Let Her Go - Sukor TS *COMPLEATED* - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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HEY GUYS!! THANK YOU FOR THE AMAZING RESPONSE.
*TEASER 02* 😉
"Chakor move away" Suraj screamt pushing her with force resulting her to fall on the ground.
"Arggg..." Suraj's pain filled voice broke out as the bullet pierced through his chest leaving a shocked Chakor behind.
HE PROTECTED HER.
NOW IT IS HER CHANCE TO PROTECT HIM.
THIS TIME NO MATTER WHAT,
SHE WILL" NOT LET HIM GO".
HOPE THE TEASER WASN'T BORING.
LOTS OF LOVE-MARYAM❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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AMAZING TEASER 2,NOW PLEASE UPDATE YOUR STORY,WANT TO KNOW WHO IS THE VILLIAN OVER HERE???
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Posted: 9 years ago
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1st part was so sad emotional. poor sukor. both love each other to death still they are going apart from each other so sad. teaser for 2nd part was scary. waiting for next update. please upadte soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hola guys,this is the part 2 of my ts its slighly long hope you guys like it 😆
PART 2
*3RD PERSON P.O.V*
The lonley road was washed in darkness.A light illuminated inntge horizon. A set of people gathered close by the light plotting in whispers on how to destroy their sworn enemy Suraj Rajvanshi.
"By tomorrow Suraj Rajvanshi will be a dead body" a man of 50 years said puffing a cigarette which was followed by loud laughter.
"Tomorrow 9A .M. You know what to do" the 50 year old man said placing the gun in the hands of a dirty,rugged man.
"Yes boss" he replied smirking and the two of them dispersed.
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*CHAKOR P.O V*
"Suraj... Just a little more time" I sleepily mumbeled
"Chakoriya wake up I'm your maai not Suraj babu" Maai said laughing
"Huh" I jerked asking up. The memories of last night played in front of me like a movie.
"Suraj " was the only word that left my lips

*5 minutes later*
"Maai I'll be back soon" I said kissing her cheeks running away leaving behind my screaming mother scolding me for not having breakfast. I finally reached my destination The Rajvanshi Haveli (Idk what its called). I saw suraj walk out of the house. He looked like a zombie red puffy eyes, uncomed hair, everything looked out of place.
"Suraj" I waved at him while running towards him.
"Chakor" he replied almost breathless engulfing me in a huge bone crushing warm hug but pulled away in a few seconds looking as angry as ever.
What the hell is wrong with this guy??
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*SURAJ P.O.V*
A voice snapped me back to reality.
"Is that really Chakor" a voice inside my head questioned me. I've been having hallucinary images of Chakor ever since she left. She came closer to me, my walls broke down, I couldn't take it anymore imaginary or not I hugged her. Her hot breath fanned over my shoulder.
"She is real... No...no...no how the hell can I be so bloody stupid" I cursed myself pushing her away from me trying to maintain an angry face.
"What are you doing here" I snapped
"Should one have a reason to come home" she questioned.
I sighed this girl makes it so hard for me to ignore my feelings. She knew very well how to push my buttons and make me insane.My eyes widened as I saw a man point a gun at Chakor.

*CHAKOR P.O.V*
"Chakor, get away!" Suraj screamed pushing me with force.
"Arggg.." His pain filled voice broke out after somebody shot a bullet at him. The bullet pierced through his chest.
"Suraj..." I screamt "somebody help" I cried out loudly.
A man carried Suraj and placed him inside the back of the car and I sat next to him leaving his head to rest on my lap.
"Please don't leave me" I chanted as I drove to the hospital.

*FLASHBACK*
"Ouch" I yelped as blood oozed through my finger.
"What happened" questioned a concerned Suraj sitting beside me talking my finger into his hand.
"Nothing just got pricked" I shrugged.
"Nothing my foot, how can you be so careless besides whybthe hell are you stitching you can ask a maid to do it for you nah, ah! Yes I just realized you don't have the brains to do so" he scolded
"But.." I tried to protest.
"No buts and ifs , stop being stubborn and just take rest" he commanded.
"Are you mad, I just woke up an hour ago and it is just a prick, which man with a sane mind will take rest for a so called wound which is barely visible" I pointed.
"I don't care, just do as I say" he commanded .
"Urggg" you're so annoying I said just to earn a smirk and a slightly audible "I know" in return
*END OF FLASHBACK*

*3 HOURS LATER*
All my energy felt drained off and I sat on the ground crying recalling how he protected me.
"The patient is out of danger now, but he is very weak" the doctor declared.
I ran into the room so find suraj look so weak and fragile surrounded by machines and wires.
"Suraj" I whispered . He just smiled back.
"I hate you, so much, what the hell do you think of yourself do you think to be some action hero? Taking a bullet and shit" I scolded annoyed.
He laughed taking my hands in his huge ones and played with my fingers.
He interviened our fingers together and kissed it placing on his chest.
I lovingly looked at him and planted a kiss on his forehead.
"I love you" we said in Union .
Ok guys that all for today do comment on what you guys think.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautifully written. ..sukor unconditional love for each other..loved it...dear...thank u so much. ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awww!!! that hospital scene was sooo beautiful!!!
loved this update!!

pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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it was totally awesome. Loved the update. Suraj is totally the hero.
update soon. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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*TEASER 03*
"Promise me, no matter what you will never leave me alone" Chakor said inbetween sobs.
"I promise" Suraj said kissing her knuckles and engulfing her in a huge hug.

"If you love something let it go,
If it comes back to you its yours forever,
If it doesn't it was never meant to be."

That's it guys.😎
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow great teaser !!!
waiting for update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
You have teased me successfully, now update!

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