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Originally posted by: Kalma007

This is the first time the roles are reversed and Kalyani is being the one acting in such a way... but I think if we look back at all she has taken from him without complaining,everything she has suffered at his hands without being to blame for what he angry for, if we consider the times he has not trusted her... then her behavior doesn't seem that bad compared to that of Malhar himself in the past or other characters.

She is acting this way out of hurt because it's not the first time her feelings have been hurt by him and right now she's not in her right mind.

Also,I am watching old episodes lately, and I think her attachment to Pillu has something to do also with the way both Malhar and Aparna used to taunt her about not knowing anything about children's upbringing, being bearer of bad luck, questioning whether she even cared about the kid during the Keshav story and suspecting her of knowing his truth and having chosen Anu over Moksh.

Subconsciously,she may have become extra protective about Pillu because,thou she's not his bio mother,she loves him like her own and doesn't want anyone to ever doubt that.

You are absolutely correct. She does feel the need to overcompensate because she is not Pillu's biological mother.

Her anger now at Malhar is pent up angry from all those times she never expressed it. These things when they are bottled up for so long have weird ways of coming out because internally the resentment is still there. This is the final phase in the love story. When they re out of this and get remarried with mutual consent and love, it will be a new phase in their relationship, no guilt or resentment or anything else.

Originally posted by: sas79

You are absolutely correct. She does feel the need to overcompensate because she is not Pillu's biological mother.

Her anger now at Malhar is pent up angry from all those times she never expressed it. These things when they are bottled up for so long have weird ways of coming out because internally the resentment is still there. This is the final phase in the love story. When they re out of this and get remarried with mutual consent and love, it will be a new phase in their relationship, no guilt or resentment or anything else.

Actually none of the twò can b blamed . Both have gone through extreme emotional situations . And those extremity had made them to fall for each other. But they never get the time to explore it . Kuch na kuch aa hi jata hai dono ki darmiyan.

Originally posted by: pyaar2012

Exactly .The fear of losing moksh, the pain and the trauma of the abortion , the whole blackmailing Nd kidnapping drama , and the bottled up anguish Nd pain she had bear is coming out.

Actually none of the twò can b blamed . Both have gone through extreme emotional situations . And those extremity had made them to fall for each other. But they never get the time to explore it . Kuch na kuch aa hi jata hai dono ki darmiyan.

guyz we are here for ideas , our mainplot is ready ... neera ne bheja hai ,we need ideas for subplot .just write in details what is in ur mind !! i am sending the mainplot just need subplot ideas ....

Main plot -neera \vermilion

Kalyani is simple college going girl. She had a crush over her senior malhar. Malhar is the son of a automobiles business owner. They were quite rich. Malhar was mostly away from the girls and immersed in studies and games. After graduating from college, his grandfather was critical and he had to marry someone for his grandfather last wish . By chance matchmaker woman shows Kalyani photo for wedding candidates among other photos. He remembered her as her junior girl who was pretty nerdy type and topper of her batch. He assumed her to be simple girl who will marry her and take care of his family and nothing else. On a college reunion after six months of college, malhar proposed Kalyani out of the blue. Kalyani was flattered already from proposal of her crush. She accepted to be his gf. Malhar agreed Kalyani to marry her in next month by pointing out his 6 month trips to London. She was just very much impressed and flattered that she agreed to everything.

Kalyani was 19 or 20 ( child prodigy) . Malhar was 24 or 25 . Kalyani was in her teenage and knows nothing about actual love and importance of career. They married and Kalyani become just a lady of house. She left her studies and just became a couch potato. She don't know anything about house chores as there maid in their homes. She become plump up.

There was no love between them but their sexual life is active. For Kalyani, sex with malhar and gift from him are love. For malhar Kalyani was just a bait for his parents and someone who fulfil his sexual needs. Malhar always choose work over her.

Kalyani was in infatuation with him only . After 3 yrs of marriage Kalyani realized that she is not doing anything with her life. She studied and graduated. They fought a lot because Kalyani his behavior towards her. That was so rude and disrespectful. She wanted love from his side also. But malhar was actually thought he was giving everything to her she needs. But their was lack of communication between them.

One day when she couldn't keep amount of anxiety within her she left him and flew to Italy.

Malhar never divorce her really but never tried to search her either. Slowly he recognized her value in his life. The way he killed her expectations .

He became lean .

Kalyani became a fit model in Italy. After some years Kalyani was approached by a automobiles company to be their brand ambassador. Her assistant agreed. This company was of malhar. He doesn't know about her. Basically advertisement department of company approached her. They met. They fought . Love blossomed . They forgive each other . They remained forever together.

I know this is cliche and cringe. But if you like it you can continue this. I mean elaborate the story on your will. Everyone can write Kalyani college crush life, malhar perfection, his love for work, their party, Kalyani feelings in starting, Kalyani dilemma, after divorce dilemma of both, how they felt when they first met, confusion, then overpowering feelings, marriage, kids, some mature enough scenes. Take scenes slow If you do. I think this story can be continued for 70-80 parts I think.

Originally posted by: pyaar2012

guyz we are here for ideas , our mainplot is ready ... neera ne bheja hai ,we need ideas for subplot .just write in details what is in ur mind !! i am sending the mainplot just need subplot ideas ....

Maybe the story can start at the point when Kalyani leaves him.

Both can reminisce how their marriage happened and why they reached this point. Both can think about their own reasons for their marriage and were they right or wrong.

Later part Kalyani is unknowingly signed up as the ambassador of the company and they meet again... How they fall in love..

This is just my idea. Others please give your opinions.

i was thinking in the same way.

Originally posted by: pyaar2012

i was thinking in the same way.

Kalyani says I can't be in this relationship anymore as I am nothing, no love, no respect. I don't have an identity.

Malhar being insensitive says, being my wife and being a member of our family itself is an identity.

They argue more, Kalyani feels hurt and she leaves.

Malhar refuses to give divorce.

What's the title for this story

I think neera aisa boli thi ki woh bina bole chali jayegi suddenly. So can we keep it like that?

lets go to open story. Yaha koi hai hi nhi.