kalma ff:- LO SAFAR SHURU HO GYA (chapter 6 updated 15-08-2021) - Page 2

Aww praku kya story hai majja aagaya seriously 🤗❤️matlab suspense drama sab ek saath vo time sachmain acha tha kalyani Malharji ki tareef kar rahi thi pillu se dono ki cute talks pushka bai ne kya idea diya kallu khush ho gayi burger dekhke😃😃 Malharji jo leke aaeyein offo miya biwi ki alag hi baat hai 😳😳mallu ko bura laga usne aajtak kallu ke saath jo bhi kiya 😊😊

Sampada aur atharv kabhi nahi badlenge offo 😈😈..attya tum kab sudhrogi 😡😈bichari hamari kallu ko hurt kar diya mallu console karna chatha tha but vo chali gayi mai aur sab kitne pareshan hai 😭

Mallu ne sabko daant bhi diya apni kallu ki phikar main😆 becahri kalyani itni raat ko kahan kahan bhatak rahi thi uska accident ho gaya 😭

Hope mallu bacha le usein ya phir kuch aur twist hai 😉

Originally posted by: Phlo004

Aww praku kya story hai majja aagaya seriously 🤗❤️matlab suspense drama sab ek saath vo time sachmain acha tha kalyani Malharji ki tareef kar rahi thi pillu se dono ki cute talks pushka bai ne kya idea diya kallu khush ho gayi burger dekhke😃😃 Malharji jo leke aaeyein offo miya biwi ki alag hi baat hai 😳😳mallu ko bura laga usne aajtak kallu ke saath jo bhi kiya 😊😊

Sampada aur atharv kabhi nahi badlenge offo 😈😈..attya tum kab sudhrogi 😡😈bichari hamari kallu ko hurt kar diya mallu console karna chatha tha but vo chali gayi mai aur sab kitne pareshan hai 😭

Mallu ne sabko daant bhi diya apni kallu ki phikar main😆 becahri kalyani itni raat ko kahan kahan bhatak rahi thi uska accident ho gaya 😭

Hope mallu bacha le usein ya phir kuch aur twist hai 😉

Hamare mj hi bachayenge❤️😎

Originally posted by: GAYATHRINAYAR

Omg

Yaar sare writer ko cliffhangers kyom pasand he

Sab aise points mei chapter end kardete he ki humare curiousity bade

And yes be responsible writer jaldi aggli chapter shuru karo

Kallu ko kya huva janna he mujhe

Loved the update keep writing

Thank you gayu I'll try to update soon 😊

CHAPTER - 2

Neha- yaar guys iss jungle wale raste se aane ki kya zarurat thi hum main road le skte the..

Palak- yaar time to dekh 11 baj rhe hai jaldi ss ghar pohonchna hai varna aaj to mom dam ghar m entry hi nhi denge....

Ritwik- tbhi to ye road liya ki jaldi se pohonch jaye meri mom to ghar m ghusne hi nhi dengi....the

The trio laugh on their fun banters....

Palak- yaar gaadi rok dekh koi ady sadak pe behosh padi hai.

Ritwik- haa yaar kon hai ye chal ke dekhte hai...

Neha- haa guys chalo jaldi....

They headed towards the person lying on the road.....

Neha- Oh my god...kallyaani!!!

Riwik- kalyani utho.....kya hua ise....kalyani....kaafi khoon beh gya hai.

Palak- jaldi hospital leke jana hoga kahi der na ho jaye....

Ritwik - haa jaldi chalo.....neha tu malhar sir ko phone kr jaldi...or tum dono mere ghar pr or apne ghar pr phonw krke bta do ki hum teeno hospital m hai....

Neha- haa main jaldi krti hu...ise car m leke chalo guys let's be quick .....we can't be late anymore....

AT AHILYA NIWAS

Anupriya- taai main aapko kabhi maaf nhi krungi..... kalyani ne kbhi esa nhi kiya hai....

Aparna- maai meri baat.....

Malhar- (in a angry voice) bas kriye AATYA or kya safaai dengi aap....bohot galat kiya hai aapne....agar meri patni ko kuch bhi hua to apna boriya bistar baandhkar rakhiyega kyu ki main ek minute bhi nhi lagaunga aapka saamna fekne m....

Aparna- aatya.... Malhar main to tumhari aai hu na....or tum mujhe ghar se nikalne ki baat kr rhe ho .....kya ho gya hai tumhe...

