Let Her Go - Sukor TS *COMPLEATED* - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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wonderful lovely update. their povs their flashbacks was so sweet. and then teaser was so exiciting. waiting for next update.
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PART 03
*CHAKOR P.O.V*
My mind flooded with a million questions as I looked at Suraj's sleeping form. "Who did this? Why do they do this?" I wanted answers for my questions but was afraid to ask I was afraid that I'd lose him again,that I'd have to live an empty life without him. His stupid smile always filled my null heart that's how much he meant to me so in wasn't ready to take a risk questioning him.Scenes of him leaving me flashed through my mind the horrifying thoughts made me involuntarily tear and before I knew I was a total mess.

*SURAJ P.O.V*
My T-shirt felt wet I tried to adjust my eyes just to find Chakor cry laying her head on my chest.My heart shattered just like that. She looked so broken and vulnerable.
"Baby! Look at me, why are you crying" I asked carassing her hair.
"Promise me no matter what you will never leave me alone" she did in between sobs.
"I promise" I said kissing her knuckles hugging her.
She relaxed and finally regained back to her ownself. I felt the need to tell her how I got into this mess. I finally took in a deep breath and decided to spill it to her.
"Chakor, I need to tell you something" I fumbled.
"About what" she asked still resting her head on my chest playing with the end of my sleeve.
"About the shoot out, you deserve to know what happened" I took in a huge breath.
"It started 2 years ago papa and I were involved in a diamond smuggling business with the Mehera's at first everything went well we earned quite well too but papa as usual got more hungry for money and decided to rule the business all by himself so he decided to kill him. Papa hired a few men to place a bomb in Mehera's car. The bomb did blast but what we didn't know is that he survived " I continued
"Mehera came back, he threatened papa but papa being the coward transfered the entire blame onto me I went along with the charade just to protect my father as I always did. I had no attachments so I didn't bother being the guy under threat then you came i hated you at first but then I fell for you I didn't know how or when it just happened. I tried to ignore it but found it harder by the day that's when I decided to make you leave so you will be protected and you know the rest" I sighed
"Don't worry we'll find a way to make it all fine" Chakor smiled positively wiping away my tears.
"We will" I replied pecking her lips.
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A week passed and Suraj had completely recovered.
*SUKOR ROOM*
"Suraj, can we go out today please" Chakor pleaded using her best cute expression.
"Anything for you love" Suraj said kissing the tip of her nose.
Sukor were in the restaurant in a conversation of their own when Suraj felt someone sit opposite them.
"You.." Suraj accusingly said pulling Chakor close to himself "what do you want" he futhur questioned.
"I've come to apologize" Mehera said.
"Apologize... For what" Suraj asked confused.
"For trying to take revenge from you for something that you didn't do. Your wife came to meet me a few days back she explained me the whole incident and hunted down the men that placed the bomb and made them confess that you weren't apart of the conspiracy. Quite a brave wife you've gotten yourself" He said.
Suraj looked at Chakor in disbelief he was flabbergasted beyond levels.
"How did you manage to do all this" Suraj questioned
She just cockily replied " I'm Chakor Suraj Rajvanshi what else do you expect I make the impossible possible " she smiled confidently leaving Suraj laugh at her comment.

I'll update the 2nd part of this chapter shortly 👍🏼. Stay tuned and do write your comments.
Edited by Immaturebookie - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
awww! loved this update!!
chakor and suraj so much inlove with eachother😳

desperate to see these scenes on the show

love ur writing style👏

waiting for more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 03 (B)
*2 YEARS LATER*
*CHAKOR P.O V*
It's been a week since Suraj had gone out of town for a business deal.He was supposed to return today 5 minutes ago to be precise.I was standing by the window waiting for him to come. I felt annoyed with the fact that he was 5 whole minutes late. My mind drifted to the weird antics he pulled out whenever I was angry or annoyed.

*FLASHBACK*
"Don't you dare talk to me Mr.Suraj Rajvanshi, I hate you" I screamt walking away from the room into the kitchen to make dinner.
"I'm sorry princess, you see the meeting went longer than expected and I lost track of time" Suraj tried to explain.
"I don't care, just leave me alone and don't touch me" I swatted his hand away.
I tried to open the jar in the counter but found it locked tighter than usual. I knew the culprit was none other than Suraj.
"Why the hell did you tighten the jar so much" I asked annoyed.
"So that I'd have an excuse to talk to you" He goofily grinned winking.
"Very funny" I huffed walking away from him but a stupid smile played on my lips. He knew he was forgiven.
*END OF FLASHBACK*

*SURAJ P.O.V*
I saw Chakor standing next to the window probably waiting till I came. I was 10 minutes late.
"She's gonna kill you today" a voice inside me said.
I snaked my arms around her waist and I felt her stiffen.
"Missed me" I asked kissing her hair. She relaxed after hearing my voice and the next second I felt all my bones crush as she pulled me into a hug.
"I missed you so much, you've got no idea how much I missed you" She said hugging me tighter if possible.
"I can clearly see that" I chuckled. Her hug obviously did prove it all.
"You said that you've got a surprise for me" I asked arching an eyebrow.
"Yeah about that" Chakors eyes gleamed.
"We are expecting someone" she continued.
"OMG! don't tell me that your stupid cousin is coming over he is too clingy I don't like it or him. He's too annoying " I mumbled frustrated.
"Buddhu we are expecting a baby, you are going to be a father" Chakor broke the news.
My eyes widened and involuntarily got moist. I felt a rush of warmth and joy everything looked perfect all at once. I was too overwhelmed and kissed her again and again my happiness knew no bounds.
"I love you so much, thank you for the best surprise baby" I said kissing her tummy.
"I actually we love you too Jaan" Chakor said laughing.
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And with that my TS officially ends. A big thank you all that read,commented,liked and viewed my story. Thank you guys so much.
Do comment.
Lots of love-Maryam

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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Loved it loved it lovvved it...thank u so much for the wonderful TS...plz do write more sukor OS TS and FF...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Couldn't have had a better ending! Loved it!
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#27
Wow.. Awesome story.. 👏 completely different from the show..😃

Pure love of Sukor alone..😳😊

Sukor gonna be parents.. yay...🥳

Loved it.. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
wonderful love it love it love it so much. that was so adorable. perfect ending.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Wow , nice ending , sukor's child , great .
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Awww! That was a dream ending!😳
Loved this TS👏

Please do write more😳

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