MERE BROTHER KI DULHAN-SUKOR FF epilogue page 14 - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing. ...emotional .loved it so much dear...thank u so much...confession was heart touching. ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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loved it
nice ending
chakor slapped suraj twice
keep writing more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wonderful excellent update. sweet ending with sukor confession. give us epilog please.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: vinlora

Amazing. ...emotional .loved it so much dear...thank u so much...confession was heart touching. ..

thanks. glad you liked it.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: srividhya68

loved it
nice ending
chakor slapped suraj twice
keep writing more

thank you,chakor was portrayed as a tomboy so she slapped suraj twice.
will write more.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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WOW!!!! loved it!!!! 😳
waiting for more such wonderful FFs from you
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: princess2791

wonderful excellent update. sweet ending with sukor confession. give us epilog please.

THANKS.I WILL UPDATE EPILOGUE
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Originally posted by: Radhika_r

WOW!!!! loved it!!!! 😳

waiting for more such wonderful FFs from you


THANKS A LOT.
i will soon update more ffs
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6 years later
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the whole Rajvanshi Mansion was a busy place today. Lots of people moving to and fro here and there carrying different things. Today it was Ragini's gowd bharai/baby showering. She was seven months pregnant and the whole Rajvanshi Mansion was overjoyed with it.
Ragini and Aditya got married 4 years after Sukor and Imvaan's marriage and two years after that Ragya (Ragini+Aditya) are having their baby.
Vivaan decided to shift to london along with imli when Suraj revealed about the bride swapping. Vivaan requested Chakor to come back to him and apologised her for his deeds but Chakor clearly refused him saying that she loves Suraj and he should too move on with Imli.

Chakor was in her room getting ready. She wore a navy blue saree with golden borders which was looking awesome on her. She was combing her hairs when suraj entered. He stopped in his tracks when he saw Chakor. He kept on looking at Chakor until she said, "staring is rude , Mr Rajvanshi".
"Can't help myself, you are totally irresistible and gorgeous", said Suraj while keeping his jacket on the bed post. Hearing that, chakor couldn't help but blush.
The bed was adjacent to the dressing table and Suraj moved towards Chakor. He kept his chin on her shoulder while holding her waist and said,"kya aache karam honge hamare, jo tum hame mili Chakor. Zindagi badal di tumne. Kya they hum aur kya ban gaye"
(What good deeds I have done Chakor that I got you in my life. You changed my life. What I was earlier and what I am now, completely changed)
"Bas bas, bahut taarif kar li mera, ab pare hato, bahut kaam hai mujhe"(okay enough, you have praised me a lot, now let me go, I have lots of work), said Chakor and tried to go but Suraj pulled him back so that she collided with his chest.
"Kya karti ho yaar MRS. RAJVANSHI,6 saal ho gaye hamari shaadi ko, phir bhi utni hi qaatilana aur sexy lagti ho", suraj said in Chakor's ears which made Chakor go weak on her knees.
Then he kissed her earlobe and then started giving butterfly kisses to Chakor. Suraj knew he have a strong effect on Chakor and so he smirked.
But soon their love making session broke as a girl ran shouting came to their room. Chakor was shocked and so she pushed Suraj and poor him, he landed on the bed.
"Aww baby, what happened? ", Chakor askes caressing the child while Suraj was moaning in pain.
"Mumma, you know what happened, India won the test match with West Indies as Virat scored a double century", said her daughter.
"Aww...Sanya, that's the best news. Yipee!", Chakor squealed beaming.
"Uggh. .what's so special in Virat that you are beaming with happiness? ", said a boy entering the room.
"Arjun, please, Virat is just awesome. " chakor said dreamingly while Sanya nodded.
"And I am not?" Suraj asked pouting and Sanya jumped to his lap.
"No daddy you are the best", sanya said kissing suraj's left cheek while arjun too joined sanya and kissed on Suraj's right cheek.
Chakor couldn't help but adoring the trio. Her both children loved her dad a lot. Well Sanya was more of Daddy's girl and too inherited the qualities of Suraj. She was a small female version of Suraj. Small female version beacuse elder female version of Suraj was Chakor, stubborn and smart.
Arjun was Chakor's boy and her mumma was his idol. He resembled Chakor more than suraj.
Both Sanya and Arjun were twins and were four years old but were very smart than their age. Why not? They were Sukor's kids.
Soon Suraj got ready and Ragini's baby shower function went well.
At night chakor was making sleep the two naughty kids but vain. Soon Suraj came and made them sleep . Chakor was admiring her husband when Suraj caught her. He crooked his eyebrows and said,"Mrs. Rajvanshi, aapke irrade kuch thik nahi lag rahe."
( your intentions are not good mrs. Rajvanshi)
Chakor said,"shut up your mouth otherwise I will break it", which made Suraj shut his mouth.
After assuring that their children slept, sukor went to their room. Chakor was cleaning the mess which suraj has done when he came and hugged chakor from back.
"Kyu Mrs Rajvanshi, jo kaam subah adhura reh gaya tha use poora kare?"
(Mrs. RAJVANSHI, the work which was left in complete today morning, let's complete it now)
Said suraj.
Chakor very well knew what he meant but she tried to act innocent and asked "what work?"
"Wahi, hum do hai, humare do hai kyu na humare teen kar liye jaaye", said Suraj smirking.
(Look we two, our two kids, why don't we make it three)
Chakor's mouth widened listening to what suraj said.
"Suraj have some shame , you are father of two kids", said chakor .
"Why to shame, you too are mother of that two kids. Let's make it something special. Now go to washroom, there's a surprise for you", said Suraj and pushed Chakor inside the washroom.
After 15 minutes Chakor came outside but she was still in her salwar kurti, suraj's eyes scrunched but what Chakor said made his face fell down.
"Suraj, mother nature blessed me".
Oh god! What poor suraj could do! He can't curse mother nature.
So sulking up he slept which made Chakor laugh.
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So officially this books ends now. I hope everyone likes this epilogue.
Thank you.

@Sanya Eterna Sukor's daughter is named on yours as you gave me idea for that. thanks buddy.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hawww!! Sukor babies😳. Your epilogue was so cute <3 now it made me also want to write about Sukor kids 😉

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