Malhar- AAI.....( sarcastically smiling) aai wale konse kaam kiye hai aapne hmm btaiye....aap kalyani ki aatya hai usi hisaab se aap meri bhi aatya hai samjhi aap.....

Anupriya- malhar ye sb choddo kalyani ka kuch pta chala....???

Malhar- nhi maai mere source pta lagane ki.....his phone ranged ( the call was from neha) ye neha mujhe kyu call kr rhi hai.....

Aausaheb- malhar phone uthao....MALHAR PICKED THE PHONE 📞....

ON THE CALL.

Malhar- hello!!!!

Neha- hello malhar sir main neha.....

Malhar- ha bolo neha kya hua....

Neha- sir kalyani ka accident ho gya hai....kaafi khoon beh gya hai sir....aap please jaldi aa jaiye...hum car m hai....hum ise health care hospital leke ja rhe hai aap bhi please jaldi pohonchiye...

FOR FEW SECONDS MALHAR WAS NUMB.

Neha- hello sir???

Malhar- haa n..neha m..main phoColored Textnch rha hu please uska khyalo rakhna.....

Anupriya- malhar kya hua ...kye keh rhi thi vo??? Btao n chup kyu ho....kaha ja rhe ho

Malhar-( in angry and crying tone looking towards aparna) maai...vo...vo kalyani kz accident ho gya hai hume jana hoga jaldi.....

Anupriya- (started crying ) malhar .....ma..main bhi chalungi...

Aaosaheb- Hum bhi chalenge!!!!...Malhar gaadi nikalo...pallavi tum ruko yahi par goda or nal ke saath .....vivek tum chalo hamare saath...

Pallavi- ho!

EVERYONE EXCEPT SAMTHARVA, APARNA LEFT FOR HOSPITAL...

At hospital

Neha- riwik maine phone kr diya hai vo log aate hi honge....

Palak- par use hua kya ese kaise accident ho gya usko.... I hope bas use kuch n ho....

Ritwik- guys relax.... Doctors use OT m leke gye hai everything will be fine....

Reception.

Everyone reached hospital worrying for kalyani

Malhar- excuse me sister.....kalyani rane....

Nurse- ahhh....let me check..

The trio saw malhar and his family and goes towards them....

Neha- malhar sir...

Malhar- neha...kahan hai Kalyani...kaisi hai thik to hai....kaise mile tum teeno use....

Ritwik- sir relax.....main btata hu aapko sb ...

He narrated whole story to malhar....( Everyone was in tears and cursing aparna for this condition of kalyani )

Malhar- kahan hai vo???

Palak- Operation theatre mein...

( Malhar sided everyone and goes towards OT)....

Anupriya- ( cryingly) bappa please meri bacchhi ko bacha lo use kuch mt hone dena....please....

As- bappa pe bharosa rakho anupriya.....

MALHAR AFTER SEEING KALYANI FELT LIKE SOMEONE HAS TAKEN OUT HIS HEART OUT.....HE FELT IMMENSE PAIN IN HIS HEART.....

Malhar- kalyani!!!!

SO TELL ME HOW WAS IT......WAS SOMETHING MISSING HERE????

WHAT WILL DOCTORS TELL TO MALAHR????

PLEASE GOVE YOUR REVIEWS AND COMMENT HOW WAS IT???

Wow beautifully written excited for next update ❤❤

I know ki ye thoda short hai par ye accidentally post ho gya main ye ending nhi dena chahti thi...par delete ka option show hi nhi ho rha tha

Short but sweet please continue

💗💗💗💗👏👏

It's a very amazing update Prakriti..

Thank god Kalyani was found on time by her friends and they got her admitted into the hospital.

Malhar shouting at Aatya was 👏

Malhar is numbed hearing of her accident.

All family members rushed to hospital...

Kalyani is operation theatre...😭

Hope doc Malhar ko koi shock na de den...ya phir kahin kallu sabko bhool na jaye...

loved the update

Originally posted by: PRAKRITI_12

I know ki ye thoda short hai par ye accidentally post ho gya main ye ending nhi dena chahti thi...par delete ka option show hi nhi ho rha tha

Yeah it won't allow to delete...

waise prakarti ek way out he

you can copy paste the matter and form a draft

and then use edit option and delete whateever u have written and us post pe sirf edited lik rakho bass