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Posted: 4 years ago
#31

Read chapter 2,3 and 4 in a go and I loved them all ❤️

This FF is something new and I really like the way it's going

You're doing a great job Pragya 👍🏼

Keep writing 😃

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Posted: 4 years ago
#32

amazing update

read all parts in 1 go ..

excited for the upcoming updates

keep it up ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Chapter-5


Hrishaan after seeing Kalyani slowly cups Sampada's face and shuts her mouth and says in a lazy tone, "Sweetheart tumhe dekhkar aisa kyun lag raha hai jaise tumne koi bhoot dekh liya hai."


"Ye nahi ho sakta," Sampada steps back, "ye nahi ho sakta." And Sampada stumbles over a chair.


"Dhyan se," Hrishaan says, "Kahin lagi to nahi aapko?"


Sampada runs away.


Hrishaan's monologue, "Abhi to mere badle ki sirf ye first installment hai. Jo jo dard tumne meri behen, mere bete aur mujhe diye hain Deshmukh parivar ke har sadasya ko uski byaaj sahit keemat chukaani hogi."


Meanwhile, as Kalyani returns from her graduation ceremony, she doesn't see anyone at the house.


"Aai!" She calls.


"Maai aau Saheb ke saath bahar gayi hui hai," Atharv says, "Kalyani ab to tum graduate ho gayi ho and hamari engagement ko bhi teen mahine ho gaye hain." Atharv starts coming closer to Kalyani. Kalyani steps back.


Flashback: Six months ago, Kalyani went to jail at Atul's birthday. She says today's your birthday. Ask for any gift you want. Atul asks her to get married. Kalyani says but papa. Atul says I can ask for anything.


A boy's family visits to see Kalyani. Moksh starts crying. The boy asks who is the baby? Kalyani says Moksh will live with her wherever she goes. The family makes faces.


Kalyani in present day thinks only Atharv was the one who accepted Moksh with me but why I'm so uncomfortable when he comes near me.


Moksh starts crying.


"Lagta hai Moksh ki neend khul gayi," Kalyani runs away.


"Kalyani, suno to,"Atharv calls.


When Kalyani reaches her room, she sees Moksh smiling in Hrishaan's arm.


"Moksh ko jhoola jhoolna hai? Jhoola jhoolega Moksh?," Hrishaan swings Moksh. Kalyani says Sambhaalkar. Hrishaan looks at her and smiles. Kalyani too smiles. Kuch to hai tujhse Raabta song starts playing in the background as Moksh holds Kalyani's finger and both Hrishaan and Kalyani's hands brush.

Edited by Autumn09 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: arsh_7

Read chapter 2,3 and 4 in a go and I loved them all ❤️

This FF is something new and I really like the way it's going

You're doing a great job Pragya 👍🏼

Keep writing 😃


Thanks a lot, Noor. 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
#35

Pragya, chapter 5 was so beautiful and emotional 🤗


Aaarrgg!! So Atul is the reason behind this engagement...poor Kalyani is stuck between a rock and a hard place...


Malhar is going to put every one in their rightful place 😅 and with style 😝 I love it...


It was great update 😊 and love to read it all day...it's a fresh concept and it's beautifully portrayed...great job girl 💐


I wanna read more and look forward to your next update 😃

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Posted: 4 years ago
#36

Wow amazing update you are as fast as a bullet train . Waiting for your next update ♥️♥️♥️♥️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#37

Atul 😡

Poor Kalyani,she's stuck in a relationship which she doesn't even want 😒

So Hrishaan is Malhar and he's back to avenge his sister's death

Atharv is disgusting 🤢

Aww, the KalMaKsh moment at the end ❤️

Looking forward to your next update

Edited by arsh_7 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Kalma18

Pragya, chapter 5 was so beautiful and emotional 🤗


Aaarrgg!! So Atul is the reason behind this engagement...poor Kalyani is stuck between a rock and a hard place...


Malhar is going to put every one in their rightful place 😅 and with style 😝 I love it...


It was great update 😊 and love to read it all day...it's a fresh concept and it's beautifully portrayed...great job girl 💐


I wanna read more and look forward to your next update 😃


Thank you so so much.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Blackqueen

Wow amazing update you are as fast as a bullet train . Waiting for your next update ♥️♥️♥️♥️


Thank you ❣️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: arsh_7

Atul 😡

Poor Kalyani,she's stuck in a relationship which she doesn't even want 😒

So Hrishaan is Malhar and he's back to avenge his sister's death

Atharv is disgusting 🤢

Aww, the KalMaKsh moment at the end ❤️

Looking forward to your next update


Thank you.

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