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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: sathwi_99

it means anu knows hrishaan is malhar..


Yes. She is the one who helped him.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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thank you your ff is very interesting... I love this whole new thing
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Autumn09


Thank you so very much. I'm glad that you are liking this ff. Btw, what's your name?


My name is Minnie.


Just read chapter 7 now.... Pragya it was mind blowing 👍👍


This story has so many layers to it...and everything's so well intertwined together..


So Anu and Malhar are in cahoots..while Kallu is unaware of everything..


Awww Malhar is so sweet...he is going to protect his damsel in distress then 😅😅


I am glad Vivek got what's coming to him...he is so vile and cruel....this serves him right...


Honestly loved the pace of the story...it hooks the reader in...thank you for writing it so well 👍


I m eagerly awaiting your next update as usual 😋 great going

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kalma18


My name is Minnie.


Just read chapter 7 now.... Pragya it was mind blowing 👍👍


This story has so many layers to it...and everything's so well intertwined together..


So Anu and Malhar are in cahoots..while Kallu is unaware of everything..


Awww Malhar is so sweet...he is going to protect his damsel in distress then 😅😅


I am glad Vivek got what's coming to him...he is so vile and cruel....this serves him right...


Honestly loved the pace of the story...it hooks the reader in...thank you for writing it so well 👍


I m eagerly awaiting your next update as usual 😋 great going


Thank you very much Minnie. Hopefully the story will be wrapped up today in two chapters. Your feedback made the writing feel so joyful.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awesome fanfiction please update more after this fanfiction too

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Posted: 4 years ago
#56

Vivek murdered Shinde.. AS knows it and protected her murderer son. 😡

Atharv and his goons tried to kill Malhar😠

Anu saved Malhar.. ❤️👍🏼

Malhar worked hard to gain a good position in life.. 👍🏼

He promised Anu he would always protect Kalyani.. 👍❤️

Am glad Vivek has been punished.. Now he and AS will know how it is to be punished for a crime that he didn't commit..

Am liking Malhar as Hrishaan. ❤️❤️ Giving back to whoever wronged him and his family.

Awesome update Pragya.. 👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Chapter-8


In Ahilya Niwas, Aau Saheb has called people from orphanage.


"Haan," Aau Saheb says pointing towards Moksh, "Le jao is manhoos ko is ghar se door."


"Ye sab kya hai Aau Saheb?" Anupriya says.


"Tum beech me mat aao Anupriya," Aau Saheb says.


Kalyani comes in front of Pillu with a knife in her hand. "Khabardar kisi ne Pillu ko haath lagaaya to. Main maar doongi."


"Paagal ladki hai kya ye," A person from orphanage steps towards Pillu. Kalyani swings the knife at him, slashing his arm a little.


"Bhaago, ghar nahin paagalkhana hai ye." People from orphanage start running.


Aau Saheb runs after them, "Are ruko to."


Aau Saheb comes back and tries to slap Kalyani saying, "Kalyani tum..." But Anupriya holds Aau Saheb's hand.


"Anupriya tumhari itni himmat," Aau saheb says.


"Apni beti ke liye main aapka haath to kya bade se badi museebat rok sakti hoon," Anupriya says. Aau Saheb makes a face and goes away.


Kalyani with Pillu in her hand rests her head on Anupriya's shoulder, "Aai isme meri kya galti hai ki mujhe Pillu apna sa lagta hai. Aisa lagta hai koi Raabta hai hamare beech."


Anupriya pats Kalyani's head and says,. "Dil ka Raabta aise hi hota hai."


"Party?" Pallavi's voice booms, "Mere Pati jail me hai aur tumhe party karni hai."


"Isiliye to maine party rakhi hai," Hrishaan says, "Just joking Pallavi ji."


After some hours, Kalyani in a red dress, "Aai mera mann bilkul nahi tha party attend karne ka."


Anupriya says, "Hamare ghar se koi party me nahin aaya. Tum bhi attend nahin karogi to Hrishaan ko bura lagega."


