MERE BROTHER KI DULHAN-SUKOR FF epilogue page 14 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
hayeee!!! chakor suraj rajvanshi !!!! loved that dialogue!!!
she refuses to divorce him !!! yipppeee!!! love her already!!

loved this update 👏
waiting for more😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: sanju15k

Its so nicely written , i must say your writing skills are one of a kind. You dont know how much i want to see this suraj in show , but today's episode made me think ' kya humne sukor shipping kuch jaldi ni kardi?'


well maine toh post leap hi kar di thi. unka first scene together. ab aage dekhte hai kya hota hai. thanks for reading my story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 10 A

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"I won't divorce you", said Chakor which made suraj look at her.
"what", asked Suraj as he couldn't believe his ears.
"I said I won't divorce you,it is because of you only", said Chakor.
"because of me ? how ", asked Suraj tilting his head to one side.
"how can I trust you that you will take care of yourself ? moreover, you have teased me a lot, so now it's payback time. I am chakor", said Chakor but Suraj ' s heart sank a little hearing Chakor but the next words of her made him the happiest man on earth.
"I am chakor, chakor suraj rajvanshi and I won't leave you so easily. There are lots and lots of torture for you." said Chakor smiling .
"ahaan! Chakor Suraj Rajvanshi ", asked Suraj cocking his eyebrows and now it was Chakor' s turn to get embarrassed.

