansou'n ne daba daala hai...magar kambakht yeh aankho'n main jame parhey hai behtey bhi toh nahi..Hume aaj bhi yaad hai 1 saal
pehle isi kamre main, isi jagah,isi sheeshey k saamne" Chakor closed her eyes and..

1 Year ago...
Chakor's eyes were closed and suraj was tying her dress' dori...when he was done tying it she slowly opened her eyes which met suraj's in the mirror...he face was slighlty red by now before they could do or say anything someone knocked on the door
"Rasam shuru hone waali hai niche aa jao" said tejaswani and left...suraj and chakor comes down stairs and everyone starts parising them. Both were sat down facing each other for "Finding the ring" ceremony and both were challenging each other
with their eyes...the rings were thrown in and both of them were searching for it now when their hands touched chakor immediately pulled her hand back but when it happened again suraj held her hand tightly chakor looked at him with anger in
her eyes ( As usual in my story :p ) and tried to free her hand but could'nt say anthing because of the guests so she simply scarteched his hand with her nails and he immediately pulled it out of the milk and looked at her while everyone else laughed.
they started to search for rings again and both of them found a ring at the same time..next what they did was exchaning the rings and then both of them were sent to suraj's room for their suhaagraat..

I'll end it here now..Let me tell everyone the truth I just randomly came to the forum and found out that "Vinlora commented on my ff" I checked it and was so glad to see that shee still misses my ff so I finally decided to stop being an ass and
start writing it again...I'm writing this short very short chapter or continuation trailer for now because its literally 6:53 am in here and if my mom finds out that I'm still using laptop I'll be dead meat...Thanks to all those loveys out there who waited for
my ff and am reallt very sorry for being a jerk and making you wait so so so long but I promise I will try my best to not disappoint everyone from now on but let me tell you I'll have my 1st eyar's final exams in 14 day so the chapters will be short for
now but as I said in my last chapter(26) Something's better than nothing..There'sgoing to be alittle suspense in the story..And I hope you all like it...

Love Jasmene

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