MERE BROTHER KI DULHAN-SUKOR FF epilogue page 14 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
Awesome! Jealous SuKor 😆
Update soon! Loved it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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cute adorable excelkent update. love passaive jealous sukor very much. both are passaive and jealous for each other. and finally chakor's realization of her love. now waiting for their confession. waiting for next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Omg , thats so awesome . You are quite good with nokh jhokhs and fun elemesnts . The dailouges are the best asset i could find . They are hillarious .
Before you thank me , i want to thank you for this masterpiece
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Posted: 9 years ago
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what happened to the update? waitinggg😆
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CHAPTER 10B

Suraj 's POV
CHAKOR.
This name lightens my dark world. MY CHAKOR,MY BANDHUA BIWI.
I was only a 13 year old child when I met her. She was just 7 but was very intelligent for the kids of her age. That day I felt something amazing and weird. That something is going to happen which will change my life forever. I tried to speak to papa and ma but they were busy with their political issues. Girja Mausi was busy with Ragini and Mamohar Uncle with Vivaan. I had none. so I took my remote control car and started playing with it. There she comes ,she stepped her foot on my car . that was okay but when she said ' Bhaiya' to me don't know why but I felt bad so I forbid her to call me that word.
at the age of 7, no doubt she made papa total crazy.
Chakor had a great bond with Aditya. He was her 'bijlee ka dabba ' but that didn't bothered me. what bothered me the most was Her and Vivaan 's friendship .
That always irked me. He was good at studies and no matter what, he was always forgiven but I was not.
Then she walked away from my life, and I went into darkness. The world of dark and terror. I stepped into papa ' s shoes just to get his affection but in vain.
After 12 years she came with a blast. papa was about to take oath but he couldn't.
I was impressed by her guts and her intelligence.
when she came back to azadganj or rather she was kidnapped and brought to azadganj.
when I saw her , I couldn't take my eyes off her. It wasn't that I have not seen beautiful girls than her but by seeing her ,I couldn't take my eyes off her.Her eyes contained a mixture of emotions. her big doe shaped eyes, her cute button nose and her red beautiful lips.Her hairs flowing in air. I wish I could hold with my hands. her yellow kurti was looking perfect on her. her smart mouth , ufff... she is a junglee billi.
I always loved to adore her , to tease her. When she came to Rajvanshi mansion during holi celebration, I was amazed seeing her and how could I miss the chance to dance with her?
Getting married to Tina was just a contract with me. But seeing CHAKOR AND VIVAAN together, my heart pains. Don't know why, I felt bad. on the day of pre marriage rituals, I promised Chakor that I will always protect her in the haveli coz I knew papa would do something to harm Chakor but alas! papa send those goons to kidnap me.imli came to save me along with Chakor and Vivaan. We had to fight for long but at te end Papa ' s one trusted goon attacked Imli and Chakor rushed to save her. Chakor was about to take the bullet for Imli but i came in between to save Chakor not Imli.Imli had earlier fooled me telling about her pregnancy but I knew she wasn't pregnant.
That night I clearly remembered what happened. Imli was my trusted slave so I went there to wish her. We both were drunk but I was in my senses. She tried coming closer to me but I refused her.
"why Suraj Babu, am I not beautiful like didi .what does didi have which I don't? " Imli said and then she passed out.
slowly I too felt dizzy and then I fainted.
Why did I marry Chakor? I don't know. whether I was angry on her that she made Tina ran away or I was upset that she was going to marry Vivaan. I don't know but one thing is sure that she brings the real Suraj in me.
I swapped the brides so that I could marry Chakor and boom! it did happened. I was still angry over Chakor so I put all the blame on her and Vivaan agreed her. Like seriously, how could he? Is love so weak?
When Ragini came back,she spotted me and Chakor together on floor but I myself don't know what happens to me when I see her. My heart beats 1000 rate per minute. When I came to my room to check her,I was awestruck to see her.she was looking eternally beautiful in her black Saree.
She was not wearing her sindoor but I did it because I don't wanted anyone to stare at her. At the party, Lalit was flirting with Chakor and she was talking with him. Why didn't she rejected him.
Maybe she is too innocent to understand.
When I pressurised her for icecream she agreed and I was on cloud nine. When some men misbehaved with her,I felt acid ran over me. But I messaged Sheekhu to get information about those people. When I came to knew that papa is alive,I was startled. I feared that my truth would come out but thankfully it didn't. But he ordered me to go out. When Imli's pregnancy truth came out and Vivaan still accused Chakor and she fainted. She wasn't responding to the medicines and I was damn scared. I felt that I would die. I cannot lose her and at that I moment I realised that I love her.I love her more than my life.My life is completely meaningless without her. I prayed to god that I will leave wealth,fame and all other world desires but I can't lose Chakor.
When she came into senses, I was the happiest person on earth.
I realised that without her I am nothing. I love her a lot.
I love Chakor .

