kalma ff:- LO SAFAR SHURU HO GYA (chapter 6 updated 15-08-2021) - Page 3

Waah praku Kya mast update tha🤗 Neha ritwik palak ki cute banters😆 unn teeno ne kallu ki help ki 👍🏼😭malhar ne appu ko aatya bulaya 👏maai ne bhi chillaya👍🏼 malhar bichara kitna dar Gaya tha kallu ke accident ki khabar sunkar 😭😭

Sab log kallu see Milne gayein malhar could not control himself after seeing kallu 😭

Overall emotional chapter ,let's see aage Kya hota hai 😳😳

Originally posted by: GAYATHRINAYAR

waise prakarti ek way out he

you can copy paste the matter and form a draft

and then use edit option and delete whateever u have written and us post pe sirf edited lik rakho bass

Gayu esa hi kiya tha maine pehle ye story draft pe hi likhi thi mujhe jb time milta hai main ise drafte pe save krke continue kr deti hu....aaj complete kr hi rhi thi ye chapter par galti se save ki jagah post option par clic kr diya maine....fir jb post ho gya usme edit ka option tha to maine sirf yhi tak rakha tha aage isliye nhi kiya kyu ki mujhe laga ki koi abhi hi na pdhle isliye thoda short ho gya....

Vaise main ap sb ke comments pr sirf react isliye kr rhi hu bcz i am a newbie and i am not allowed to post more than 11 posts a day....thats why....

The update is very good prakriti.

I always loved S1 singham and his pagli.

Malhar addressing aprana as aatya is which I always loved but never happen in the show, he went numb on knowing kalyani's accident.

I want to see more care from malhar and want him to express his feelings.

I'm just waiting for next part.

Originally posted by: PRAKRITI_12

Gayu esa hi kiya tha maine pehle ye story draft pe hi likhi thi mujhe jb time milta hai main ise drafte pe save krke continue kr deti hu....aaj complete kr hi rhi thi ye chapter par galti se save ki jagah post option par clic kr diya maine....fir jb post ho gya usme edit ka option tha to maine sirf yhi tak rakha tha aage isliye nhi kiya kyu ki mujhe laga ki koi abhi hi na pdhle isliye thoda short ho gya....

Mai ek aur raasta batati hun..

I always use Google docs to type my updates. Only after I complete mai forum topic me usko cut and paste karke post karti hun..

Once you cut and paste post karne se pehle you can edit the fonts or colours as you want.

Originally posted by: PRAKRITI_12

Vaise main ap sb ke comments pr sirf react isliye kr rhi hu bcz i am a newbie and i am not allowed to post more than 11 posts a day....thats why....

We understand that dear. 😊

Originally posted by: PRAKRITI_12

Vaise main ap sb ke comments pr sirf react isliye kr rhi hu bcz i am a newbie and i am not allowed to post more than 11 posts a day....thats why....

CHAPTER- 3

Malhar- ( almost cryingly ) kbhi nhi socha tha ki tumhe kbhi esa bhi dekhunga.....please kalyani vapas aa jao mere pass ....mujhe tumhari non-stop baatein sunni hai fir se tumhe daat ke chup krana hai tumhe sirf apne pass dekhna chahta hu kalyani.....bass kalyani mujhe meri pagli rane vapas chaiye or tumhe vo dena hoga samjhi tum....tumhe jaldi se thik hona hoga kalyani....please....

Aaosaheb- malhar!!!!

HEARING HIS NAME HE WAS INTERRUPTED

Malhar- ji aaosaheb kahiye.....

AS- tum fikr mt kro kalyani jaldi thik ho jayegi ...

Malhar- haa aaosaheb....uske pass dusra koi raasta hi nhi hai...abhi uthegi na to malharji ye malharji vo bas yhi kregi.....

AS and malhar smiled a bit

Malhar- aapa....maai kaha hai???

Rao saheb- pta nhi malhar....reception pr to saath hi thi..

At temple of hospital..

ANUPRIYA STANDING IN FRONT OF BAPPA'S IDOL

Anupriya- jb tak meri beti ko hosh nhi aata main ye diya apne haath m lekar khadi rahungi...

After 10 mins

Vivek- maai .....maai aap ye kya kr rhi hai....aapka haath jal jayega

Anupriya- jalne dijiye vivek bhau mujhe koi parwaah nhi hai.....jb tak kalyani ko hosh nhi aayega main ise lekar khadi rahungi....

