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Jaz!! How are you sweetie? Hope you are doing well. Miss you so much girl.
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Interesting story👏
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What happened in one year,where is suraj😲
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Jazzz...what a pleasent surprise dear...I become so emotional. .crying...u can't imagine how much I'm happy that you came back and continueing writing👏 I really missed u and I read 26 chapters of this ff Thrice in all these months...So hapyyy and excited for your upcoming story. ...Thank u so much dear. ...and All the best for your exams...takecare. ...love u😳
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Aafato'n ke parindey "Ishaqzaade" Chapter 27

"Chakor's voice"
I, Chakor Suraj Rajvanshi the owner of this haveli and...And care taker of Kamal narayan Rajvanshi's silk factories, Yes I'm working with the person I always worked against. Its been 7 months since I've started to work together with kamal narayan"
Chakor was coming downstairs after girja informed her about villagers..When everyone saw her the stood up and greeted her ...chakor greeted them back and sat on the Big Red chair which is specially made for th owner of this haveli ...she touched
the chair and saw a flashback of "Suraj happily making her sit on this chair". she shut her eyes and took a deep breath and then asked her mannager to take care of whatever matter villagers came here for and immediately left without saying
or listening to anything else..she came to her room, yes the room that was suraj's a year ago is hers now ofcourse not only because she is owner of this entire haveli but simply also beacuse this is his husband's room, Or it Was...

1 year ago...

Both chakor and suraj were now in suraj's room which was decorated beautifully for their suhaagraat but to chakor it was the uglies looking room ever...suraj was sitting on sofa and looking at chakor when chakor was done examining
the room she looked at suraj who was now smirking at her..Her blood boiled at how he was looking at her but she felt like she was completely numb to even move a finger...suraj got up from sofa and took the glass of haldi milk that was kept
on the table, he was not standing infront of chakor who was still pretty numb..

Suraj : Wese toh yeh doodh ka glass patni le kar ati hai apne pati k liye magar kyu'n ke hum dono sabse alag pati patni hain issliye hum hi tumhare liye le aye yeh...yeh lo pi lo isey ( Forwards the glass toward her )

Chakor looked at the glass and suddenly saw the scartch mark on his hand and remembered how she did this to him while searching for the rings...she half smiled and looked back at suraj and said..

Chakor : Nahi suraj yeh glass tum hi pi lo..woh kia hai na haldi wala doodh aisey ( pointed at suraj's hand) zakhmo k liye bohat faidey mand hota hai...toh yeh tum hi pi lo and...Good night
she said and moved to bed ...and suraj was just standing there confused at what actually happened..maybe her behaviour was way too different from what he had imagined but never mind he also suraj rajvanshi he kept the glass on table and
sat on bed facing chakor...she understood that he's definately confused with her behaviour therefore she decided to act what's normal for her but inside her heart for a second she questioned herself that why is't she afraid ? why in her heart she believes
that this monster will not do anything to her when he's clearly trying to scare her ? whi is't she afraid of him ? she was thinking this to herself when suraj notcied that she's lost somewhere else and missunderstood her for being scared and moved closer to
her which brought her out of her thought chain nd she looked at suraj who was mere inches away from her...her heart started to beat fast but what she was't aware of was that it's not beacuse she's afraid then why ? chakor pulled herself together
and ..

Chakor : Kia hai ? aisey kia dkeh rahey ho ?
suraj : dekh rahey hain k bandhua biwi main itni bahuduri ( bravery) aati kaha'n se hai ?
chakor : Tum kabhi nahi samajh paogey suraj kyu'n k yeh samajhne k liye bahaddur hona zaroori hai...( and looked sarcastically at him )
suraj : ( Annoyed ) Tum..Tumhe darr nahi lag raha...itni rata ko..iss kamre main humare sath bilkul akele or woh bhi humari suhaagraat par...( Smirked )
chakor : Darna tumhe chahiye suraj..iss kamre main itni raat ko junglee billi k sath akele ho..niche sabke samne mene tumhare hath ka yeh haal kar diya toh zara socha yaha'n tumhare chehrey k naqsha hi badal dungi..
suraj looked at his hand and remembered how chakor scratched it and then looked at chakor's nails..he was slightly afraid that she might do what she said..actually he was fully aware that she will do what she said..

Suraj : Ziada sapne dekhne ki zaroorat nahi hain..humne tums shaadi tumhe grihast sukh dene k liye nahi ki..chalo hato yaha'n se yeh humari jagah hai...
chakor : Main kyo'n uthu'n ? tum bhool rahy ho suraj shaadi k baad pati ki har chiz par patni ka haq hota hai..utho tum yaha'n se or kahi'n or jaa kar sone ka bandosbast karo...

suraj looked at her and smirked and then wraped his arms around her and lie down on bed...