Third Person' POV
sukor weren't talking with each other since last 15 days. KN realised that Suraj had suffered a lot so he asked him to come back on Rajvanshi mansion that too on a day before his birthday. On the other hand, Chakor and Lalit became best friends. Chakor told her feelings about Suraj to Lalit and he told her to propose suraj. Chakor first hesitated, but later she agreed that she will propose suraj on his birthday.
<<FAST FORWARD >>
<< THE NIGHT BEFORE SURAJ' S BIRTHDAY >>
Chakor was damn happy. She decided to convey her feelings to Suraj. On the other hand,Suraj 's world was crashing down.he thought that Chakor liked Lalit so he decided to move out of her life. Chakor was standing in terrace and was looking at the moon.
"Chandu Ji,tomorrow all my dreams will turn into reality.wish me luck ", said Chakor and smiled.
Unaware to her that Suraj was looking at her.
"Chakor,tomorrow all your dreams will turn into reality.i will leave you for good and you can spend your life with Lalit happily", suraj said and looked at Chakor.
A tear slipped his eye and he smiled and said,"I will miss you a lot Chakor,I will miss you."
The next day whole Rajvanshi mansion was decorated as a newly wedded bride. Chakor was too eager for the evening. She was too engrossed in arranging everything that she didn't even noticed that Suraj is not talking to her nicely.
<<Fast forward > >
<<at the party>>
The party begun but Suraj was no where. Chakor tried calling him but he didn't took her calls.Chakor was hell worried for Suraj. Soon Ragini came downstairs from Suraj 's room and showed Chakor suraj 's letter.
Suraj had freed Chakor,to achieve her dreams,to live her life to the fullest with Lalit.
Tears slipped through Chakor's eyes,she couldn't believe suraj could do this much for her.
She quickly called Sheekhu and investigated about Suraj.
Sheekhu told her that Suraj went to railway station. And his train is on 10:00 pm. Chakor looked at her wrist watch. It was 9:15pm. She quickly ran out of the house and took her bike. Yes,bike was her new obsession.
She rode her bike at 120kmph to reach the station. She reached the station in 15 minutes. Then she went inside the station. She was wandering like a mad person in search of Suraj. At last, she founded him sitting on a bench looking at his wrist watch . Chakor ran to him and tapped on his shoulder.
"Chakor",said Suraj and stood up.
Chakor looked at Suraj for a second and then slapped him.
"Ouch", said Suraj.
"How can you Suraj, how can you leave me like this?", chakor asked shouting at him.
"What did I do? And why are you shouting on me", asked Suraj.
"You knew it what I wanted to confess you today. But still you went away. Why can't you just admit it",said Chakor to which Suraj replied," what I should admit?"
"That you love me,moron", said Chakor shouting.
Suraj looked at her eyes and said,"I love you", and to which he earned a slap from Chakor.
"Ouch,now what was this for?"asked Suraj.
"For making me wait and for irritating me so much.I love you too moron but listen Suraj surf Chakor ka hai", said Chakor firmly.
"Aur Chakor sirf Suraj ki hai", said Suraj and embraced her.

THE END.
SO THE STORY ENDS. THIS IS A TEN SHOT AND I HOPE ALL MY READERS ENJOYED IT.
THANKS A LOT FOR SUPPORT.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: sanju15k

Woah!...that was a quickie...
Beautiful


thanks a lot.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
Too good.👏. Please do consider my pm about the epilogue😆
Edited by Immaturebookie - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Immaturebookie

Too good.👏. Please do consider my pm about the epilogue😆


well I will write an epilogue soon maybe in a day or two. Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aahh why did u end it?? It was awesome! Are u doing an epilogue? Plz PM me! And give SuKor babies in it if possible!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Aahh why did u end it?? It was awesome! Are u doing an epilogue? Plz PM me! And give SuKor babies in it if possible!!!

yes,i am doing an epilogue.
i ended this story because every good things comes to an end and soon new story will begin.

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