Meanwhile, Sampada is tracing Hrishaan's face with her nail, "Hot to kaafi ho tum aur rich bhi. Mera haath thaam lo, life set ho jayegi."


Hrishaan says, holding Sampada's hands, coming near her, "Sampada, maine apni poori life mein tumhare jaisa khoobsurat..."


Sampada says, "Khoobsurat...aage bolo."


Hrishaan says, "Maine apni poori life me tumhare jaisa khoobsurat kachra nahi dekha."


Kalyaani makes entry and Hrishaan is mesmerized. He comes towards her and extends her hand saying, "Shall we?"


Kalyani takes his hand and the song Dekha Hazaaron dafaa starts playing. They both are lost in each other's eyes when they hear Anupriya's scream.


They both run towards Anupriya.


Anupriya says, "Atharv ne Moksh ko kidnap kar liya hai"and hands a letter to Hrishaan. In the letter it's written, Mujhe pata hai ki tu koi Hrishaan Malhotra nahi Malhar Rane hai aur Vivek ke saath jo hua uske peeche tu hi hai. Par main Vivek nahin hoon. Dam hai to bacha le apne bete ko. Puraane taalab ke paas hoon main."


Kalyani, Anupriya and Hrishaan reach the taalaab. Atharv attacks from behind but Hrishaan is alert beforehand. He turns and punches Atharv's face.


"Peeche se vaar karne ki aadat gayi nahi tumhari," Malhar after punching him many times holds Atharv's face and says, "Bol Bapat ka baap kon, Malhar Rane."


Kalyani gasps, "Malhar ji."


Meanwhile they hear Sampada's voice, "Agar Atharv ko chua to main Moksh ko neeche taalab me fenk doongi."


Kalyani comes towards Sampada, "Main tumhare paanv parti hoon Sampada aisa mat karna."Kalyani takes her hairpin and pushes it on Sampada's foot. Sampada cries in pain, and taking its advantage, Anupriya takes Moksh from her.


Meanwhile Atharv is running, but Malhar blocks his way, "Itni bhi kya jaldi hai Atharv." And he plays a tape in which Atharv is confessing to have killed Swara and disguising it as suicide.


Flashback: A girl with whom Atharv is flirting spikes Atharv's drink in Hrishaan's party and Atharv in its effect confesses everything.


"Par main yahaan police ko nahin bulaoonga," Hrishaan strangles Atharv and hangs his body on a tree making it seem as a suicide.


"Malharji," Kalyani comes and hugs Hrishaan. Anupriya gives Moksh to Malhaar and he kisses him on head saying, "Mera beta." And Moksh makes the sound Ma and holds Kalyani's finger.


The End.


This fanfic ends here. I hope you enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed writing it. Please let me know what you think of this FF.

Edited by Autumn09 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Vivek murdered Shinde.. AS knows it and protected her murderer son. 😡

Atharv and his goons tried to kill Malhar😠

Anu saved Malhar.. ❤️👍🏼

Malhar worked hard to gain a good position in life.. 👍🏼

He promised Anu he would always protect Kalyani.. 👍❤️

Am glad Vivek has been punished.. Now he and AS will know how it is to be punished for a crime that he didn't commit..

Am liking Malhar as Hrishaan. ❤️❤️ Giving back to whoever wronged him and his family.

Awesome update Pragya.. 👍🏼


Thanks a lot Rekha.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hey ,

Amazing update pragya ..

You have wrapped up the story so well ❤️

thoroughly enjoyed reading every bit of it ..😊

will be waiting for you to write more ❤️❤️

Edited by hapakalanoodles - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: hapakalanoodles

Hey ,

Amazing update pragya ..

You have wrapped up the story so well ❤️

thoroughly enjoyed reading every bit of it ..😊

will be waiting for you to write more ❤️❤️


Thank you so so much. This was my first fanfic and I couldn't have written it if it were not for encouragement from the forum members.

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