Chakor : ( Trying to remove his hands ) kia kar rahye ho paagal ho gaye ho ? ( angrily )
suraj : tum yaha'n se uthoi nahi or main kahi'n or sounga nahi toh yahi hall nikalta hai k dono yahi so jayen...( said smiling )

chakor looked at him and finally managed to remove his hands and got up from bed...

chakor : thik hai tum hi so jao apne iss ghatiya se bed par..

she angrily grabbed the pillow and sheet and went to sleep on the sofa...suraj looked at her smirking while she looked at him angrily and then both of them faced away from each other..

"Suraj's voice
Pata nahi kia huva aaj ? jaisa humne socha tha waisa kyu'n nahi hua ? humne socha tha iss junglee billi se badla lene ka aaj se acha mauqa shayad dobara nahi ayega magar phir hum iski bachkana ( childish) dhamkiyo'n se kyu'n rukk gaye ?

Kehne ko Jashn-e-bahara hai
Ishq yeh dekhke hairaan hai

Phool se khusboo khafa khafa hai gulshan mein
Chupa hai koi ranj fiza ki chilman mein
Sare sehmein nazare hain
Soye soye vaqt ke dhare hain
Aur dil mein koi khoye si baatein hain

Suraj narayan rajvanshi kia ho gaya hai tumhe" ??

Kehne ko Jashn-e-bahara hai
Ishq yeh dekhke hairaan hai

Phool se khusboo khafa khafa hai gulshan mein
Chupa hai koi ranj fiza ki chilman mein

Chakor's thoughts

Thik hi toh kaha suraj ne..iss waqt iss kamre main akele ek aisey insaan k sath jo mujhse sirf nafrat karta hai hone k bawajood mujhe darr kyu'n nahi lag raha ? yeh kese Yaqeen ka ehsaas hai ? Marathon ace runner 501 shayad har kisi se
humdardi karte kartey dushmano k liye bhi narm dill hone lagi ho kia ??

Both turned their faces and their eyes met...

Kaise kahen kya hai sitam
Sochte hai ab yeh hum
Koi kaise kahen woh hai ya nahi humare

Karte to hai saath safar
Faasle hain phir bhi magar
Jaise milte nahi kisi dariya ke do kinare

Pass hain phir bhi paas nahi
Humko yeh gum raas nahi
Seeshe ki ek diware hai jaise darmiya

Sare sehmein nazare hain
Soye soye vaqt ke dhare hain
Aur dil mein koi khoye si baatein hain

both immediately truned away their faces again shut their eyes and escaped to dreamlands...

The end

Here's another chapter..I hope you all like this..Maybe som of you find this story a bit cliche if you really do then do let me know and not only that if you find andthing disappointing let me know please so I can improve it...I really hope its not bad
and worth the time you spend on reading this...Thank you evryone for your support..
I read all your comments yesterday and am really glad..I'm sorry for not replying But i will soon...

Love-Jasmene
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow, this is awesome. 2 Chapters.
Jaz, girl you rock. How are you?
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update...interesting and unexpected twist...but at present suraj chakor ke saath nahi hai ye sunkar thoda darr lag raha hai 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
Tumne update to kia...short to short hi sahi...But you updated...what a twist...Chakor is now working with KN...😲
Where us suraj... chakor and suraj are separated or what...???what happened between them...?? Why chakor is not happy...?? Well mere sare questions k ans tumhare paas hai...Please update soon...Please...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Namita-

Wow, this is awesome. 2 Chapters.

Jaz, girl you rock. How are you?

Namiii di 🤗
I'm so happy and glad to see that you're still supporting me nd this stupid story...Thank you so much 😳
I'm good, how about you ? 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vinlora

Lovely update...interesting and unexpected twist...but at present suraj chakor ke saath nahi hai ye sunkar thoda darr lag raha hai 😭


Vinnyyy 🤗
Thank you for being so supportive yaar..I/m really sorry for being a jerk and making you wait so long...There's a twist in the story but don't worry because I myself am not a fan of sad endings so darney ki baat ni 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse

Tumne update to kia...short to short hi sahi...But you updated...what a twist...Chakor is now working with KN...😲

Where us suraj... chakor and suraj are separated or what...???what happened between them...?? Why chakor is not happy...?? Well mere sare questions k ans tumhare paas hai...Please update soon...Please...

Hey Khushi..( If that's your real name..and I'm sorry I have a really bad memory so I don't remember if we're introduced or not but whateva )

Yup the twist was decided by me 3 seconds before writing the story..:p to be hoenst I don't even know myself whats going to happen in next chapter coz I write and decide story at the same time..😆

Your all answers will be answered but you have to wait ...By the way were you a regular reader of this story ? if yes then sorry for making you wait so long..😳

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