Let Her Go - Sukor TS *COMPLEATED*

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys I'm back to annoy you guys a big thank you for all those that commented on my previous post and made this TS possible 😊.
*Teaser*
"I'm leaving suraj, I'm leaving forever" Chakor sobbed as she left the mansion
"I'm leaving forever" her words echoed in his mind making his heart sink
BUT HE HAD TO BE STRONG
HE HAD TO PROTECT HER
FOR THAT HE HAD TO LET HER GO.

INDEX
TEASER 01- PAGE 01
CHAPTER 01-PAGE 01
TEASER 02-PAGE 02
CHAPTER 02-PAGE 02
TEASER 03-PAGE 03
CHAPTER 03(A)- PAGE 04
CHAPTER 03(B)-PAGE 04
That's it guys for the teaser hope you guys like it. Do comment if you'll would like me to continue.
With lots and lots of love😛
-Maryam
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.Karna thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow , teaser was awesome , gives a positive vibes ...excited , plz do continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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emotional but interesting teaser. waiting for update.
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Nice teaser, sounds interesting! Update soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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waiting for the update!!! loved the teaser
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi welcome to the forum Waitting for teaser👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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HEY GUYS. THANK YOU FOR ALL YOUR LOVELY COMMENTS HERE IS THE FIRST PART OF THE TS.

PART 01
*Suraj P.O.V*
The alcohol burned my throat as i gulped own a shot. I know I've drunk way too much but I needed to drink.To escape.
"Suraj that's is enough for today" I heard Chakor sadly whisper
"And who are you to decide that. Leave me alone. How many bloody times do i have to repeat myself? Just get out of my life!"I growled
Fresh tears started to spring from her eyes. I felt an urge to run to her and kiss away her tears but i couldn't. I kept staring at her tear- stained face hoping she will leave me. I don't have the power to stay away from her any longer but I had to control myself. I have to protect her. I've been evil all my life it doesn't matter even if I'm shot dead but I'd never let that happen to my Chakor.
I HAVE TO PROTECT HER.
FOR WHAT DOES SHE HAVE TO DIE?
JUST FOR THE SIN OF MARRING ME!
"You know Suraj I've heard that you drink when you're disturbed and stressed,You know that you can always share anything with me right? Chakor asked innocently. Her face looked so angelic, her moonlit face increased my desire to make her mine, to hug her, to kiss her, to tell her what she means to me. That to me she is my world.
"Suraj.." She tapped me
"Leave.Me.Alone" I said dangerously low.
"I'm leaving suraj, I'm leaving forever" Chakor sobbed as she left the mansion
"I'm leaving forever" her words echoed in his mind making his heart sink .

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*CHAKOR P.O.V*

"What is wrong with Suraj, I can feel that he lloves me as much as I do, Why doesn't he understand that i cannot live without him, We've never confessed but our silence did speak in volumes" Chakor thought to herself as she was aimlessly walking in the road

*FLASHBACK*
"Chakor" Suraj yelled leaving Chakor in a fit of laughter looking at his flour filled face.
"Did you add flour into my hair drier" he questioned arching an eyebrow walking towards chakor until she was sandwiched between Suraj and the wall
"Yes and what ar you going to do about it Mr .Kadoos babu" she smirked lookingat him with her hands on her hips almost challenging him.
He caressed her face sending a current like feeling through her spine. The proximity affected the two of them equally.
"This" Suraj said throwing a handful of flour on her face .
"Surajjj... I'm going to kill you" She screamt leaving Suraj running around the house and Chakor behind him in a cat and mouse chase
*END OF FLASHBACK*
Chakor's chuckle disturbed the silence of the lonely road as she walked to wherever destiny takes her t.

*SURAJ P.O.V.*
I clutched onto Chakors photograph tightly as I felt a wave of loneliness rush through my body as I realized that I'll never see her again. I'll miss annoying her ,fighting with her and most importantly being with her.
My body got weaker as a result of the over dose of the alcoholic drink i was influenced by, before I knew my eyes got heavier drowning me into a world of dark nightmares.

THAT'S ALL FOLKS. DO COMMENT ON WHAT YOU GUYS THINK.SORRY FOR ANY MISTAKES.
CRITICISM WELCOMED.
LOTS OF LOVE-MARYAM

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very very interesting ! Waiting to see how they fell in love and what happened to separate them. Update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I m very much pumped to read the next update .
Exciting to know , whats gonna happen.
Plz update asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow! Maryam awesome first part! 👏
Poor sukor😭
Loved the flour part😆

Waiting for the next update







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