Vivek- par maai meri....

Anupriya- vivek bhaau aap jaiye or agar kalyani ko hosh aa jata hai to mujhe turanta btaiyega....

VIVEK GOES TO RAO SAHEB AND AAO SAHEB

Vivek- aao saheb ....aaosaheb vo...vo ma...maai

RS- kya baat hai vivek ...kya hua....

Vivek- Maai apne haath pe jalta hua diya lekar khadi hain or keh rhi hain ki jb tak Kalyani ko hosh nhi aayega vo ese hi khadi rahengi.

AS- parmeshwara.....hum anupriya ke pass ja rhe hai....

At ahilya niwas

Sampada- aai tujhe kya jarurat thi kalyani ko ye sb kehne ki....tu bhi na

Aparna- sampu..main to bas use nicha dikhane ki koshish kr rhi thi mujhe nhi pta tha vo ese chali jayegi or uska accident ho jayega

Sampada- chup kr aai...agar usne tum pr mental harrassment ka case kr diya to kya krogi tum or malhar to vapas aakar tumhe ghar se bahar nikal dega.....

Atharv- or taai aap kya meri sampu ko baar baar uss malhar ke naam se jodti rehti hai...ye sampu ab meri hai

WITH THIS HE PULLED SAMPADA CLOSER AND WAS ABOUT TO KISS HER

Pallavi- yaa bayaa....godaveri nal ko lekar andar jaa....or tu atharv kuch to laaj sharam kr....kalyani sahi kehti hai tum dono bohot bade besharam ho...huunnh...

Sampada- pallavi taai....soch samjh ke muh kholiye apna samjhi aap

Pallavi- hunnnhh....aayi badi..

Samtharva was standing fuming there and aparna was worried what malhar would do to her if he came back home....

{Malhar- aatya.....aatya....

Aparna- malhar aa gye tum...kalyani kaha hai acha ye choddo...ye btao kya loge black coffee ya chai...main abhi leke aati hu...

Malhar- apni katha band kijiye or apna saaman baandhiye kyu ki iss ghar m ab aapke liye koi jagah nhi hai....

Aparna- malhar mujhse galti ho gyi mujhe maaf kr do.....mujhe nhi jana mujhe yhi rehna hai...

Malhar- lagta hai mujhe hi aapka saaman leke aana hoga.....

LISTENING THIS APARNA HOLDS MALHAR'S FEETS STOPPING HIM TO TAKE ANY FURTHER STEP

Aparna-malhar.....malhar....esa mt kro....maaf kr do mujhe....daya kro....acha....acha reham hi kr do.....}

Aparna- naahhiiiiii!!!!!

Sampada- aai.....aaai kya hua.

APARNA CAME OUT OF HER DREAMS

Aparna- nhi nhi kuch nhi.....

Aparna POV- deva sirf sapna tha kahi sach ho gya to main kaha jaungi.....

Pallavi- aparna tai aapki ye haalat dekhar ek gaana yaad aa rha hai sunati hu haa....

Aapka kya hoga janaab ....sorry sorry aapka kya hoga aparna taai....aapka kya hoga

WITH THIS SAMTHARVA AND PALLAVI STARTED LAUGHING.....

AT HOSPITAL

Doctor- aap patient ke ghar wale hai right????

Malhar- yes doctor...main uska husband hu kya baat hai....

Doctor- kaafi khoon beh gya hai we need blood for her....and the problem is that ki jo blood unkeblood group komatch krt hai vo blood bank m available nhi hai....

Malhar- what?????

ALL THE FAMILY MEMBERS WERE SHOCKED ENOUGH.....

What will malhar do now????

Will doctors be able to save kalyani????

Please tell in the comments and give your reviews

Praku it was really good chapter 😊😊Malhar is worried for kalyani he don't know what will he do without her 😭aausaheb and malhar cute scene they are really like a daadi and pota but that cvs really butchered their relationship 😡😡

Haaye aatya tumhare haseen sapne🤣🤣 atharv aur sampu to shuru ke besharam hai😆 pallu ka Gaana🤣 maai ki phikar kallu ke liye kahan se milega hamari kallu jaldi theek ho jayein basss😭😭

Overall all mixture of emotions chapter👍🏼👍🏼

Omg donor kaha se aayenga abhi

I hope athu sampu ya appu mei se koi nahi he got I don't want that blood mixed 🤣

Yaar kallu ko jaldi nikal dena ye behoshi se

Can't wait to read more