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Chakor 's POV

Two months, two months have passed since I and Suraj got married and a lot has changed in this two months. Suraj is changing now, he now respects people and treats everyone nicely.
I still remembered that day when KN asked my help for changing Suraj. That day a new Suraj was revealed to me. We both stayed at the stable that night but the very next day, we moved out of RAJVANSHI MANSION.
Sheekhu arranged a small house for ourself which was in a chall. A single room with a kitchen. Suraj had a tough time there earlier ,as water timings was from 6:00 am to 8:00 am and too ,the tap was on the centre of the chall so we had to carry the buckets for taking water. At first 2 days, he had a tough time dealing with it but then he got an idea. He used to go shirtless to fill the buckets and the girls were so shameless that they use to gawk him a lot and that douche bag , he was enjoying the attention.
MR.JERK RAJVANSHI .
Till one week , I didn't came to knew about this act of him but when I heard few girls of chall talking about how much handsome he is, so I understood the whole scenario. I was so angry at him that I made up my mind to throw him out but within 5 minutes , I realised that the girls would be clinging to MY Suraj and woah ! I was correct. I opened the door and saw girls circling my husband. I was so angry that I threw all the utensils to get attention of him but of no use. unable to control my anger I went up to him , holder his collar and took him inside. He was about to say something but seeing my anger, he didn't.
from the next day, I stood near the tap since 5:00 am.
Suraj founded it funny but I couldn't allow those stupid brainless girls to adore MY husband.
Soon Suraj founded a job as a driver. His monthly income was 10000 as his driving skills were awesome but I didn't knew that for whom he was working.
After 1 and half months finally, I came to knew.
I was returning from my practice when Ragini spotted me. She offered me a ride . At first she denied , but later I agreed. I sat on passenger's side but Ragini's phone ranged and she went to attend her call.i was watching outside, there was a garden beside my camp. I felt that I saw something. I turned my head again and my eyes went wide. Suraj on drivers ' seat and Riya sat beside her and she was clinging to Suraj. Anger felt inside me. How could he moron?"kutti,kamini, ab kya gowd mein baithegi mere Suraj ke,"I said.
Ragini came back and I requested her to let me drive.
she said,"fine Chakor but drive carefully as it is Suraj bhaiya 's favourite car", by hearing that I smirked.
"don't worry , I will take care", I said and gave her a devilish smile. Ragini 's eyebrows scrunched but she didn't said anything .
Then I started the car and went towards opposite direction. I saw Riya was about to kiss Suraj but before that, I crashed her car with Suraj 's.
Suraj and Riya were startled and Ragini was shocked.
"Payback time,Mr. Rajvanshi " I said and smirked. then I went out of the car. Ragini too came down. Suraj realised that it was his car so he came out of the car hurriedly but instead of apologising me, he scolded me.
"what the hell chakor? do you have any sense what you have done? how can you act so reckless. Stupid dumb woman " his words broke my heart.
I ran away crying from there but heard Ragini scolding Suraj. I was deeply hurt by his words. He scolded me for RIYA? I was so distressed that I kept on running and running and I noticed that I have reached a park. I went inside that park and sat on the bench over there.
Soon tears spilt through my eyes and I kept on crying and crying. Don't know why but his words hurt me deeply. I could feel immense pain that I couldn't even decribe. It was a shock for me that Suraj scolded me. I kept on crying and crying.
I noticed it was evening but I didn't wanted to move from there. then I felt some one sa beside me, I said," great , now you are here?why you are here?Go back,just leave me alone Suraj ". "I am sorry but I am not Suraj", a voice came and I immediately recognised whose voice it was. LALIT.
I rose my head and found him.
'great , whenever I expected him to be here,he is not' I said in my mind.
I smiled looking at L alit and asked him," you here at this time?"
"well I could ask you the same", said L alit.
"actually Suraj ... He ... Suraj scolded. ..", I fumbled while saying and hence , Lalit cut me off by saying,"Suraj scolded you and you are deeply hurt by that. He is affecting you".
"what no ? I mean... yes. Don't know why , but his behaviour is affecting me a lot, his anger , the way he preferred Riya over Me. I just feel bad about that. But hey, who told you?", I said.
He gave me that look which means ' you know it' and at that instant I spoke " Ragini "
"then who could be?" he asked while smiling.
"well 501 ace runner , the way Suraj affects you, the way you care for him clearly shows you are in love", Lalit said leaning towards me.
"what. no. I love Vivaan and not Suraj. I mean Suraj is handsome , smart, he cares about me and I feel safe , secure and happy around him but that doesn't mean I love him. He is a complete jerk.", I said.
"whom are you fooling Chakor? yourself or me?" Lalit questioned me while tilting his head on one side .
"come on,I will drop you home. It's been pretty late. 9:30 pm", Lalit said and I woke up with a jerk.
"what, 9:30, Suraj must be hungry. omg! how can I act so careless", I said and Lalit chuckled.
I gave him 'what the hell was that look ' and he said," you were angry with him a minute ago and now you are caring. you know what, your love for him is pure, so pure that even after being angry on him , you can stay away from him. It 's like you are MEERA finding your KANHA madly", he said.
"it's not like that okay", I said .
"we'll see later ", Lalit said.
He dropped me home and I found Suraj waiting outside the chall but he was not alone. Papa, teju ma, Ranjana ma, Vivaan , Imli, Ragini, Adi and even Maai Baapu were present there.
As I came down from car, Suraj ran towards me and put me in a bone crushing hug.
"where were you? I was finding you for so long", said Suraj.
I was about to say something but I realised that he scolded me because of that Riya.
I pulled out the hug and glared coldly at him. Soon Maai Baapu came and asked me about my whereabouts. They have been talking with me lately. Then came papa(KN) who was also worried for me. Everyone asked about my health when we heard someone shouting. who could be? ofcourse my jerk husband!
"okay now chakor is back,so everyone leave as I have to talk with my wife", suraj said. papa (KN) protested but in vain. atlast everyone went away from there. I was also going to our house when pulled me towards him in such a way that my hands landed on his chest.
"where were you biwi? I was worried for you? and why that Lalit was with you?" he asked me caressing my hairs but his eyes showed anger.
"if you can roam with Riya why can't i", I said in a firm tone.
"no you can't. I work as a driver over there so I was with her", suraj said.
"well I don't want to listen anything but you can't control me", I said in a challenging tone.
"biwi,tum ye bhool rahi ho ke tumhara bhoot, vartman aur bhavishya hamare haatho mein hai aur hamare haatho mein hi rahega ".
15 days passed by that incident and I haven't even talked with him. I was so confused but now I am sure about my feeling that I love Suraj, I love SURAJ RAJVANSHI.

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okay so chapter 10A updated.
10B will be of Suraj's POV.
hope you all will like it.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
The update was awsome 👏. Its too good you need to update the next part soon I NEED A SURAJ P.O.V. I'm floating in a dreamworld now!⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
aweome upt
sukor can never stop fighting
but i like their nhokh-jokh
waiting for suraj to realise
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: srividhya68

aweome upt
sukor can never stop fighting
but i like their nhokh-jokh
waiting for suraj to realise
cont soon


thank you. and yes sukor's nok jhok makes them a awesome couple.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Immaturebookie

The update was awsome 👏. Its too good you need to update the next part soon I NEED A SURAJ P.O.V. I'm floating in a dreamworld now!⭐️



thank you will update soon, I am currently writing Suraj's POV only.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Awesome update...waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
WoW!!! loved it!!! waiting for the next part!!
awww!!! loved the jeolous chakor!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Loved it 😳,next part soon plzz

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