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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

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Aruuu! That was so amazing! Loved it!

Chakor was quite bold and witty here, loved her.

And that prick Rakesh, good thing she kicked him out!

I felt bad for her, her dreams were shattered but it's fine as Rakesh turned out to be a a**hole.😆

And SuKor are takkar ke, even in an alternative universe!

Suraj saved her, and he knew it was Chakor! He almost called her Chakor, but saved himself on time😆

The dialogue regarding gun and raincoat had me cracking up😆

And Chakor invited him in? Wow! And Baahon main chale aao was playing 🤣Really set the mood hmmm...

Chakor initiated the kiss and took him to the bed, just can't believe! But I guess she was prepared, with the birth-control pill and all🤣

You didn't tell how was the hanky-panky? Superb? Amazing? Explosive? Did they see stars?☺️

And next morning, bomb phoot gaya Chakor ke sar pe, Aditya toh Suraj nikla!

Ab ho gayi Chakor Suraj ki aur Suraj Chakor ka😳

Thank you Saanu 😃

And OMG this comment has me cracking up 🤣

Glad you liked the Chakor in this fic 😃 Yes, Rakesh is a total prick. Would've substituted him with Vivaan, but he's our Amul baby, so he would've been way too OOC.

Suraj is super-smart. He recognized her as soon as he saw her. 😎

Yes, she was prepared, unlike her dumb sister, so there won't be any bacchua drama after this 😈

Well, she woke up with a huge grin, so you can imagine how good the hanky-panky was 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Aradh_27

Thank you Saanu 😃

And OMG this comment has me cracking up 🤣

Glad you liked the Chakor in this fic 😃 Yes, Rakesh is a total prick. Would've substituted him with Vivaan, but he's our Amul baby, so he would've been way too OOC.

Suraj is super-smart. He recognized her as soon as he saw her. 😎

Yes, she was prepared, unlike her dumb sister, so there won't be any bacchua drama after this 😈

Well, she woke up with a huge grin, so you can imagine how good the hanky-panky was 😆


Bachua🤣

I forgot to say something.

Plz continue this! Wanna know what's going on in Suraj babu's mind😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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aaru loved this os!!!👏
awesome !!!! wow!! 😳

loved the fact that suraj knew who she was!!😆 and good u did not give us the sanskari mahaan chakor😆

awww!!! loved the ending!!!

aaru this cant be an OS pls we need another update !!!


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Radhika, thank you so much!
Sanya (and Radhika) I'll try to continue, but the Sunflowers sequel will probably come out first. And a chapter of Cat Among the Pigeons that's been on my laptop for the past month 😆


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lol..Bahon mein chale aao..I snorted so loud that my sis gave me this look..has-my-sister-gone-mad?😆
I am very bad at giving compliments..so yeah this is really good. I usually don't read stuff at IF..bad writing, but I am glad that I opened this one up.
Bookmarked others too..will read them for sure.👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Get-Lost

Lol..Bahon mein chale aao..I snorted so loud that my sis gave me this look..has-my-sister-gone-mad?😆

I am very bad at giving compliments..so yeah this is really good. I usually don't read stuff at IF..bad writing, but I am glad that I opened this one up.
Bookmarked others too..will read them for sure.👍🏼


OMG a comment from you, Siddy????!!! I'm in shock 😆

I consider a nod of approval from people who don't usually read fics, a HUGE compliment, so thank you so much 😃

Also, this is straight off our bucket list, SuKor as drinking buddies. So I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aradh_27


OMG a comment from you, Siddy????!!! I'm in shock 😆

I consider a nod of approval from people who don't usually read fics, a HUGE compliment, so thank you so much 😃

Also, this is straight off our bucket list, SuKor as drinking buddies. So I'm glad you enjoyed it!


If you plan to continue this, make sure that Suraj's smirks at the half-naked sight of Chakor and at his accomplishment. 😆
Btw..why did you rate this M?😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I just now reed it.but first awesome top ur title Man after Midnight 👏Brilliant and mindblowing it.Aru 👍🏼
Sukor is very smart😃
Edited by sailuja - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Get-Lost


If you plan to continue this, make sure that Suraj's smirks at the half-naked sight of Chakor and at his accomplishment. 😆
Btw..why did you rate this M?😕


I didn't intend to make Suraj that much of an asshole, but let's see.

Shouldn't it be M-rated? I looked up fanfic ratings and M is for fics with implied sex, while MA is for explicit.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sailuja

I just now reed it.but first awesome top ur title Man after Midnight 👏Brilliant and mindblowing it.Aru 👍🏼

Sukor is very smart😃


Thank you, Sailuja 😊

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